MANAN FS AGAR TUM SATH HO BANNER ADDED ON PG 153 - Page 97

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Posted: 9 years ago
Hai...
Awesome update dii...

Nandini finally let out her pain and accepted his love..
Wow!!! And Manik new way to propose...
They both are unique and proposal is also...

Loved the ending mukti and aryaman marriage...it's new...
Just loved it...

Thank you for PM..

Waiting for LOVE IS MY LIFE diii...please...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hey Kaha h lst chapter... My l q n rahi h...?
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hey dear
nice update
finally manik confess
waiting to know nandu kya
kehgi
sorry for late comment
just read vhap 4d
bcoz am busy with study
plz pm me for next chap

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Posted: 9 years ago
Hey anu
Plzzz
yrIIdidn't get the pm

First tym aisa hua
yr
Sooo sad

I always commenting n liked yr

Yyy
Plxxxz pm me next part pretty pretty please

Vidhu
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Posted: 9 years ago
Plzzz send me the pm...I am eagerly waiting...u are an awesome writer ...all the best
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sabko mera PM nahi mila kyuki maine sirf unhe hi PM kiya jinhone last update par comment kiya... main bohuth logon ko janthi zarur hoon par main ye nahi janthi hoon ki un sab main se mere stories padthe kon hain aur agar tum log mujhe bataoge nahi tho itne bade forum main mujhe patha kaise chelega ki haan bai ye mere readers hain mujhe unhe PM bejna hain hmm...so isliye please ye math sochiye ki main jaan bujke apko PM nahi karthi hoon and i swear mujhe tum main se kisi se bi dushmani nahi hain...last part main yehi update karna chahthi thi lekin phir sabko thoda pareshan karne ke liye PM bej diya kaan pakadke chorryyy for that...so yess here u go with the LAST PART of AGAR TUM SATH HO...ho sake tho like aur comment kardena mujhe acha lagega...thank u so much...luv u...ummahhh...


PART 4E :

MANIK : kya...kyaa...kaha...

NANDINI : wohi jo tumne suna

rakesh,raj,nyonika and preeti who were in a state of shock come into their senses and slowly walk towards them...

RAJ : ho kya raha hain yaha

RAKESH : nandu...kuch bathayegi ya bi nahi...

NANDINI : kuch hain hi nahi kehne tho kya batao papa

glancing each other FAB 4 walks towards manik and stand beside him...

MUKTHI : manik mujhe patha chela ki tu london jane vala tha tho phir

"Jane vala tha lekin iski vajah se jaa nahi paya" and manik utters looking into nandu eyes...

NANDINI : aryaman uncle aunty kaha hain unhe jaldi se bula lo ham shadi ki rasme shuru karthe hain

MANIK : kayi tum iski vajah se mujhe mana tho nahi karri ho na

NANDINI : main kisi bi vajah se tumhe mana karu usse tumhe kyaa

Itne salon main kya maine tumhe kabi pucha ki manik tum mujhse shadi kyu nahi karre ho...pyar kyu nahi karre ho...and nandu continuous not letting manik say anything...

Staring nandu for a second manik nods his head and "ohhh tho ye bath hain..!!!!"

badla leri ho...!!!! and he continuous moving closer to her while she stands looking into his eyes not blinking her eyes for once...

itne dino thak main apne pyar ko jutla raha tha tho ab tum jutla rahi ho..!!!! and this time he without letting her speak utters moving deathly close to her...

manikk...!!!! and nyonika intervens moving him back...

ham abi athe hain and before anyone could understand manik lifts nandu in a swift holding her on his shoulders and starts walking towards door...

manikkk and nandu tries to get down beating his back with her tiny hands...

RAJ : manikk kya karra chod usse

NYONIKA : tu bahar kyu jara...ham yahi pe bath karthe hain na...manik...

MANIK : koyi hamare peeche nahi ayega...koyi bi nahi...

KABIR : looo gaya

DHRUV : acha hua

KABIR : kyaaa

DHRUV : hame kyu aise goorre ho

KABIR : arey bahar jayenge nahi tho bath karenge kaise

DHRUV : aur agar bath karenge nahi tho sab teek hoga kaise

KABIR : haannn

RAJ : chup kar

NYONIKA : tum logon ko mazak sujri ab haa

KABIR : haan

RAJ : haa????

KABIR : arey kushi ke mahol main hi mazak karthe hain na tho itna gussa kyu karre ho

NYONIKA : kushi ka mahol

KABIR : arey haan meri jaanu tumhare pagal bete ko akal agayi...usse nandu ke liye apne pyar ka ehsaas hogaya...usse badi kushi ki bath kya ho sakthi hain hamare sab ke liye...

MUKTHI : ummm haaa actually jiss tharah se manik ne i luv u kaha na mujhe tho laga der hi saha lekin bola tho ek dam masth

DHRUV : haina haina

ALIA : sach main manik ke muh se nandini ke liye wo lafz sunne ke baad i was like thank u goddd bas ab aur kuch nahi chahiye

seeing raj,rakesh,preeti and nyonika smiling kabir smirks and "tum sab bi apne kushi ko bayan kar sakthe ho ham bura nahi manenge"

DHRUV : haa haa bilkul bura nahi manenge

acha bachu idhar aao abi dikathi hoon tumhe and nyonika twists kabir and dhruv's ears to which everyone laugh happily...

PREETI : manik ka tho teek hain lekin patha nahi nandu

MUKTHI : kuch nahi hoga aunty relax ham sab janthe hain ki wo manik se kitna pyar karthi hain

ALIA : haan bale hi wo na kahe uski ankhen sab batha dethi hain

KABIR : ohhh yeaa wo dono ankhon ankhon main ishare kar lenge na tum kyu bekar main stress lethi ho

preeti smiles but soon seeing aryaman stops smiling and aryaman...!!!

KABIR : usse sab patha hain pehle se

preeti looks kabir and then damini ji

ARYAMAN : maine mom ko samja diya hain aunty isliye please aap kisi bi bath ka tension math lijiye

RAKESH : am sry beta and

ARYAMAN : uncle please... sry kehke mujhe sharminda math kijiye...

RAKESH : thank u...thank u so much...

ARYAMAN : thanks to you uncle... apki vajah se mujhe itne sare ache logon ko ek sath milne ka mouka mila...

KABIR : acha chelo bai jab thak mishtee apne jaan ke sath vapas nahi ajathi thab thak yaha bait jao

DHRUV : haan haan bait jao vakth tho lagega hi unhe ane main

KABIR : haan kaafi kuch karna jo hain unhe

RAJ : kabirrr

KABIR : kyaa arey unhe bohuth sari bathe karni hain na wohi kehra hoon kyaa aap bi

RAJ : chup

KABIR : mujhe chup karane se kya hoga wo dono tho wohi karenge na
jo unhe karna hain

MUKTHI : kabirrr

ALIA : stop it now

glancing each other FAB 4 bursts into laughter while elders nod their heads smiling along with them...

NANDINI : manikkk

MANIK : ahhh chup nahi reh sakthi kya do minute ke liye

NANDINI : nahi reh sakthi...chodo mujhe...

MANIK : ouch...looo...kushhh...

glaring him nandu starts walking while he holding her hand angrily pulls her back and "jab thak hamari bath katham nahi hothi thab thak tum yaha se hilogi bi nahi"

nandu stands looking him angrily while he pulling her even more close with a jerk moves deathly close to her lips and "nahi karthi na mujhse pyar"

"haan...haan...haan...nahi karthi main tumse pyar..." and she moving back utters angrily shouting on top of her voice...

"kyuuu...kyuuu...kyuuu nahi karthi ho mujhse pyar" and he too shouts loud digging his nails on her arms...

"Kyuuu..." and she jerking away his hands utters looking straight into his eyes...

"itne salon se...tum mere itne paas akar...jab bi duniya ki sari bakwaas bathe ki...kya maine tumse pucha..ki manik...jab tum bath karthe vakth bi mujhse door nahi reh sakthe tho mujhse pyar kyu nahi karthe...!!!!" and she pulling him close with a jerk holding his collar utters shocking him to core...

"itne salon se...har roj...jab bi tum mujhe kana kilane ko kehthe... tumhare tevar dikathe...tumhare age peeche gumathe...kya maine tumse pucha...ki manik...jab tum mujhe ek pal ke liye akela nahi chodth sakthe ho tho mujhse pyar kyu nahi karthe..!!!!!" and she continous with pain in her eyes startling him with her tone...

"itne salon se...jab bi tum koyi kaam mere bagair nahi karthe...mere sath ke liye puri duniya ko ek karthe...mujhe apne ankhon se door jane nahi dethe... kya maine tumse pucha...ki manik...jab main tumhare liye itna mayine rakthi hoon tho mujhse pyar kyu nahi karthe...!!!!" and she utters with tears in her eyes bringing tears in his eyes too...

"itne salon se...har roj...jab bi tum mere kamre main ake...mere sath...apne chehre ko mere balon main chupake...mujhe apne dil ke kareeb rakke...ek hi bistar main chain ki neendh sothe the...kya maine tumse pucha...ki manik...jab tum mere bagair jee nahi sakthe ho tho mujhse pyar kyu nahi karthe..!!!"
and she utters letting her tears roll down shaking him vigorously...

uss din...uss din...yaha...jab...tum... mujhe...k.i.s.s..karke...gaye...kya...maine..tumse..pucha..ki...manik... jab...tum...mujhe...kiss...kar..sakthe ho..tho..mujhse..pyar...kyu...nahi... karthe...tumhare...tumhare...jane... ke...baad...kya..main...tumhare... peche...ayi...tumse...pucha...ki manik...tum...agar...mujhse...pyar...karthe...hi...nahi...ho...tho...kiss... karne..ki..kya..zarurath..hain... bolo...bolooo...jab...tum...aaj...do..din..ke...baad...aye...jab...ki...main.. pichle...do...dino...se...tumhara... intezar...karri...thi...tho...kya... maine...tumse...puchaa...ki...tum... kyu...nahi...aye...kyu...chodke... gaye...bolo...haaa...bolo...tho... tum...kyu...puchre...ho..haa...bolo...and she utters with hiccups crying like a baby beating him again and again fisting her hands...

holding her hands and pulling her into bone crashing hug he hides his face in crook of her neck and "am sryyy...am sryy...am sryyy...am sryyy... am so so sooo sryyy... hundred times... thousand times...infinite times...!!!!"

crying and crying she beats his back trying to break the hug while he holds her tighter and tighter mumbling zillion sorrys...

breaking the hug he cups her cheeks and "am... am... sryyy... mishtee...main...main...bohuth... bada...gada...hoon...idiot...hoon... duffer hoon...ulla ka patta hoon... sab kuch hoon...lekin kya karu... sabki tharah mujhse bi wohi galthi huyi hain...jab tum mere paas thi na thab mujhe tumhari ehamiyath patha nahi cheli... wo kehthe hain na insan ko kisi cheez ki ehamiyath thab patha chelthi hain jab wo usse ko detha hain...mujhe bi tumhari ehamiyath thab patha chela jab tum aryaman ke sath thi...uss din sangeeth main tumhe uske sath deke patha nahi kya hogaya tha mujhe...tum uske sath thi... wo bath hi mujhe bardash nahi huyi... mere samne usne tumhe chua aur isliye bina soche samje jaha jaha usne tumhe chua maine vaha vaha tumhe kiss kar diya... main khud apne behaviour se itna confused tha tho tumse kya kehtha...kya bathatha ki kyu kiss kiya...isliye bina kuch kahe main chup chap chela gaya... bohuth koshish ki tumhe bulne ki... sach ko accept karne ki tum aryaman ki...lekin nahi hua...shadi ke char gante pehle thak main ladra tha khud se...apne dil se...lekin buri tharah se haar ke tumhare samne kada hoon...!!!!"

blinking her eyes continuously like a doll she stands looks him while he wipes away her dry tears and "i know ki maine tumhe bohuth pareshan kiya and am really sry for that lekin sari galthi sirf meri hi nahi hain...adhi galthi tumhari bi hain...janthi ho ek bache ko bhuk thabi lagthi hain jab usse kana nahi miltha hain...agar kana usse bhuk lagne se pehle hi mil jaye na tho usse bhuk ke bare main patha bi nahi hotha hain... teek ussi tharah tumne bi kabi mujhe akela choda hi nahi hain jiski vajah se mujhe tumhari ehmiyath ke bare main patha ho!!!!"

staring into each others eyes for what seems to be an eternity she slowly moves her head back and hogaya

MANIK : haa par

NANDINI : mujhe jana hain aryaman intezar karra hoga

MANIK : achaa...jana hain haa teek hain...

Biting her lip she slowly takes a step ahead and before could take another step he pulls her back with a force making her hands rest on his chest and her lips inches away from him...

manik...!!!! and she utters breathing heavily...!!!!

jao na...ruki kyu hoo...!!!! and he utters brushing his lips on hers pulling her even more close pressing their bodies completely...

second kiss hojaye and he whispers ever so huskily while she lowers her gaze instantly not being able to look him...

MISHTEE...!!!!! and he holding her chin makes her look him while she completely gets lost in him...

I LOVE YOU SO MUCH...PATHA NAHI KAB SE...!!!!!! and he with utmost love confesses looking into her eyes ever so lovingly to which she smiles with tears and utters even more lovingly I LOVE YOU TOO...BACHPAN SE...!!!!!

thaliya...thaliya...thaliya...and shouting on top of their voice FAB 4 enters along with raj,rakesh,preeti and nyo due to which nandu moves back shying while manik smiles watching her...

ARYAMAN : nanduuu... dekho... maine maa papa ko bula liya chelo chelke shadi karthe hain...

DAMINI : haa beta chelo

MANIK : abey paas ana bi math zinda nahi chodunga

ROSHAN : mazak karra hain beta relax

KABIR : hmmm so all setteled

MANIK : yess

KABIR : tho chelo chelke shadi ki rasme shuru karthe hain

MANIK : shadi lekin hamne abi

DHRUV : bai relax shadi teri aur nandu ki nahi balki aryaman aur mukthi ki

NANDINI : kyaaa

MANIK : mukthi tu...tujhe ye hi mila tha...goddd

NANDINI : lekin ye hua kab matlab

DHRUV : arey wo tho hame bi nahi patha

RAJ : acha ab chelo der hora

Within no time aryaman and mukthi get married with all rituals and take blessing from elders...

MANIK : uhu uhu

NANDINI : kyaa

MANIK : shadi karle ham bi

NANDINI : soch lo...bohuth mushkile honge...

MANIK :

MANZOOR HAIN...AGAR TUM SATH HO...

NANDINI : bohuth kuch jelna hoga

MANIK :

MANZOOR HAIN...AGAR TUM SATH HO...

NANDINI : bohuth kuch sambalna hoga...

MANIK :

MANZOOR HAIN...AGAR TUM SATH HO...

NANDINI : ek baar aur sochlo...kya zindagi bar kush rehapaoge...

MANIK :

HAAN...AGAR TUM SATH HO..!!!!

smiling whole heartedly she pounces on him holding him tight while everyone smile with tears finally witnessing what they wished for...




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Posted: 9 years ago
Hey! What an amazing update!
Sorry I wasn't commenting lately as I was busy
I just read all the updates
Plss do pm me
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Posted: 9 years ago
Wwwowww
Finally like finally
Manan confession done ur

Sooo damn interesting concept yr

N nandu confronted him
Amaaazzziiinnn


N muku n aryamaan married

I thought manan wedding hogi
N aryaman n muku saath hongiMarry later
Epilogue is a must yr

Pleasssjjj

Chotu hi chalega plzz

Love you sissy
Vidhu
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Posted: 9 years ago
Kya mast update tha.a grand update..kya bola nandu ne manik ko.Is ullu de pathe ko akal agayi yehi kafi hain..apne pyar ko samajhne me itna waqt laga diya..aur 2-3 saal
Lagate samajhne me jab nandu ka chota chota bache
Ho jaate aur manik ko mamu bulate..and aryaman ko
Vi mukti mil gayi...last dialogue is best agar tum sath ho
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Posted: 9 years ago
hahaha finally happy ending

manik na sach me gadha hai actually sab ladke pyaar ke mamle me gadhe hi hote hai...jab tak baat gale tak na aa jaye inki tubelight hi nahi jalti...
hahahaha


what a confession of nandini...aur usne manik ko maaf bhi kar diya

lovely ending

story ended😭😭

plz come up wid d new story

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