MANAN TS : YAHIN HOON MAIN CH 5 PG 88 EPILOGUE PG 98 - Page 67

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Posted: 9 years ago
why not?
update k liye toh kabhi na nahi...
but why chotu sa...?? 😔
give big one if possible... heheehee
Edited by sneha_glamarous - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Amazing update...
Loved it to the core...
Very well written...
Cont soon...

LOVE,
AAROHI...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Thora romance tooo banta thaa naaa they r long lost soul
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Posted: 9 years ago
This story was way too good dear..awesome..
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Posted: 9 years ago
I found this story today..read all the parts in onego and loved it completely...awesome story and beautifully penned :)
Wanted to read a little more of their story with some happiness around them..so ya will be waiting eagerly for the epilogue..please update soon :)
Edited by Kuushi - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
chlegaaa niii dodegaaa yrrr...;)
yeh bh koi puchne ki bt haiii...:D
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awsum ... luved it
.yaah epilogue would be cherry on d cake.. plzz give it..
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome updaye dii...
At last Manik is back to his Nandini...
Manik has faced soomuch in 5 years..that's so sad..
And their haapiness is overwhelming...
Loved it so much...

Take care...😊
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Posted: 9 years ago

So guys , this journey has been an emotional one.To compensate the tears that you all have shed , here I bring in this chhotu sa epilogue , which is supposedly a humorous one.Hope you guys enjoy it.Do drop in your feedback pls.

EPILOGUE

9 YEARS LATER

Papa and mumma got married the very next day after the arrival of papa.A few days after that three of us went for a vacation to Goa.I was very small at that time so no one told me but now I know that the Goa vacation was actually Mumma Papa's honeymoon and I ...I was actually gooseberry in it.But should tell you guys one thing clearly , I wasn't a gooseberry {winks} because exactly after 9 months of our Goa vacation , we were blessed with a new member in our family...my baby brother. And since then there has been no looking back.

Since then , every 2 years we go for a vacation to Goa and hence I have 3 more brothers.{sighs}.Means I have 4 siblings in all.And your calculation is absolutely correct..Mumma papa have 5 children in all .

So everytime we come back from Goa , mumma gets pregnant.Papa and his sp**ms{huh}.You must be amazed at me using such a word naa...but C'mon guys its 21st century and I am a teenager afterall.Yes I turned 14 last week itself and I have read everything in my Bilogy book.

Anyhow , after a lot of nagging , finally papa is taking us on another vacation to Goa obviously. But now am not scared of the consequences because this time papa did the work in Mumbai itself.Yes your guess is absolutely correct , mumma is preggy again and this time Papa and mumma are cent percent sure that its a baby girl.They are too excited for the arrival of their princess whose arrival is expected 3 months later.

So we have a flight to catch in the evening , lets see what papa mumma and my younger brothers are upto.Follow me{winks}

Mumma is busy packing our stuff.Lets talk to her.

"Mumma have you kept my 'HARDY BOYS'.I am reminding you again...But still am sure you gonna forget it"

"Manan, you are 14 years old.can't you even keep your story books by yourself" Mumma snapped " Why are you guys dependent on me for everything?"

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See this is how mumma is.She gets furious without a reason.Navya massi says that these mood swings are due to pregnancy hormones afterall Mumma gets pregnant every alternate year.All thanks to papa and his s...{shhh}

"Manan what are you doing...Go and take care of Dhruv . I am busy with the packing and papa is preparing lunch.Go fast , he must be busy with his naughty acts in the garden"

Huh ..Dhruv , my youngest brother .He is almost 22 months old .Most of the times when I am home , I am given the responsibility to look after him and I HATE THAT. Actually its not that I hate my sibling but he is really naughty one .Lets see what he is doing in the garden.

"Dhruv...no.Dont do this !"

"Biya [Bhaiya] Shabul tod di, shabul tod di [ flower tod di]"

"Dhruv its not shabul , its flower. And we shouldn't pluck flowers baby.See they look so beautiful naa.Come I'll take you to papa"

When mumma is busy with other chores papa loves to cook for us. Lets go to papa and see what he is cooking .{ummm] I can smell something really nice.

"Papa..papa" Dhruv jumped into papa's arms. All of us love our papa a lot.Unlike mumma,he is very calm most of the times.He never scolds us.Infact mumma says that he is spoiling his sons.But i dont think so.

"Papa, what is the menu for lunch?"

"Lunch is gonna be something fantabulously fantastic my son.I am baking kebabs and cheese teeka"

"papa you shouldn't have taken this panga today.You know baking takes a lot of time...What if we missed our flight!"

"Arrey flight kyu miss hogi...It wont"He winked

"Manik , where are you? Pls change Dhruv's diaper!"

"Baby yahin hoon main...abhi change karta hu"

Papa has gone.This is the story of our house.Now that mumma is preggy , papa takes extra care of her. Mumma commands papa to do all the other things most of the times which papa dutifully obeys.Papa mumma love each other a lot.

Abhi has come back from play school.Oops I forgot to introduce him.Abhimanyu is my brother too, older than Dhruv .He is 3 n half years old.He goes to play school and comes back a little earlier than others..He doesn't speak much but he loves to play games on my tablet.

"Hi Abhi , how was your school today?"

"Achha nahi tha" He replied and trailed off towards his room

You must be thinking why didn't I go to school today, actually I took a leave as I am very excited for the vacation.I lied to mumma that I will help her with packing if she allows me to take a leave and she agreed! Oops its time to pick my other two younger brothers from the bus stop...the naughtiest ones.

"Cabir...Harshad...Stop fighting.Tum log kabhi ladai karni band nahi karoge naa"

"Manan bhiya , isne mera lollypop le liya" Hashad said

"Ye jhooth bol raha hai Manan bhaiya" Cabir looked at me " Ye lollypop mera hi tha"

"Agar tum ladai band nahi karoge to Aaj Navya massi se tum dono ki shikayat karunga...only she knows how to bring you guys on track"

"No no Manan bhaiya" Both of them held their ears "Pls dont tell anything navya massi"

I dont know why but both of them always get panicked hearing Navya massi's name.Navya massi holds the key to all their tantrums{Winks}

"Ok I wont, lets go inside and get ready .Shit , only 2 hours left for our flight.Mummaa..."

As expected there was a lot of chaos in the house .Dhruv , Abhimanyu , Harshad and Cabir were making a lot of noise as papa was running behind them to change their clothes and now mumma was looking after the lunch.

"Manik , Dhruv ko yellow shirt pehna do"

"Ok baby"

"manik , Make Cabir wear his brown shoes"

"Sure baby"

"Aur Abhimanyu ke specktacles study me rakhe hain"

"Got it baby"

"Manik ...Harshad would look nice in his blue jacket naa.Its lying in his closet"

"As you say baby"

"Manik...Manan ki HARDY BOYS' bag mein rakh lena pls.I forgot"

There was no reply from papa this time.Actually he had gone to bring in Harshad's jacket.

"Manik...Manik" Mumma got hysterical as Papa didn't reply " Manik..kahan ho tum?"

"YAHIN HOON MAIN...KAHIN NAA GYA TUJHE CHHOD KE MAIN"Papa replied and mumma heaved a sigh of relief.

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So this is the story of my family...the story of a couple who are too much in LOVE. Indeed their love was so strong that it brought back papa from the dead.I so wish that one day I too get a soulmate like this.Till then YAHIN HOON MAIN'{winks}

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Posted: 9 years ago
Ohhh such a beautiful update...
Manan nd manik cute moments...
Wen manik back nandini's priceless expressions...

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