Originally posted by: _Myrah_
Arrey yeh kya main toh 10 mins bol kar gayi thi bt kuch zadaa hi waqt lag gaya.. Actually aaj kaa episode dekhne baith gayi thi. It was damn funny.. Their om waalaa fight.. Haha .. Manik ney uss yogaa teacher ko vagaa daalaa.. Arrey yeh kya main comment karne aai thi aur epi discussion par lag gayi... Meraa kya hogaa yaar..??. Sholly...
So finally m here to comment for chp 3-4 .. Dono chp were amazing.. I jst loved them...
Chalo then m done commenting...
#okay thanks bye...
Haha don't kill me for this... I knw meri old trick bt mujhe aise chidhaanaa acchaa lagtaa hain.. So here u go wid my comments..
Chp-3
It was superb...
Subah subah hi mom-daughter ki behes suru..
Yeh nyo.. Evil kahiki.. She called her frnd n dhruv for dinner.. Huh.. Nandu ka plan kaa kyaa.. Chalo koi ni agar nandu ne ek baari jo commitment kardi toh woh apni aapki vi nahi sunti... If she hd planned night out wid manik toh ussey nyonika kyaa uski naani vi nahi rok sakti...
So finally that alien n her mom came..
She asked nandu to sit beside her"nandu betaa idhar aao" huh.. She was telling as if ristaa pakka karne aai ho.. N asking the grl to sit beside her.. Aur upar se woh alien he passed a smile toh her.. Iski toh main...!!
Haww super idea. Saachi nandu ki ideas ki toh daat deni padegi... Finally nandu escaped frm there..
Hayee she escaped frm the window.. Bechaari dosti yaari mey kya kya karnaa padtaa hain..
Manik is so caring.. He asked her for the reason behind pulling such stunt...
Waah ice cream waale vaiyaa kya DUA ki.. Ur wishes.. By god" "Ap dono ki jori hamesha aisei he salamt rhei or upper wala apko is se ziada pyiar kerna naseeb kerei..or apko piarei piarei bachei bhi dei..orr"
Meri taraf se aake liye ek jaadu ki jhappi for this wish..!!
Song u used was amazing.. Aa raat bhar.. One of my fav... I really loved this song ...
Aww dono talli hogaye.. Ab toh aur mazaa aayegaa...
Talli hokar bechaare foot path par hi baith gaye..
Their talks were really damn cute... Manik ko vi dhruv pasand nahi coz nandu ko woh pasand nahi.. Aww cho cute...
Haha bhaagne waali discussion.. Accha hi hain tum log vaag jaao idhar se.. Sabse dur par haa uss topiwaala alien k planet par mat jaanaa..
Thoda romance suru... Yipee..!!
N kiss... Hui yaa nahi... Wait let me read chp 4...( waisey mainey toh padhli hain bas yuhi likh diyaa thodaa bohot dialogue maarne k liye)
Ab chp-4...
Yeh lo ji.. Meri tarafse do teen tamaatar aur chhappl khaao.. Kiss miss karaadiyaa tum logo ney... Tum logo ki toh main... Khair iss baari chod diyaa as i want them to kiss in their sense ...agli baar i want a passionate kiss..😉
Hayee nandu madam ki orders.. Like uthaa k lechalo.. Becharaa manik... Ussney uthayaa.. So caring...
So they slept in the car .. Nandu slept in his lap.. So cute... Hayee apne loved one ki lap mey soney ki feeling.. It is damn awesome...
Bday night khatam... Subah hogayi...
He took her his apartment n jab she woke up woh chup chaap chali gayi.. Khair thik hain.. Manik understand...
Iss nyo ki naa sacchi kuch naa kuch karnaa hi padegaa.. Snehaa di ko bol kar issey naa maddy ke GD ke saath date par vijwaa dena padegaa..
She is so evil...
Ab yeh pics kidhar sey aagayi... M sure yeh naa iss nyo ki hi kaam hain.. Aur kar vi kaun saktaa hain..
Manik also came there to return cell phn to nandini par bechaari ko 440 volt kaa shock lag gaya seeing those pics...
Roma aur dhruv vi aagaye.. Inki hi kami thi... Huh..!!
Aur aatey hi yeh gandi si roma aunty ne apni gandi si bakwaas suru kardiyaa..
Poor nandu her dad also didn't trust her.. Bechaari ko ghar se nikaal diyaa.. Ek tarahse accha hi hua now she can live in manik's house...
Hmm so iss alien ko vi dialogue mil hi gayaa.. Warnaa chup chaap khadaa thaa.. Bt he was good being silent.. Muh kholtey hi bakwaas niklaa...
Matlab... Manik... Bad choice... You could have spent the night with me..." Druv said in his notorious voice
How dare he speak such words...
Accha hua manik punched him warnaa mey khud hi tum logo ki story mey ghus kar issey 2-3 lagaa deti...
Pheww finally done yaar...
Lagtaa hain story ki update likhne baith gayi thi.. Itni lambi.. Itni lambi comment to aaj tak nahi kiyaa thaa.. Lagtaa hain kisi din Guinness world record banaaungi for lambaa waalaa comments...😆
Chalo ab bak bak khatam warnaa some one will think ki yeh itnaa lambaa kya hain kahi update toh nahi n they will read so issey pehle they misunderstood bye...