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Posted: 9 years ago
Sry for late comment..
She Finally confessed..
Manik is very happy..
Thanks for pm..
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Posted: 9 years ago
nice update...
finally, nandini accepted her feelings...
what will happen in next update...
continue soon...
stay blessed...
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Posted: 9 years ago
finally like finally nandu said those three words
oh my god I just cant believe my eyes while reading it
but I am really happy 😃
no matter whatever may be the consequences now manan will fight together
the song selection was just awesome
you have beautifully described both manik and nandini's condition
loved the update to the core
please continue soon
and really sorry for commenting late I am busy with my exams
and thank you for the pm 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
KHAMOSHIYAAN

Happiness.. After ages

PART : 17A

After 2 days

"So finally aaj voh.. din aa.. hi gya jish pal.. ka tha beshbri se.. itezar.. rockstar manik.. ke.. fans.. ko.. aaj.. unki.. engagement.. hai.. finally.. aaj.. ush.. ladhki.. ke chahre se naqab uthrega jishke.. the girl whom our rockstar sing.. toh.. aea.. jante.. hai.. yha.. phr.. fans ka kya.. haal.. hai.. unki.. engagement.. ki.. news ke bad.. specially.. girls fans jo un pr mrti hai.. "Reporter said standing outside of khamoshiyaan studio ,this studio of Manik Mahlotra lots of manik's fan gather outside the studio


" toh.. Lakhiyo.. Kya haal.. Hai.. Aap sab.. Ka.. "One of the reporter asked from one group o girl from the crowd who was setting outside the studio with tissue paper


" why.. Manik.. Why.. U broken.. Our dreams ab hum girls ka kya hoga.. "One girl said dramatically wiping her tear with tissue paper


" we are happy.. That he is marrying with whom he is marrying that girl will be very lucky n we r waiting when that girl name will be disclose "the other girl said


" so.. Basically everyone want to know who is that lucky girl kon hai voh.. Ladhki.. Jisne.. Humhre.. Rockstar ke dil par raaz kar rakha hai "reporter said as today after so many days everyone comes to know the identity of the girl whom he loves more than everything


Murthy Mansion


One girl is setting in front of mirror wearing red dress
,her hair are open covering her whole back . she pick up the earrings


from table by siding her hair put on the earrings &than she put on lipstick n put kajal n eyes shadow on her beautiful eyes . now we can see her beautifull charming face . she is non other than nandini murthy who own the rockstar heart and she wearing her footwear

" god.. Plz. aaj.. Sb.. Thik.. Ho jae.. "Nandini prayed silently closing her eyes n than opening her eyes loss in deep thought


" aah.. Meri.. Beti.. Tyaar.. Bhi.. Hogye.. Bhut sundar lg rhi ho.. Aaj.. Tum.. "Sanjeeta said (nandini's mom) holding her from shoulder n peck her Temple from back n she smiles in response


" meri.. Beti.. Toh.. Har din sundhr lgti.. Hai.. Voh.. Meri.. Rajkumari.."Mr. Murthy said entering in room with smiling face


"Mom.. Dad.. I love.. U.. " nandini said hugging both of them together she feel blessed to have parent like them she is not their real daughter but always they gave more love to her never make her felt like they r not their real parent


"We love u.. Too.. Beta.. " both mr. N mrs. Murthy said together hugging her back n caresses her hair

Sakshi Tanwar as sanjeeta Murthy

Ram Kapoor as Ram Murthy

Mahlotra Mansion


Mahlotra mention husule busule is there one lady of 58 age instructing the servant by pointing her finger she is non other then manik's mom Neyonika Mahlotra.
Kishwar Merchant as Neyonika Mahlotra


"R u sick ... Yha golden curtain lagwane... Hai... Tum kuch kaam ata .. Bhi ya nhi " Neyonika shout angrily on servant & he is standing with down head


" Neyonika ... Relax ... Sab ho jaega..." Mr. Raj mohlotra said holding Neyonika from shoulder & make her sit on couch

Ayub Khan as Raj Mahlotra


" wht Relax .. Yeh servant ... Bhina ... Kuch bole kaam thik se nhi karte ... " she said to raj in argrily way


" Neyonika ...sab... Ho jaega ... Tum itni... Chinta ... Mat karo... Vaise were is our childern khi yha sab hi tyaar honw mein late na ho jae... " he said to calm her down by diverting her mind


"Don't worry about my kids they are now big voh sab... Upar tyaaar ho rhai hai... Tum nhi jante. Raj mein kalse kitni kush hn... Finally Manik ready for the marriage... " neyonika said in relexing way puting her head on raj's shoulder


" i know ... Neyonika tabhi kal subha manik ka phn aate ...hi tum apne sare.. Imp. Meeting cancel karke ... Mujhe ... Kich... Kar pheli... Hi flight se le ae ..." Raj said on fun way. To tease her wife...


"Haan... Toh 2 saal wait kiya ... Toh... Aur... Itzaar... Kaise kar sakti...thi mein..." She said and both smiles... Like a proud parents...


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Posted: 9 years ago
Part : 17B


Manik's Room


Manik comes outside... After taking bath only his down body is covered by towel & sets his hair & spray the perfume ... He pick up the phn & a smile came on his face after seeing his life face tht is nandini as he set the wall paper of her then he ly on bed & dail her no.


" hey chotu... Wht's up..." Manik asked as soon as she picked up the call


" Manik ... Muje bhut dhar lag raha hai sab ... Thil.. Hoga.. Na..." Nandini said as alwayz with tension & Manik make uff... Face


" nandini relax ...acha come on vedio chat " he said setting up on bed & pick up his lappy...


" Manik ... Abhi..." She asked confusingly...


"Haan...abhi.. ..muje dekhna...hai.. Ki meri jaan. Kaisi...lag rhi.. Hai.." Manik said & she smiles on jaaan word...


"Jaaan .. ..stop... Smiling... & jaldi... Se. Chat on karo..." He said and then nandini also pick her lappy


"Manik ... Kapde...pahno... Apne..." She said closing her eyes with her palm as soon as she see.. His Uper body... Naked .. & he smiles on her cute antics...


"Are... Chotu...stop... Shying yr... Jab humhri shadi... Ho jaegi... Kya..tab bhi tum isi... Traha... Sharmogi.. " he said... To tease. .. Here ... & nandini... Smiles on shadhi... Word... & put her palm down... & both look into... Eachother eyes...


" vaise. U r looking like a princess...
Meri princess... "He said still looking deeply in her eyes...


" manik ... Muje... Bhut tension ho rhi ... Hai.. Khi... " she about... Say.. Something... But he.. Cuttec het.. Words


" Nandini... Sirf... Aaaj ki...baat... Hai uske baad. Sab.. Thik ho jaye.ga... Bash... Trust. Our... Love... Trust... Me... Trust..me... Sab Thik hoga... " he said in pleading... Way


" i know nandini tumhri tension lena.. . galat nhi hai... But ... We.. Have to be strong. We will fight back... This... Together " he thinks... In his mind


On other side nandini thinks " trust... Toh . tumpar apne.. Se jadha... Karti.. Par apne... Fate.. Par aaj tak kabhi.. Trust nhi ho paya... "


" acha.. Meri dress choose.. Karvado... ' manik said getting up & she smiles


Than he start showing her some coats.. Trousers & shirts & she select each of them.. .

" vaha... Tumhri... Choice... Ko toh... Mana... Padhega... " manik said proudly. & she smile...


" acha.. Ab... Jaldi.. . change... Karo... Muje.. Bhi... Apne prince ko dekh na hai... " nandini.. Said. Stubornly & than manik close the lappy...


Nandini wait for him & lost in deep thought...


" Nandini ... I am back so... Kaisa... Lag raha.. Tumhra ... Prince ..." He asked after coming back in 5 min but she didn't reached as he loose in her deep though & tear fell down from her eyes & his heart broke down into.. Several pieces after seeing her tear but he compose himself , called her lit bit louder & then she come out of her thought...


" manik ... Tum kab ae... " she said wiping her tear immediately...


" tab jab tum... Apne... Jishe.. Tum sabse.. Jada... Pyaar. Karti hn uske sath busy thi..." Manik said & nandini looked at him confusingly...


" apne ...inhn tears ke sath ... Aur kya... U love them more then me...na..." ... Manik said & nandini looks... Down...


" in ashoo... Se mera aise rishta jodh chuka ... Hai ab mere.. Kahne ... Par bhi nhi tuta..." Nandini said emotionaly

He know... She want to say to him that this tear are in het fate & in this she can't do anything she can't change her fate..


" nandini ... Look at me... & just look into my eyes " he said & she follow him


" sab thik hoga. Believe ...me... Aur dekhe aaj ke bad ... I break your all relationship.. With yr tear... & tension.." He said


" i know... " she said blink her eyes...


" acha.. Ab ek pyaari... Smile toh de doh. Aur kitna... Tadh paogi.. Apne ... Iss.. Deewane ko" he said in fun way to change the atmosphere...


" manik ... U na... Humshe...se aise... Hi hn" nandini said... Smilingly...


" kaisa hoon... " manik asked teasingly...


"Humesha.. Change.. .. My mood... Haan. Difference. Itna... Phle... Mere ... Achai...se mood ki band bajadete... The lekin... Ab... Mere mood...acha... Karne... Ke liye... Tum kuch. . bhi. Kar sakte ho... I luv.. U... . so...much ... " nandini... Confers her luv lovingly by kissing her lips... With palm... & by putting... Het hand on lappy screen to kiss.. Manik lips...


" same for u.. . luv u more.. Baby... " manik said... Manik kiss on his lappy...


" acha... Manik bye bye ... Door.. Par...koe hai " nandini said closing... Her lappy


" acha... Nandini wait...ek min... " manik about say but she is gone...

" nandini.. I know u r worried but.. Ek bt khushi.. Now u don't have to fight alnoe.. I m wid.. U.. Now.. Tomorrow everything will be f9 Mein.. Tumhari.. akho.. Se.. Ek.. Hasso.. Tk nhi.. Behne.. Dunga.. Yeh.. Manik.. Ka.. Promise.. Hai.. "He thinks.. N smiles looking at mirror n set his coat


So.. Here.. Is next.. Part.. I know.. Lit.. Bit.. Confusing.. But.. Don't don't worry.. It's going.. To more.. Interesting.. So.. Enjoy this.. N leave.. Yr.. Precious comment.. N howz.. Nandini.. N manik Outfit

Love Mehak

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Patelsonu thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
Amazing awesome superb outstanding mind blowing fantastic lovely update tysm dear fr the update plzzz continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
nic update
getting thoda sa confuse ki yeh kya huaaa
pls update next part soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
superb update...
manan part is awesome...
hope now all will happen good...
waiting fr the next part,,continue soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Super - Duper Amazing
Fabulous Update
Loved It
Post Next Part Super Soon
Thanks for the PM
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Posted: 9 years ago
Wow.. so finally manan are getting engaged. .
Really excited for next
Do update soon
Waiting eagerly

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