Manan ff-YAARIYAN(coninue from the show)(Thread 2 link page 1) updated

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ankita_t

@ankita_t

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Posted: 9 years ago

#421

Hi,

Sorry for being late... Ok coming to the chapter the pool party was awesome and that reminds me i haven't been to one yet in my life...strange right... well i think it must be as fun as you had described.

The couple so madly in love and Manik's jealousy was the icing on the cake...😉...

Well, let's see what happens next and i am eagerly waiting for your next chapter... You are really growing as a writer and that brings a smile on my face.

Take care.

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nirvisha

@nirvisha

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Posted: 9 years ago

#422

Originally posted by: ankita_t
Hi,

Sorry for being late... Ok coming to the chapter the pool party was awesome and that reminds me i haven't been to one yet in my life...strange right... well i think it must be as fun as you had described.

The couple so madly in love and Manik's jealousy was the icing on the cake...😉...

Well, let's see what happens next and i am eagerly waiting for your next chapter... You are really growing as a writer and that brings a smile on my face.

Take care.

😊
Thank you so much dear. ..
Thank a tone.. .

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Swagatika

@sws2

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Posted: 9 years ago

#423

Loved jealous Manik

Nice update

Thanks for pm

😊

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analaxmi23

@analaxmi23

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Posted: 9 years ago

#424

Awesome update dear

nandu is soo caring about manik

and manik is soo possessive about nandu

they are made for each other

love them soo much

plz continu soon

take care

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geethgeethu

@geethgeethu

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Posted: 9 years ago

#425

Yaaar, superb update...awesome...pls continue soon

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Swikriti

@Suku111

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Posted: 9 years ago

#426

Awesome update. Loved it. Continue soon.

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Kaanika

@Kaanika

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Posted: 9 years ago

#427

Thanks for updating..

The update was superb...

To start from caring nandini she iss soo cute...

Pool party was awesome..

Jealous manik is a treat to watch..

Cavya cute nok jhok is back...

Manan kiss was lovely..

Manik is soo possesive for nandini..

Really enjoyed it keep it up..

Well done..

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nandininiti

@nandininiti

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Posted: 9 years ago

#428

update was fab dear
loved to see possessive and jealous manik
he just can't bear anyone's hand or anyone near nandu
kiss was too good
cavya's bickering and abeer laughing at them
bechara aryamann
update soon