MANAN FS AGAR TUM SATH HO BANNER ADDED ON PG 153 - Page 87

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Where is nandni ? Where is manik? Update soon can't wait for next part 👏
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PART 4D :

RAJ : nyonika..!!!!

RAKESH : preeti..!!!!

Raj and rakesh kneel down holding nyonika and preeti while kabir and dhruv pour water in glasses for them...

raj... raj... meri... bachi... meri... and nyonika cries out loud holding raj ever so tightly while preeti behaviour was no less than nyonika...

RAJ : shhh shhh bas bas

RAKESH : kuch nahi hoga hamari bachi ko kuch bi nahi

KABIR : auntyyy

DHRUV : lijiye pani pijiye

NYONIKA : kabirrr...nandini...

KABIR : kuch nahi hoga nandu ko ham sab hain na...ham layenge nandu ko apke paas...

PREETI : sach main laoge na tum log nandu ko

DHRUV : haan sach main layenge ham log nandu ko cheliye ab ye pani pijiye jaldi se

PREETI : bas..ab tum sab jao.. nandu ke paas...

NYONIKA : haan aur jaldi se usse yaha lao...

RAJ : acha teek hain ham jathe hain lekin usse pehle ap dono ko sona padega

RAKESH : haan cheliye

PREETI: aap log jayiye ham ham so jayenge

MUKTHI : acha aisa karthe hain main aur alia yaha ruk jathe hain

KABIR : teek hain

ALIA : tho cheliye aap log jaldi se jake ajayiye thab thak ham ache se so ke utenge

MUKTHI : yesss

raj and rakesh thank silently alia and mukthi having tears in their eyes while they smile and blink their eyes saying that everything will be fine...

Soon after they all leave alia and mukthi make nyonika and preeti sleep with great difficulty and after making sure that they were in deep slumber they slowly lock the door and move down...

ALIA : main dhruv ko call karthi hoon

KABIR : ham yahi par hain

ALIA : kya hua

MUKTHI : kuch patha chela

DHRUV : nahi...

KABIR : aunty kaisi hain

ALIA : bilkul bi teek nahi hain

MUKTHI : yarrr please naa...kuch karo...nandu...nandu...!!!!

KABIR : shhh

DHRUV : tu royegi tho kaise hoga hmmm

MUKTHI : ye sab ye sab uss idiot ki vajah se hora

ALIA : guys ek baar manik ko call try karke dekthe hain na ho saktha hain use kuch patha ho

KABIR : aryaman try kar chuka hain uska cell switch off ara hain

ALIA : ohhh vaise uncle kaha hain

DHRUV : unke kuch dosth police officers hain tho unse bath karre hain

ARYAMAN : any progress

KABIR : nahi

DHRUV : kya hua aunty ne kya kaha

ARYAMAN : vahi repeated sawal chod na

KABIR : sry yar hamari vajah se tujhe

ARYAMAN : pagal hain kya abi in sab batho ke liye time nahi hain hamare paas pehle chel kar nandini ko dundthe hain chel

KABIR : teek hain chel

DHRUV : tum dono yahi pe rukna

MUKTHI : hmmm

KABIR : phikar math kar nandu jald hi hamare beech hogi

ALIA : nahi tho tum log zinda nahi rahoge

KABIR : achaaa aisa kyaa

ALIA : haaa aisa ichhh

Mukthi smiles while kabir lovingly pecking her forehead leaves along with dhruv and aryaman

MUKTHI & ALIA POV : kaha hain tu nandu...!!!!

Not being able to move even an inch SHE tilts her head continuously from left to right and right to left while HE feeling disturbed opens his eyes irritatingly only to get lost in the very next second...

Holding her head with her left hand SHE slowly opens her eyes and with in no time gets drowned in pair of dark chocolate eyes...

Raising her right hand SHE slowly traces her fingers from his forhead to chin while HE closes his eyes in anticipation...

taking back her hand with a jerk SHE looks HIM without blinking her eyes while HE too after opening his eyes looks her without moving gaze...

Completely lost in confusion she once again moves her right hand and with trembling fingers slowly touches HIS cheek to which HE stares her lovingly and MISHTEE...!!!!!!!

Realising that it was not a dream nandini gets up with a jerk pushing away manik while he instantly getting up "mishtee...sambal ke..."

Holding her head she stumbles a little bit but soon standing straight she looks him and "kyu aye..!!!!"

not letting him say anything she continous "vapas kyu aye..!!!"

He looks her while she moving her hands with red teary eyes "chodke gaye the na...uss din...yahi pe...!!!"

mishtee..!!!! and when he moves closer to her she looks around and "ek minute...main...main...yaha pe kya karri hoon.."

aryaman...shadi...sab...sab...intezar karre honge... mujhe... mujhe... jana...hoga and without wasting a second she starts moving only to get stopped by him the very next second...

Pulling her close making their bodies touch completely he looks into her eyes and "tum kahi nahi jaoge...suna tumne... tum... kahi... nahi...jaoge"

chodo mujhe...leave me...and she tries to move away only to get more closer to him...

chodo mujhe...manikkk...!!!!! and she shouts on top of her voice startling manik who looses his grip on her automatically after listening her tone...

Giving a angry look nandu turns and starts walking while he once again goes behind her and stops her holding her hand...

NANDINI : hath chodo

MANIK : nahi

NANDINI : manik maine kaha hath chodo

MANIK : chillao math varna

NANDINI : varna kya bolo haa muh bandh karoge jaise kamre main kiya tha

He looks her without saying anything while she continous tum hi the na wo...haaa...bolo...tumne hi mujhe behosh karke yaha laya na...haaa...bolo...

MANIK : haan main hi tha kya karlogi hmmm

NANDINI : patha nahi main tumse bath bi kyu karri hoon

MANIK : haan tho math karo na kisne kaha karne ko

turning her face she once again tries to free her hand while he simply pulling her close twists her both the hands at back making her look him instantly...

not uttering a word she again and again tries to free herself and accidently kisses his chin moving deathly close to him...

Staring into her innocent eyes he pulls her even more close and slowly bending a little kisses her left cheek making her close her eyes...

getting into senses in no time she tries to move away opening her eyes while he making his grip tighter on her hands kisses her right cheek ever so lovingly forcing her to close her eyes once again...

Lost in moment eyeing her lips he bends down closing his eyes but before he could claim her lips she shot opens her eyes and before he could understand frees herself from his grip...

NANDINI : agar tumhe lagtha hain ki tum jab chahe thab jaha chahe waha mere sath kuch bi kar sakthe ho tho am extremely sorry mr manik malholtra kyuki main aisa kuch hone nahi dene vali...

nodding her head letting her tears roll down she turns back and runs out without wasting a second while he too runs behind her calling her again and again...

MUKTHI : dhruvvv

ALIA : kya hua

MUKTHI : nandini kaha hain

ALIA : tum log akele kyu aye

MUKTHI : bolo na.. aryaman... nandini...

NYONIKA : kaha hain

PREETI : nandu...nandu...kaha hain...

ALIA : aap dono

RAKESH : darvaza katkatare the

RAJ : hamne kola tho neche baag ke agaye...

MUKTHI : acha hua hamne sare rishthadaron ko guest room main bej diya varna

NYONIKA : nanduuu

All turn their gaze towards door and smile ever so hugely the very next moment seeing nandini standing there...

not even letting nandu enter inside the house all of them jump on her surrounding her making her hard to breath...

NYONIKA : tu tu kaha cheli gayi thi

RAJ : patha hain ham kitna pareshan hue

PREETI : tu teek tho haina

RAKESH : manikkk...

cringing their eyebrows everyone turn their gaze from nandini to manik and before anyone could say anything nandu walks towards aryaman and "shadi ke liye already bohuth der ho chuki hain chele"

MANIK : tu isse shadi nahi karegi

aryaman chelo and nandu holding aryaman's hand walks towards mandap while everyone looks her shockingly...

Moving infront of nandu manik stands glaring aryaman and maine kaha tu isse shadi nahi karegi...!!!

NANDINI : meri marzi...meri shadi...

gritting his teeth manik pulls nandini close to him freeing her hold on aryaman hand and yells on top of his voice "once for all get this straight into your head miss nandini moorthy tumhari shadi iss insan se hi nahi balki kisi bi insan ke sath nahi ho sakthi hain"

kyu nahi ho sakthi hain haa kyu nahi ho sakthi hain and nandu replies yelling even more louder than him shocking everyone to core...

"kyuki tumhari shadi sirf aur sirf mujhse ho sakthi hain...kyuki I MANIK MALHOTRA LOVE YOU DAMIT...!!!!" and manik answers making his voice echo in each and every corner of room and frozing everyone at their places...

after a good few seconds nandu starts laughing like mad which surprises everyone including manik...

slowly freeing herself she looks him and between her laughs "am sry manik...but...i dont..."

MANIK : haa???

am sorry but i dont love you..!!!!!! and nandu utters looking straight into his eyes having tears in her eyes taking away ground beneath him...



done...done...done...batao kaisa laga...jaldi...am waiting...!!!!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
Whattt??
Ye kya twist h ??
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Posted: 9 years ago
Wat a suspense...
I so knew it dat manik never went only...
Amazing update...
Loved it to d core...
Gosh d ending... 😲
Plz continue soon...
ll' b waiting for d update...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Omg yeh Kya Ho gya.. Me nHi krti Matlab... God another twist.. Can this get any more Intresting...
Loved this change of events .. Manik ne Bahuttt zada time le liya to realise his love for his mishtiii ...But I'm sure Nandu maan hi jaegi...

Amazing update.. Loved it.. Thanxx for the update
:)
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Posted: 9 years ago
what is this???so shocked...
now what will happen???
why nandini said no???
eagerly waiting fr the next part...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Cliffhanger...😕
Nice update...👏
Waiting For Next Part...👍🏼
Continue Soon...😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
Wow.. finally manikin confessed
But now why nandu is rejecting
Do update soon
Waiting eagerly
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Posted: 9 years ago
Finally found MaNan and god damn he said that... Wow he finally confessed he love her... Made everyone cry... But finally said what next waiting to read next...
Thanks for the update
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Posted: 9 years ago
What happened that last part?
I m so shocked ,...
But why nandini is doing this ?
Manik just confessed his love...
Plz plz update next part soon
Excited for next update
Cont soon

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