Manan SS||kisses and Melted chocolates|| NOTE- PAGE 43 - Page 9

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Posted: 9 years ago
#81
It is an amazng story with a different concept
I just luv ur writing coz write about the reality
Thnku for such a wonderful story
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Posted: 9 years ago
#82
Beautiful..I'm in tears reading this..the way nandini made her understand while playing her childhood videos she is a sensible and caring mother and muskaan is a good kid it's just the teenage phase and maybe influence of some bad company...love the gift she gave her dad a box full of kisses and the reaction of her parents...this is the most touching moment for me and I'm emotional while typing this comment too...can't express enough how amazing this is and misha dear love you loads for penning such a wonderful story...loved how manik kept muskaans gift with him all along I know the next chapter will be more beautiful and more emotional and heartwarming and am so looking forward to read it please continue soon and a big thanku for the pm..keep smiling :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
#83

Originally posted by: piyu008

Hey it was so beautiful. .I don't have any words to express that..really..

You made me cry..its good that right now m home unless I could have cried whole day..
True it is parents are most important in our life. Especially dad ...he be the only man on planet earth who would love us purely and without any expectations. .so pure their love is for us..
I live outside. .away from my parents. .I would say far away..I know how it feels ..how much you miss them ..
Talking about the times when you are in trouble. .the only person you can rely on are they..our parents.
They havr done so many sacrifice for us..thet didn't fulfilled their dreams bcoz they started living dreams in ours..so selfless they are..
Thank you so much for writing such a beautiful story..m truly touched. .
Keep writing another like this..

Stay blessed,
Aditi.



Yes indeed you are absolutely right!
I too love away from dad and i just shifted back to him a month ago! So it feels good to see tw first thing in morning an last thing before i sleep!!!
Dad is the furst and the most loyal bestfriend who cj sacrifice evn himself for you!!
Never let tgat bestfreind go awayy!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#84
Speechless.. There are many scenes which really touched my heart.. Especially the gift scene.. Penned it so beautifully..
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Posted: 9 years ago
#85
Awesome!!!
Omg...am speechless and can't stop crying😭
My dad has always been a very quiet kind of person he would not come to me and ask me how was my day but he knew every single thing I was doing. He fulfilled all my wishes even before I could ask for it. I think I realised the depth of his love for me on my wedding day. He hugged me so tight and told me you are the best daughter anyone can have and the house is gonna be empty without you. Both of cried and cried and cried finally we had to be separated by my mom. After reading your update I picked up my phone and called him just to say I love you daddy!!!! Tq so much mishy dear for this amazingly beautiful story. Love you lots. Take care and always keep smiling😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
#86
res
unres baad mein...

unres

dekho...kinni jaldi aagayi mein...haina...hehe..

mishu jii...kya contract liye hain aap...to make us cry😭...this update was like hell full of emotions...
and it was like...more than freakin awesome...i bet...those who aren't reading dis...are really missing something too good...

the memories...the way nandu manao-fied muskaan...

aww...manik named her muskaan...and used to call her smile...
the kisses wala...u again made me cry so much...
hehe...and the rules...muaaahhh...

i now understood...wat box manik carried...

thank u thank u thank u so so so so much...for this wonderful writing...

dadda's are supel heloes...and i just my dadda shooo much...
though am ditto copy of him...bt its like very rare...of me to express my love for him...
(iss mein bhi i have gone on him only...we both suck at showing emotions...hehe...)

ab main aur ni likh sakti...varna i'll start cying again...

loved it sooo much

continue jaldi...

waiting


LOVE
SANJANA
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Posted: 9 years ago
#87

Originally posted by: tas456

Awesome!!!

Omg...am speechless and can't stop crying😭
My dad has always been a very quiet kind of person he would not come to me and ask me how was my day but he knew every single thing I was doing. He fulfilled all my wishes even before I could ask for it. I think I realised the depth of his love for me on my wedding day. He hugged me so tight and told me you are the best daughter anyone can have and the house is gonna be empty without you. Both of cried and cried and cried finally we had to be separated by my mom. After reading your update I picked up my phone and called him just to say I love you daddy!!!! Tq so much mishy dear for this amazingly beautiful story. Love you lots. Take care and always keep smiling😃



Awww di you are sooo lucky to have a dad like him!!! Thats sooo sweet of you to do!!!
You made your dads day by calling him today!!
Stay blessed di and mqy you be a perfect mom for your kids!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#88
I had tears in my eyes while reading this... I was going back my childhood memories... after growing up (I'm also teenager) distance between me & my papa was day by day growing a lot... he was always busy with work... I miss my papa a lot... seriously this story is one of the finest story ever... thanks...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#89
This timr i dont have words to describe..
I was literally finding words to make a sentence as that is also brcoming difficult for..
Such topic r something which always left me wid no words..
My father was not at all expressive..he rarely used to spend some quality time wid me..if i say rarely that means actually rarely..
I used to miss that time but nevermind i have learnt to live like this...
Amazing...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#90
M sorry.. m sorry... m sorry... m sorry... m really really sorry...
I jst read it now. ...
phle wala update pta nhi kaise reh gya... isliye comment bhi nhi kiya... sorry...
But u to always havr to surprise me with all d amazing stories of yours..
it was soo soo thoughtfull of uh yo write on such a storyline...

and I would personally say that this is first ever update jisme bilkul bhi manan nhi tha phir bhi I liked it to d moon n back...
it was soo special...
Bieng a 16 I somewhere relate more to d story...
and with this my respect for my dad has reached on f highest... seriously. ...
d moments which uh described were soo soo special... I am also gonna ask momma and dadda for these moments in my life...
and that box full of thousand kisses was soo sweet... tears of joy is what I am experiencing at the moment after reading this. ...
and manik keeping his promise... awww...
I jst wanna meet and hug uh really tight for such an amazing and different story...

and yaah... I am waiting for d update of TURN D NIGHT UP..
Plzz jaldi update kar yaar...
keep writing. ...
continue soon...
thnk uh soo mch fr d pm...
AVNEET... (AVI...)

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