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Posted: 9 years ago
Amazing
Bt reveal the truth y she is doing this
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Posted: 9 years ago
KHAMOSHIYAAN


Tali Nandu

PART : 11 A

Manik P.O.V.

"U didn't tell me.. how i m looking... " she said taking round as same as childhood oh.. she is looking so cute..

I about say something.. but she said before me.. no.. warm me "aur.. haan.. don't dare... to call me.. bandariya.. vrna.. yd.. hai.. meri.. pitae..."

Oh she is so cute.. i said pulling closer to myself holding her waist n sides her hair "u looking a.. doll.. chotu.. si.. doll.. very.. very... cute.. n beautiful n innocent... "

Than her taunt on me spoil the whole romantic atmosphere

"wao.. my monstu.. ko.. itne.. salo.. mein.. girls.. ki.. tareef.. karni.. agae.. good.. i mean.. superb..."she said pushing me away n than patted my shoulder but sec. She called me monstu.. i m dieing listening this word from her month

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"Manik... u.. know.. wht.. all say.. sb bolte.. hai.. becoz.. my fault my parent.. died.. i killed my.. parent.. "nandini said cryingly putting head on manik's shoulder as we were setting on bench

"Why.. u.. saying.. that.. "i said as i want to shushed her but i also want that she share her problem wid me so dat the truth come out

"Really.. tumhai.. yeh.. nhi.. lgta.. na.. "she ask from me innocently looking at me from his shoulder only holding my arm

"No.. bilkul.. nhi.. "i said by nodding my head

"Manik.. see.. falling.. star.. u.. remember.. hum ek dushre.. ka.. hth pakhdk ke wish krte.. thai.."she said after standing on bench immidiatly

"How... can.. forgot.. this.. mujhe.. hum dono.. ke.. hr.. ek..special.. movement yd.. hai.. " i said to myself n see her wishing something as her eyes were closed she is murmuring something

"Acha.. now.. come down.. vrna. U will fall " i said giving my hand

"No.. u come here.. wao.. kitna.. acha.. lg rha.. hai.. twinkling stars... cool cool air.. she said by jerking my hand

I also stand on bench becoz.. i know.. she is stubborn more than me from starting

I was standing at her back her hair coming on my face n now also she is standing closing her eyes as she feeling the cool air

I can't control myself more from back i hold waist n pull her closer to me. Her back touches to my front n she feel from my touch she shivered i like it . Than from one hand i side her hair from back n than blews air on her back on which she shivered more than i brushes my lips on her bare back n give soft kisses there

"Why.. u r doing all this.. kyo.. u were.. hurting me.. n yrself.. more.." i asked near to her ear

"Becoz.. i m mad.. "she said turing toward me n push me down on floor . Oh i forget she is drunk

"R.. u.. mad.. nandini.." i said getting up.. but she is not having any guilt of pushing me..

"Bola.. toh.. i m mad.. "after saying this she start jumping on bench like a child . She is looking.. so.. cute..

"Okay.. now.. come.. down.. "i said holding her as if she is continuing jumping like this on bench she will fall

"No.. "she said nodding her head n removing my hand

"Nandini.. ghr.. nhi.. jana...kya.. " i asked her n she looked at me.. excitingly as something going in her mind

"Acha.. ghr.. ek.. sharat pr.. i will...drive... the.. car.. " she said.. normally.. but how.. that is not possible..

"Have.. u... losted.. just.. see.. yr.. condition.. no.. never.. "i shouted

"Okay.. than.. bye.. good.. night.. "she said setting on bench

"Okay.. so.. u.. r.. not.. coming.. na.. so.. bear.. the consequences.." i said holding her on my shoulder

"Oh.. leave.. me.. tum.. mujhe.. aise.. kidnap krke.. nhi.. le ja.. skte.. "she shouted.. throwing her leg n hands on me..

"Jagli.. billi.. " i murmured the whole way.. to parking she kept shouting like this

Than i put her down n hold her hand as i know she will ran away... but than she not even try to move from there.. strange..

"Where.. is car.. keys.. " i checking my pocked as i can't able to find my car keys

Than i see her she is giggling so it's clear.. she stolen the car keys.. yeh.. ladki.. bhi.. na..

"Nandini.. give.. back.. the.. keys.. " i said.. forwarding my hand

"Wht.. key.. i don't have.. any.. key.. u bache.. tumhne.. car.. key.. ghuma.. di.. "she said so cutely.. but than i showed my eyes

"So.. tum.. mujhe.. drive.. krne.. do.. so.. i will return.. back.. yr.. keys.. kaise.. idea.. hai.. " she said showing me.. the. Keys.. in her hand

"Nandu.. u can't drive it's risky... " i said but i know.. it's waste.. of time

"No.. no.. mujhe.. drive.. krni.. hai.. toh.. krni.. hai..bs.." she said nodding her head

"Okay.. f9.. meri.. maa.. ab.. toh.. do.. keys.. " i agree.. i also know that i m doing big mistake but i don't have any option left

"Wait.. let.. me.. do.. this.. " she said by opening car car door n she sit on driving sit

"Yeh.. gadhi.. yha.. se.. 1 min. Nikalne. Wli.. sare.. yatriyi..(visitors) apni.. jagha.. ghren krle.. " she said i immidaitly sits in car

P.O.V. ENDS

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"nandini.. aram.. se.. "manik is shouting like this as she is driving nonsensely

"Manik.. keep.. quite.. u r disturbing me.. "she shouted looking at me..

"Aisi.. jidhe.. javage.. kadhi.. modhage.. sare.. de.. sare... signal.. thodhage.. " she singing song while driving n manik is making faces

"Cabir.. i will surely.. not leave.. u.. "manik thinks in mind

"Nandini.. be.. slow.. "manik said as nandini increases the car speed more but manik words going into deaf ear

"Nandini.. break... "manik shouted as truck come infront of them

Manik turns the car fastly.. n their crashes with tree but thank god nthng happen to both of them

"Thukh.. gye.. " nandini said like a small kid looking toward manik n he is looking at her angrily

"Kan.. pakadh.. ke.. sorry.. "nandini said sorry to manik holding her ear looking toward him as she is scared by his look n manik start laughing on her cutness

"Tum.. has.. kyo.. ab.. hum.. ghr.. kaise.. jange.. kitna.. adhre... hai.. yha.. pr... mujhe.. toh.. bhut.. dr lg rha.. hai.."nandini said making scaring faces n manik listening her n smiling

"Nandu.. don't worry.. i will call my driver.. voh.. dhusri Gandhi le aega.. "manik said n take out phn from his pocket

"Wao.. manik.. u r so smart.. yeh.. idea.. mujhe.. kyo.. nhi.. aya... "she said patting manik shoulder n on this manik give her smile

Than manik called the driver n ask him to bring the car

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Edited by Mehaklovely - 9 years ago
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PART : 11 B

"Nandini.. wait.. don't run.. "manik shouts as nandini get out from the car n start running on road

"Catch.. me.. if.. u.. can.. "Nandini turn shouts

"Don't act.. like.. baby.. u r bare foot kuch.. lg.. jaega.."manik shouts still running behind as he concern her

"No.. catch.. me.. monstu.. i challenge.. u.. can't catch me.."she shout running

"So.. u.. r challenging me.. "manik said n now he left his all concern on side n start chasing her

For sometime they kept running but in last the both stop n holding waist breathing heavily

"Nandu.. get.. up.. "manik as nandini sit on road

"No.. i want.. to eat.. ice cream.. "she again demanded

"Oh.. god.. ab ice cream kha se lekr aun... "manik said putting his hand on his head

"Nandu.. r u blind.. u can't see.. yha.. koe.. ishn.. bhi.. dikh rha.. hai.. tumhai.. jo.. ice cream stall dikhaga.. tumhai.."manik said irritatedly

"I don't care.. i want.. to.. eat.. now.. "she said like a stubborn kid

"Oh.. god.. yeh.. stubborn.. kyo.. hai.. "manik said to himself

"Nandini.. dekho.. time.. plz.. get.. up.. na.. "manik do a last try but no use

"Ice cream khani... hai ice cream khani.. hai.. "nandini start saying this again again to irritate him

"Stop.. "manik said plaming his ear but she didn't stop..

"Okay.. car.. ane.. do.. than.. we can go any restaurant.. "manik said n she immidaitly stand up

"Oh.. u r so.. sweet.. "nandini said pulling his cheeks

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"Aa... "nandini shouting like taking out her face from window they both seating at back seat of car

"Nandini.. stop.. yr.. tumhai. Lg.. jaegi..."manik said pulling her away n closed the window

"Manik.. u r so bad.. kitne.. maza.. aa... rha.. tha.. "nandini said angrily

"Okay.. wait.." manik said n take remote n press the botton n the roof of the car is gone

"Wao.. "she said in way that she is amazed by this stand up.. n manik is just looking at her

"U like.. it.."manik asked "i loved it... "she said happily looking toward him

Than he also stand up come on her back than he hold her hand n than pause at this movement n than he open her hand

"Now.. close.. yr.. eyes.. split.. out.. all.. the sadness that is inside.. u.. "manik said near to her ear n she do wht he said

And they both close their eyes the fresh air touching their face they both lost in that

"So.. tell why.. u running from reality.. why.. u want.. i start hating.. u.. even.. yr.. sis start hating.. "manik said n nandini is now fully lost in that

"Nhi.. bta.. skti.. "she said sadly her eyes are now also close

"Kyo.. why.. i m wid.. btoa.. na.."manik said n become more eager to know

"Becoz.. agr.. btaya.. toh.. everything.. will.. destroy.. "she said..

"Nthng.. will... happen.. u trust.. me.. na.. so tell me.."manik said

"What.. tell.. me.. "nandini said turing toward.. manik as she now again come out from that dream world

"Why.. u r doing all this.. "manik said Softly

"Becoz.. i mad... bola.. toh.. acha.. hum ice cream khane.. ja.. rhai... hai.. na.. "nandini asked him n manik make faces

"Oh.. yr.. again.. wht's the truth.. that destroy everything.. i wanna know.. yr.. "manik thinks in his mind

"Bolo.. na.. hum ice cream khane... ja.. rhai.. hai.. na.. "she said shaking manik n he come out from his thought n than driver stopped the car

"Lo.. hum.. puch.. bhi.. gye.. "manik said

"Yeah... "nandini shouts happily n comes out from the car

It is shop of ice cream n bench r there for setting

"Ji.. sir.. boliye.. kya.. lenge.. "sales man asked

"Bhaeya.. dark chocolate.. cone.. hai.. " nandini asked from the shopkeeper like a small kid n manik smiles

"Ji.. hai.. madam.. aur.. sir.. aap.. " shopkeeper asked

"Nhi.. uncle.. aap.. bs.. inke.. liye.. hi dedo.. "manik said n nandini looked at him

"Manik.. lelo..phle.. hi.. bol.. i will not share.. bachpan.. mein.. bhi.. tum meri.. sari.. ice cream.. kha.. jate.. "nandini said n manik looked at him with widden eyes

"No.. mein.. toh.. abhi.. tumhri.. hi.. khaunga.. " manik said to make her more.. angry.. as now.. he is loving her.. that type of cutness

He really miss this in 10 yr. Now he can't leave any chance to tease her

"No.. i will not give..u "she said taking the ice cream from the shop keeper n he also smiles

on the whole way she kept on eating ice cream like a child liking her finger in b/w n manik act to take the ice cream from him she hide it n manik is just admiring her n smiling on her

As soon as they reach home rain started n nandini immidiatly runs out n start dancing crazily in rain


Manik rember about their memory as where nandini dancing he start seeing his past infront of his eyes that they both r dancing madly in rain playing tackling eachother

He is now also setting there now he come back to reality n sees her

"Abhi.. bhi.. bikul vaisi hi.. hai..i love.. her.. "manik said n come out from the car n goes toward her

See her for sometime standing in rain as she was dancing madly.. enjoying like a kid.. as she got so relief after so many days of stress

After sometime he hold her hand from back n than turn her


"I love.. u.. nandini.. "manik said holding her face deeply looking into her eyes both lost into eachother eyes

" i love..

So here.. is next.. part.. hope.. u.. like.. it.. i try.. to give my best.. now.. want big comments also..
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LOVE MEHAK


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Posted: 9 years ago
Hey lovely
Amazing update
Pls reveal the truth fast
Dear some bw i dnt get ur pm
Plz do me pm of all ur stories
Keep smiling
Keep writing 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update
Loved it
Drunk nandu so cute
Manan 2gether
Beautiful update
Par suspense mei chod diya
Reveal the truth fast
Waiting for the next update
Update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
Lovely update
beautiful work
i loved it
so cute manan
waiting for next parte
plzz update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
Uuufff can't wait more continue plzzz it's was amazing awesome superb outstanding mind blowing fantastic lovely update tysm dear fr the update
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Posted: 9 years ago
Wow... that was fun...
I thought nandu manik ko ab to sab bta degi but nai ... she is seriously stubborn. ..but cute and adorable too...
Do update soon
Waiting eagerly
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Posted: 9 years ago
awesome update...
drunk nandu is lovely n crazy...
loved the update very much...
eagerly wait to know the answer of nandini...
continue soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hey dear nice update drunk nandu and her trnuaments were cute and manan moments of their childhood is so beautiful

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