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Posted: 9 years ago
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CHAPTER 01

In delhi

The house is fully quiet its almost near the sune rise suddenly an aged women nearly in her mid 40s came in a room and said

L:ayo arya tum itni jaldi jag gaye...

A:uh...amms wo I was not getting sleep so bus isiliyye but ap kyuon jag rahe ho

Am:wo men nandu ko dekhne ja rahi thi ...wo sogai?

A: ji amms badi mushkil se lkn so gai ap tension mat lo wo theak hai ab bas use thora aur time lage ga

Amms nods but then she sits on a sofa and starts crying aryaman sees this and rushes to him and then says

A:amms kia hua why r u crying hann ?/ ammss...

Am:why ayiaap why ap hamesha meri bachi ke sath hi aesa kun karte ho kun use itni taqleef dete ho thak chuki hai meri bachii yeh sab seh she ka rap bas mujhse uski yeh halat nahi dekhi jati

A:I know amms k nandu ne buhat saha hai lkn ab bas mujhey poora yakeen hai k ayiappa itne bure nahi hosakte wo nandu k liye kisi na kisi ko zaroor bhejen ge...

Same time , Mumbai

in a room and old aged man is sitting and thinking

man:kun bhagwan kun kia apne aesa ...meri bachi ki har khushi kun cheente gaye appp...usko pal pal thorte gaye ap kun...

plz ab us k liye koi aesa bhej dijiye jo use samhal sake...

maybe really there was someone who will complete her and whom she will complete lets see how destiny and what destiny stores ...

same time ,LONDON

In a room there is a lot of sounds of sweet moans and groans as some one is making out after couple of minutes the man gets up and throws clothes on the womans face and

Man:tumhara kaam pura hua ...now u can leave

Girl: plz u have been really harsh plz let me stay here for some time baby

Man:I said leave

Girl:par manik...(yes it was manik alhotra who is a or to be precised became a casonova)

M:tumhain tumhare pain k paise mil jayenge now just get lost

Manik told the girl and she huredly left from there manik sighs in frustration he then gulps down a bottle of bear and thinks

Why life hurts me so much men hi kun ...forget it shaid duniya k saree gam mere liye hi hain...no body is there for me...

Edited by nabilaa456 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#12

CHAPTER 01 B

As the old man was thinking all that he was brought back from his thoughts from his calll

Man:hello

P:hello dadu(yes the old man was RAJ MALHOTRA maniks dadu)

M:cabir ... kese ho tum ??

C:men theak hun dadu ap batao kese ho ap??

R:men theak hun kese call kia aj

C:wo dadu I wanted to tell u something we are coming back to india

R:really??

C:yes dadu ham sab kal arahe hain hum kal shaam tak paunch jayen ge...

R:yeh to buht achi baat hai I am waiting for u all come soon

C:sure dadu BYE

R:bye

Raj keeps the call and thinks

Hey uppar wale mere bachon ko khush rakhna unhen har takleef se bachna and un k uppar se har bure saye ko khatam kardo...

PRECAP: nandu in Mumbai fab 5 also come back manan meet
Plz tell me how is it
should I continue waiting for your response
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Posted: 9 years ago
#13
hey dear
awesome chappy

so...manik is a casanova...

nandu ke saath kya hui hai...

liked arya and amms...

uff...waiting for manan meet...

continue soon


LOVE
SANJANA
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesomee
Amazingg update
Nycc story
Lovd it
Continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#15
Superb update ...
Luved it...
Plz continue soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#16
Interesting ff like it plzz update soon & pm me also
Thnx for writing this ff...!👏😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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awsm start
cont soon
will be waiting
plz pm me
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Posted: 9 years ago
#18
Nice story dear
Love concept
eagerly waiting for the next part
Take care dear😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sakshi_maheta

Nice story dear
Love concept
eagerly waiting for the next part
Take care dear😊

thanks dear
so I have a new reader
welcome dear'
will update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Pinkypie

Interesting ff like it plzz update soon & pm me also
Thnx for writing this ff...!👏😊

thanks dear
for pm plz buddy me

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