FF : journey to MaNan( chapter 4 pg 4) updated on 2 feb

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Character sketche

Manik malhotra: 24 year old rich ,handsome guy lives in malhotra mansion ,mumbai .He had done MBA.he is a son of Raj Malhotra the famous industrialist.manik is much into music while his dad want him to join malhotra industries.but he is not interested.fab5 is an integral part of his life his band.manik doesn't know about love .but know true value of friendship.

Fab5 members manik cabir dhruv mukti alya

Neonika: manik's mother. Wants to get him married with nandini murthy

Nandini murthy:22 year old beautiful girl. little introvert but when she became comfortable she has no issues with it.Lives in Mumbai .she is studying in last year of computer Engineering .her parents live in pune.nandini believe in love but friendship is important for her.
Her parents also.want them to get married

Manik and nandini don't want to get married at all.

What will happen in their lives ?how their journey will be?

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Index

Chapter 2 pg2
Chapter 3

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Posted: 9 years ago
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loved it
nice prologue
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Nice concept update soon. N pm me too if possible
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Navya :nandini's cousin sister,best friend who studies in her college with her .

Manik studied in same college campus where nandini is studying. But he is in MBA college. Ans she is in engineering college

Chapter 1

Nandini's home:
It was a new day nandini woke up just when she heard chirping sound of birds.

She was feeling damn sleepy but still she managed to make a good tea and took a bath get ready as she has to reach her college.

It was her last paper of this semester.
Nandini was very happy as her exam was going end and also as her parents were going to visit her in Mumbai.
As soon as she got ready she heard door bell rang. She ran from there as fast as possible as she knew that if ahe got late navya will not spare her

And she was right it was navya
Navya: Kya kar rahi ho nandini .hua ya nahi tumhara.?
Nandini started to wear shoes and said arrre chalo am ready
Both started to move to go to college

Malhotra mansion:

Neonika: manik kabse jaga rahi hoo beta uth jao papa wait karenge breakfast table PE aa Jana
Manik; kya hai mom its just 7.45 aur aap aaise bol rahe ho
Neonika: manik billul nakhare nahi jaldi aa jao niche
Saying this she leaves his room

At nandini's college

Nandini: aaiyappa aaj ka paper achha chala jaye .Maine achhe se padhai kar li hai.

Navya: nandu chalo time ho gaya hai exam ka

Nandini's came out from her thoughts and goes to class room.

Malhotra mansion

Manik lazily came to down stairs and had a breakfast.
Raj:good morning beta
Manik also wishes him and neonika also.
Raj: so aaj college Jane ka plan hai ya mere sath office aoge
Manik got irritated but managed to say that he was going to college calmly
Malhotra family had their breakfast and manik also went for college

In nandini's college

Exams to finished and as her parents were going to meet her she was happy.

So as soon as she came out from classroom she says bye to navya and started to walk to reach to a taxi.but then she saw a small kitten in the middle of parking lot. She started to move so that she can took that kitten and place her in safe side.
But she saw one car is as moving very fast toward her so she started to run.

And took that kitten in hands .but car didn't stopped. Nandini closed her eyes very tightly. But someone pulled her and saved her from that car.

When she opened her eyes she looked around her it was guy who saved her from this car but she couldn't saw him as she could only see him from backside.

The but who saved her from car was manik
Car stopped in parking lot

Car's owner was Harshad he came out from car .
Manik: I should have guessed that I must be you. Jo samne ladki ko dekhake bhi car side nahi kar sakata tha
Harshad: manik chill tune toh usse baccha liya na she is alive na so leave it

Manik was really angry but he knew that it was of no use to talk with him so he started to move to see a girl

Nandini puts kitten down in safe place and started to go towards him thank him for saving her.

She saw the guy was fighting with the owner of that car.
But she got disturbed because of taxi wala bhaiya

Taxi wala:madam apko chalna hai ya nahi
So she turn her back and sit into taxi

But she dropped her scarf manik didn't saw her face but he saw that she dropped her scarf

Taxi started to move.

Manik goes there and picked her scarf
And though himself that how someone can be so careless she saved that kitten but what about her
But he was smiling unknowingly

He came out of these thoughts when he heard someone was calling him.

At nandini's home:
When nandini reached her home her parents were already present.

She hugged her mom tightly as soon as she meets her.
Her mom made a payasam as she likes it very much.
So she gave it to her and made her sit her Father also came there

They had happy family time

So how was first part guys let me know through your likes and comments
Stay happy .stay blessed😊

Love,
sonpri

Edited by sonpri - 9 years ago
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amazing update
loved it
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Awesome update. Sorry for commenting late. Actaully i am not able to find the story. Thanks for the pm. Waiting for the next part. Continue soon. Tack care. 😊
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Chapter 2 (promo)


Nandini: aryamaan kya hai?kyu bulaya muzhe aaise yaha?

Aryamaan: nandini murthy slow down .I know k Maine tumhe aaise yaha jaldi jaldi bulaya hai.

Nandini: kuch important baat hai kya?

Aryamaan: I don't know nandini mai tumse yeh kaise kahoon par I have to say this to you

Aryamaan: I want to tell you that you are really mean a lot to me and you are important part of my life.

Aryamaan: nandini I want to tell you that that "I love you"
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Chapter 2

Nandini was having happy time with her parents.On the other hand manik was having fun with his friends. They were partying.

At nandini's home
Nandini helped her mother in kitchen.
Her father went to sleep and she was sitting with her mother.
They were having a coffee.
Reshma: nandu beta aage kya socha hai?
Nandini: mom sochna kya hai ? As soon as I complete my degree then I will search for job.
Reshma: beta woh actually I was asking you about your future.
Nandini: haan toh wahi bata rahi hoon mom.
Reshma: accha per aryamaan kaisa lagta hai tumhe?do you like him?

As soon as her mom asked this question she got into trance

******************FLASHBACK****************
On last valentines day
Nandini was standing with navya and aryamaan Called her.
Aryamaan : nandini come fast I am waiting in cafe.

Nandini "pata nahi aryamaan aaj kal bahot ajeeb si harkate kr raha hai" tumhe nahi lagta navya she said looking at navya.
Navya: haan hame toh lagta hai yeh kisi ke pyaar mai paad gaya hai .

Nandini: tumhi na navya kuch bhi sochti rahati ho
Chalo mai usse milke aati hoon
Saying this she went to meet aryamaan.
When she reached there she saw aryamaan who was standing near corner table.
Nandini: aryamaan kya hai?kyu bulaya muzhe aaise yaha?
Aryamaan: nandini murthy slow down .I know k Maine tumhe aaise yaha jaldi jaldi bulaya hai.
Nandini: kuch important baat hai kya?
Aryamaan: I don't know nandini mai tumse yeh kaise kahoon par I have to say this to you
Nandini: tum aaise suspense kyu rakhbrahe ho batao na jaldi.
Aryamaan: I want to tell you that you are really mean a lot to me and you are important part of my life.
Nandini: haan I know that that's why we are good friends right?
Aryamaan: nandini I want to tell you that that "I love you"
*************************** flashback ends *********************



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Edited by sonpri - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow.. Tht is a nyc stryline.. Bt plz.. Dnt pair up wit aryman.. I hate t wn a persn s commtd n dy fal n luv wit nthr one... Bt wud luv t c he ur stry flows... Eagerly waitin

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