MANAN FS AGAR TUM SATH HO BANNER ADDED ON PG 153 - Page 84

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PART 4C :

Nyonika along with raj and FAB 5 was waiting outside nandu room moving here and there worriedly when suddenly door gets opened

NYONIKA : preeti

RAJ : rakesh

NYONIKA : kya hua

RAJ : usne kuch kaha

Rakesh and preeti look them and again at each other

NYONIKA : bolo na

preeti lowers her head nodding as a no...

RAJ : usne kuch nahi kaha

RAKESH : nahi...usne kuch nahi kaha...in fact hamari tharaf dekha bi nahi...

nyonika closes her eyes tightly and patha nahi kya hogaya hain usse...

ARYAMAN : aunty

nyonika opens her eyes while every one else smiles faintly looking him

RAJ : hi beta

ARYAMAN : disturb tho nahi kiya na

RAJ : arey nahi

ARYAMAN : wo actually main nandini se ek baar

MUKTHI : wo busy hain..abi tumse nahi mil sakthi...

NYONIKA : mukthi

ALIA : wo sahi kehri hain tum baad main mil lo nandini se

RAJ : aliaaa

ARYAMAN : uncle it's ok main

RAJ : nahi aryaman tum jao andar mil lo nandini se

MUKTHI : aap janthe hain na aap kya kare hain

RAJ : mukthi behave yourself ham baad main bath karenge

NYONIKA : aryaman tum jao

Aryaman quickly glancing mukthi moves inside nandu room while she closing her eyes tightly punches near by wall in anger

NYONIKA : mukthiii

RAJ : pagal hain kya

MUKTHI : kyu jane diya usse andar

RAJ : hath dikha

MUKTHI : aap janthe hain na ki uss din ke baad se hi nandu kisi se bath nahi karri hain

RAJ : maine kaha hath dikha

nahi dikani hain mujhe koyi hath and uttering angrily mukthi runs down while alia follows her instantly...

Hearing the door sound nandu looks towards door with corner of her eye and seeing aryaman approaching towards her tries to get up maintaining a straight face

ARYAMAN : ahhh it's ok baiti raho varna mehendi karab hojayegi

Nandu doesn't move while he taking few more steps sits beside her on the bed

ARYAMAN : wowww...!!!!!

nandu presses her lips inside turning her face a little away from him while he continues "mehendi tho kaafi sundar hain..!!!!"

ARYAMAN : and am sure kal jab rang layegi na thab aur bi sundar lagegi

Nandu sits staring at her hands completely lost and he not being able to control more "nandini..!!!"

she doesn't look him but just moves her hands a little gesturing him that she was listening

ARYAMAN : kal hamari shadi hain

main...thak...gayi...hoon...sona... chahthi...hoon...and hearing her choked voice he walks out instantly without turning back not uttering a single word knowing that she would burst out in no time...

Seeing aryaman walking down silently preeti moves inside nandu room while everyone else go behind her trying to calm her down...

PREETI : hua kya hain tujhe haaa

NYONIKA : preeti

PREETI : do din se sab tere aage peeche gumre hain...tujhse bath karre hain...lekin nahi...tujhe tho kisi ki shekal thak nahi dekhni hain...

RAJ : preeti dhere se bachi hain

PREETI : nahi bayya aaj nahi...do din se isne bohuth pareshan kiya hain...lekin ab isse hamare sawalo ka jawab dena hi hoga

auntyyy and kabir stopping her in mid moves close to nandu and sitting on ground in front of her "nandu"

nandu closes her eyes tightly lowering her head not wanting her tears to roll down while he looking her worriedly "kya bath hain...tu aise kyu behave karri"

Getting no reply from her preeti looses her calmness and "nandini tu bolegi bi ya nahi aisa kya hua hain sangeeth ke rath ki uske baad se tu apne kamre se bi bahar nahi nikalri hain..."

DHRUV : aunty please

PREETI : dhruv please kyaa...haa... aryaman ki vajah se aise thaise hamne haldi aur mehendi ki rasam sab ke samne nahi balki yaha iss kamre main sirf apne pariwar logon ke samne karne ka intezam kiya...jis main haldi ka rasam tho hua hi nahi...aur aaj mehendi ka rasam kaise hua ye tho ham janthe hi hain...

NYONIKA : preeti dekh

PREETI : nahi nyo teri vajah se isne aaj yahi iss kamre main baitke mehendi tho lagva liya hain lekin kal...kal ye yahi iss kamre main baitke shadi nahi kar sakthi hain...

KABIR : nandu kuch bolna

kal...shadi...hogi...yaha...nahi... mandap...pe...and uttering in mere audible tone nandu simply walks into washroom forcing everyone to walk out silently...

DHRUV : alia

ALIA : nandu se bath huyi

KABIR : haan

ALIA : kuch kaha usne

DHRUV : zyada nahi bas itna ki kal shadi hogi...mandap pe...

mukthi who was lying on bed sits straight lazily and laughing sarcastically "shadi...kal..!!!!"

KABIR : hath kaisa hain

ALIA : bandage kardiya hain maine zyada chot nahi lagi par thoda swelling hain

DHRUV : gusse main aise harkathe karne se kuch nahi hoga

MUKTHI : tho phir aur kya karu

KABIR : pehle apna gussa kam kar

MUKTHI : ye sab uss idiot ki vajah se hora hain...patha nahi us din kya kaha nandu se...jo wo iss tharah se badal gayi...

maine kuch nahi kaha...!!! and hearing aryaman voice everyone looks towards door while he walks inside and maine nandini se kuch nahi kaha...!!!!

DHRUV : aryaman wo gussa main hain

MUKTHI : dhruv just shut up

ARYAMAN : tum mera gussa uspe kyu uthar ri ho

MUKTHI : listen mr

KABIR : mukthi control

ARYAMAN : guys see I know tum main se mujhe koyi nahi pasandh kartha

MUKTHI : thank god kuch tho akal hain tum main

ARYAMAN : main sede point pe atha hoon darasal

MUKTHI : you know what main tumhe bathathi hoon seeda point

DHRUV : mukthi

MUKTHI : ye jo shadi hori hain na wo ham main se koyi bi nahi chahtha hain

DHRUV : kya karri pagal hogayi hain

MUKTHI : aur jis ladki se tumhari shadi hone vali hain naa wo tho bilkul bi nahi chahthi hain

KABIR : chup kar mukthi

Aryaman smiles and acha

MUKTHI : tum has kyu rahe ho haan main koyi mazak nahi karri hoon

ARYAMAN : jantha hoon isliye hasra hoon

MUKTHI : matlab

ARYAMAN : jo bath mujhe already patha hain usse agar tum chila chila ke bologi tho hasi tho ayegi na

ALIA : what

DHRUV : matlab

KABIR : nandu ne

ARYAMAN : nahi nandini ne kuch nahi kaha

ALIA : phir

ARYAMAN : tum sab ko nandini ne kaha ki wo iss shadi se kush nahi hain

MUKTHI : nahi

ARYAMAN : tho phir aap ko kaise patha

KABIR : bas patha hain

Aryaman smiles and exactly mujhe bi bas patha hain ki wo ye shadi nahi chahthi

MUKTHI : tho phir ye sab drama kyu

ARYAMAN : kya drama

ALIA : ye shadi ka drama

ARYAMAN : well as a friend main bi aap logon ki tharah nandini ki kushi chahtha hoon

DHRUV : bath kuch samaj nahi ayi

ARYAMAN : agar main nahi tho koyi aur ladke se nandini ki shadi hogi jo of course phir se koyi nahi chahtha

KABIR : haan tho

ARYAMAN : tho main bas shadi ka natak karra hoon aur kya

MUKTHI : what

ARYAMAN : mujhe laga nandini ko mere paas dekhe manik ko akal ajayegi aur wo dono ek sath hojayenge

ALIA : tumhe patha hain ki manik aur nandini

ARYAMAN : oh common andha nahi hoon main

MUKTHI : wo tho patha chel chuka hain

ARYAMAN : sangeeth ke din main jaan buchke nandini ko sabse door legaya thaki manik jale aur apne feelings ko express kare

DHRUV : lekin aisa kuch nahi hua

ARYAMAN : exactly...tumhara dosth uss incident ke baad se gayab hi hogaya...

KABIR : hamne bohuth koshish ki usse milne ki

ARYAMAN : maine bi

MUKTHI : are you serious

ARYAMAN : of course madam tumhe kya lagtha main ye sab time pass ke liye kehra hoon

KABIR : okk fine lets just go to nandini and talk to her

MUKTHI : nahi kabir wo kuch nahi kahegi

ARYAMAN : exactly initiative tho manik ko hi lena padega

ALIA : wo insan yaha rahe thab na

ARYAMAN : wohi thoo...wohi thoo problem hain maine tho socha bi nahi ki manik aise chela jayega... mujhe laga shayad naraz hain vapas ajayega...par...

DHRUV : tho ab

MUKTHI : akri din bacha hain dekhthe hain wo vapas atha hain ya

ARYAMAN : hmmm vaise uncle aunty kaise hain

KABIR : teek hi hain hamne hi unhe aram karne ko kaha

ARYAMAN : huhh chelo phir main cheltha hoon

KABIR : uhmmm tho kal shadi nahi hori na

ARYAMAN : manik aur nandini ki shadi ke bare main tho mujhe nahi patha lekin meri aur nandini ki shadi tho pakka nahi hori

KABIR : thanks man

ARYAMAN : chill bro formal baneki zarurath nahi hain

DHRUV : iss bath pe ek hug tho banthi hain shayad kyu

ARYAMAN : ofcourse

Three boys hug happily while two girls look them smiling and soon jump on dhruv and kabir pulling their hairs and laughing loud...

ARYAMAN : wooo u guys carry on I'll leave

DHRUV : yaaa byyy

ARYAMAN : byyy

In no time night ended...hours passed and the time for marriage came...people started running from one corner to another through out moorthy mansion busy with their own works enlightening the environment making it look like a marriage house...

raj and rakesh were checking preparations one last time wearing a sad fake smile while nyonika and
preeti were attending the guests controlling their tears...

arey bai dhulhan thayar hori bi ya nahi...do dino se ham ne usse dekha nahi hain...zara usse kahihe kam se kam aaj tho sabke samne aye...and hearing people talking and laughing about nandini nyonika and preeti walk towards her room to see if she was getting ready or not...

PREETI : mukthi...alia

MUKTHI : haa

NYONIKA : ham nandu ke paas jare hain tu sabko sambal

MUKTHI : teek hain aur haan jaldi aana sab ka tho teek hain lekin uss damini aunty ko sambal na mujhse nahi hoga

ALIA : haan wo vaise bi bohuth naraz hain aur shak bi karri hain ki kyu nandu do dino se bahar nahi ari

MUKTHI : uske sawalon ka jawab dena hamse nahi hoga

DHRUV : aur isliye ham aa gaye

KABIR : isliye just chill

NYONIKA : sambal ke ulta seeda jawab math dena kisi ko

KABIR : yesss

PREETI : chel nyo

NYONIKA : haan

RAKESH : preeti

PREETI : jee

RAKESH : nandu thayar hori na

PREETI : ham wohi dekhne jare the uske paas

RAJ : chelo sath main chelthe hain

NYONIKA : nandu

Nandu who was sitting in front of mirror lifts her head and looks nyonika in mirror

NYONIKA : tu ab thak thayar kyu nahi huyi

PREETI : neche sab agaye hain aur tujhe puch bi rahe hain

Not wasting a second nandu turns back in a swift and hugs preeti and nyonika ever so tightly crying so loudly...

NYONIKA : nanduuu

PREETI : bas kar bachi

moving back instantly nandu wipes her tears lowering her head...

RAJ : kya hua bache

RAKESH : tu teek hain na

closing her eyes nandu takes a deep breath and opening them slowly "maine.. jo..kuch.. bi..kiya.. uske..liye..am..am..sryy..and I..love..you..."

beta and before nyonika could complete a group of girls enter into room saying that they were make up girls arranged by damini and have to dress up nandu for marriage...

Having no option left raj,rakesh,nyo and preeti walk out leaving nandu behind letting her get ready...

ARYAMAN : hey

KABIR : hi

ARYAMAN : manik ka kuch patha chela

DHRUV : nahi abi thak nahi

ARYAMAN : ohhh

PREETI : aliaaa

ALIA : haan

PREETI : dekh na zara nandu thayar huyi ki nahi do gante ho gaye hain aur ab thak wo make up girls bahar nahi aye

MUKTHI : make up girls arey wo tho kaafi der pehle bahar agaye

PREETI : kyaa tho phir nandu kaha hain

MUKTHI : aap rukiye main aur alia dekhe athe hain

PREETI : teek hain

ALIA : nanduuu

MUKTHI : nanduuu

ALIA : baby you der

MUKTHI : nandiniii

KABIR : hello

ALIA : kabir...nandini

KABIR : nandini kyaaa

ALIA : wo wo kayi dikayi nahi deri hain

KABIR : what

ALIA : haa

KABIR : ham are

DHRUV : kya hua

KABIR : nandu nahi dikri

ARYAMAN : tum log jao main yaha ruk tha hoon

DHRUV : nanduuu

MUKTHI : hamne har jagah dekh liya

ALIA : wo kahi par nahi hain

KABIR : chath pe dekha

MUKTHI : haan

DHRUV : shayad manik

ARYAMAN : guysss

MUKTHI : kya hua tum itne tensed kyu hoo

KABIR : ye tum

MUKTHI : this can't be possible

ALIA : how can he

KABIR : goddd

DHRUV : nahi he cant just leave like that

ARYAMAN : guys mujhe bi kuch samaj nahi ara par ye sach hain manik was flying to london aur ye photographs mere khud ke friend ne beje hain to confirm me

MUKTHI : tho phir nandini

NYONIKA : nandiniii

PREETI : arey tum sab yaha nandu kaha hain

KABIR : wo nandini

NYONIKA : nandu...nandu...

DHRUV : wo nahi hain

ALIA : aur yaha na hi kisi ko milegi

PREETI : bahar gayi kya

NYONIKA : hame mili kyu nahi

MUKTHI : nandu...kahi dikh nahi rahi hain...

NYONIKA : dikh nahi rahi hain kya matlab

ALIA : hamne har jagah dekha usse par

RAJ : par..par kya

RAKESH : tum log kel tho nahi kelre ho na

RAJ : tum main se ye shadi koyi nahi chahtha isliye nandu ko chupaya na

KABIR : nahi uncle

RAJ : kaha hain nandu bolo...bolo meri beti kaha hain...

DHRUV : ham sach kehre hain nandu kaha hain ham main se koyi nahi jantha

PREETI : ek minute jab ham kamre main usse mile usne hame sry kaha...

NYONIKA : nahi..nahi...

PREETI : usne kuch kar tho nahi liya na apne aapko

RAKESH : ye kaisi bathe karri hain

NYONIKA : wo kisi ko dhuk nahi dena chahthi isliye hamesha sara dhuk khud hi lethi hain tho usne

RAJ : nahi nyonika hamari bachi itni kamzor nahi hain

NYONIKA : lekin agar manik ka barthav usse majboor bana diya ho tho

Knowing that it might be possible everyone's face turn pale and with in fraction of seconds before anyone could register anything preeti and nyonika fall on ground completely broken like a lifeless soul..
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Posted: 9 years ago
OMG! You finally updated. It was so much dramatic. Don't know what nandini will do now. And how can manik go like this. He is completely idiot. But loved it.🄱
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nice part...
bt i think i read it already...
u pm it some time back...
waiting fr the next...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Muje laga fresh update hai Sweet's
Dil tor diya aapne 🄺🄺

Maine already comments kar diya hai
Iss update ki... So just wanna say
Love you... Take care... Update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
nice update dear
all were really worried for nandu
first manik is missing n now nandu where are they?
cont soon
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