I like to read it till the latest update and lost the story in between and found it again so haven't commented, sorry
Really liked how you made Manan instant friends and love that fab 5 accepted nandani so quickly.
Nandani is cute in this with her antics but the best is Manik! Love his possessiveness. Poor guy thought a whole day that he forced nandani just cus silly nandani doesn't know how to express herself.
My favorite scene was the whispering in her ears I love you and nandani was so flustered. I could totally picture their expressions and everything. Manik with his signature smirk and her with her big eyes in shock like at the beginning of the show
Anyways thanks for a great story
You're a great great writer! And so creative too
Excited to read your other works
Please pm and buddy me :)
Thanks!