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Originally posted by: ruchi116

Nice cs update soon



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I will update soon...
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Regarding the story

Nandini n navya both doing different course so they are not in same college.

Raj n nyo not see the navya bcoz cabir want to surprise them.

Chapter-1

13 feb,2014...

A girl is hugging a boy.

Boy-"mom ne ha kardi. Wo chahti hai ki hamari engagement jald se jald ho jaye. Wo tumhare parents se bat karengi."

Girl broke the hug n with smile...

Girl-"ayyappa thank you so much..."

Boy-"sab tumhare ayyappa ke liye mere liye kuch nahi."

Girl-"tumare liye me hu."

Boy-"tum mere pas ho to I don't need anything."

Girl-"I love you arya."

Arya-"I love you too nandu."

Na-"mujeh yakin hi nahi ho raha ki yeh sab sach me ho raha hai. I mean before 2 months u propose me n then today your mom accept me. It is like dream."

Aryaman cups her chicks.

Arya-"it is real nandini."

N aryaman is going to kiss her but she turn her face.

Arya-"hamari relationship ko 2 months hua hai fir bhi kitana samati ho tum. Agar kisiko pata chala ki aryaman khurana ne apni would be wife ko abhi tak kiss bhi nahi kiya to log kya kahenge."

Na-"are u serious arya...?"

Arya-"no sweetheart I m just joking... take your time I will never force u for anything."

Aryaman say it lovingly. Listing to this tears fall down from her eyes. Aryaman kiss her tears.

Arya-"love I cannot see tears in your beautiful eyes so plz... don't cry."

Na-"I don't know what I did that I got you."

Arya-"ye saval to mujeh puchana chahiye. I m luckiest guy in this whole world bcoz I have you."

Aryaman got a call.

Arya-"sweetheart say..."

Girl-"where r u...?"

Arya-"I m busy in some work."

He say looking towards nandini.

Girl-"bhai I know aap konse kam me busy ho..."

Aryaman stated blushing.

Arya-"navu to kuch jyada nahi bolne lagi aaj kal...?"

Nv-"no bhai ab to nandu meri officially bhabhi bananevali hai."

Arya-"kyu call kiya tha tune...?"

Nv-"ha...ha... ab hume to bhool hi jaoge na aap girlfriend jo hai sathme."

Arya-"wooo... wo... aisa kuch nahi hai choti."

Nv-"ha...ha... sab samjati hu me. Wo mom ko hospital le jana tha regular check up ke liye."

Arya-"ha me abhi aata hu nandu ko drop karke."

Nv-"bhai apana dhyan driving me rakhana aur kahi nahi, u know kuch bhi ho sakta hai."

Arya-"choti tu bas wait kar jab cabir aur tu bf-gf ban jaoge na tab me batata hu tujeh."

Nv-"bhai yeh to iss janam me honese raha. Mujeh lagta hai just I love him n he has no feeling for me. Just chuck it bhai. Aap ghar pe aao hum bad me bat karte hai."

Arya-"thik hai choti. Bye."

Nv-"bye."

Aryaman disconnect the phone n turn towards nandini.

Arya-"nandu wo mom ko check up ke liye le ke jana hai."

Na-"it is ok arya. U go I will go by texi."

Arya-"no way I going to drop u. come on."

Na-"thik hai."

N they both left. Aryaman drop nandini at her PG.(nandini is living in PG bcoz her family is in manglor)

At aryaman's house.

Arya-"chalo mom."

Meera-"kaha jana hai...?"

Arya-"hospital choti ne call kiya tha."

Meera-"nahi hum kahi nahi ja rahe hai."

Arya-"to choti ne call kyu kiya."

Meera-"kyuki mene kaha tha use."

Arya-"mom aap ne jooth kyu bola aap aise hi bolte to me aa jata."

Meera-"I know but tumhe nandini ko to kuch kehna padata. Isi liye mene ye kiya."

Arya-"but why mom...?"

Navya come there.

Nv-"bcoz aapko nandu k parents ko airport se lene jana hai."

Arya-"what...?"

Nv-"ha. Mom ne unse bat karli hai aur wo aapse milane kal aa rahe hai."

Meera-"aur ha nandu k liye ye surprise hai."

Aryaman become happy n hug his mom.

Arya-"you are best mom. I love you."

Aryaman kiss on her chicks.

Meera-"I love you too."

Nv-"mujeh to sab bhool hi gaye."

Arya-"ohhh... my choti tu bhi aaja."

They share a good family hug n after that aryaman go to his room. He come inside n look door. After sometime someone knock the door.

Arya-"come in."

Navya come inside.

Arya-"tumhe kabse knock karne ki jajurat pad gayi...?"

Nv-"wo... kya hai na bhai me aadat dal rahi hu kyoki jab nandu aayegi as your wife tab me nahi chahti ki me aap dono ko koi compromising position me dekhu."

Saying this she started running.

Arya-"achcha tu ruk me abhi batata hu tuje."

They started running in room.

Nv-"bhai bas... me jo kehne aai thi voto kehne do."

Arya-"thik hai bol."

Nv-"bhai kal valentine day hai to aap ne nandu k liye kuch liya k nahi."

Aryaman smile n go towards drawer n put a box in front of navya.

Nv-"bhai bolo na kya laye ho aap."

Arya-"tu khudhi dekhle."

Navya open the box n shocked...surprise what not...

Nv-"bhai this is...this is so beautiful. Aap yeh ring denevale ho nandu ko...?"

Arya-"nhi tere liye hai. Ofcouse nandu ke liye hi hogi na."

Nv-"not bad bhai. Ok ab me chalti hu."

Arya-"thik hai."

Navya left the room n aryaman start the preparation to surprise nandu.

Other side at malhotra mansion.

All servants are running here n there to check all the preprations. A boy is standing at bar n smiling like fool. Another boy come there.

Boy2-"why r u smilling like a fool...?"

Boy1-"bro... tu nahi samjega."

Boy2-"kyu nahi samjuga, tujeh janta hu me."

Boy1-"bcoz it is all about love manik, jo bina feel kiye samja nahi jata."

Mnk-"but cabir..."

Cbr-"manik me navya ko kal yaha lake propose karnevala hu. Pata nahi wo kya bolegi."

Mnk-"I know she loves you bro..."

Cbr-"I don't know yarr."

A lady come there.

Lady-"cabir tumhare pyar ko wo thukara nahi payegi."

Cbr-"mom aap sach me ye sochati hai...?"

Nyo-"ha... kyuki mera yeh beta navya se bahot pyar karta hai."

Mnk-"mujeh to sab bhool hi gaye."

Cbr-"ha waise bhi mom loves me more than you."

Mnk-"mom tell him that u love me more."

Nyo-"bas...bas... I love you both."

N they hug each other. A man come there.

Man-"hello...is ghar me me bhi rehta hu."

Mnk-"dad aap... aap to do din bad aanevale the na...?"

Raj-"ha... par mera beta kal navya ko propose karnevala hai so how can I miss that."

Cbr-"dad I love you."

Raj-"I love you too."

Nyo-"manik ab tum bhi koi achchisi ladki dhoondh lo apane liye."

Mnk-"kya mom aap bhi..."

Cbr-"mom sahi bol rahi hai. Mom aapko to pataho hai ki college ki sari ladkiya, meri navya ko chod ke ispe marti hai aur he janab ek bhi larki se bat to kya dekhate bhi nahi."

Mnk-"I m waiting for a right girl mom."

Cbr-"aur wo right girl kab aayegi jab to 60 ka ho jayega...?"

Mnk-"pata nahi."

Nyo-"ab baki bate badme karna, pehle kuch khalo."

They dinner n then left to their room.

14 feb,2014

Nandini is getting ready to meet aryaman n someone come from back n hug her.

Na-"arya tum andar kaise aaye..."

Arya-"tum bhool gayi I have keys of house. Waise happy valentine day love."

Na-"happy valentine day."

Aryaman slid the ring in here finger.

Na-"arya ye..."

Arya-"shhh... I know tum yeh janana chahti ho ki mujeh is ring ke bare me kaise pata...?"

Nandini nodded like a child.

Arya-"jab 2 din pehle tum choti ke sath shopping pe gayi na tab me tum dono ko pick karne aane vala tha. Me thoda jaldi aa gaya tha that time I saw u looking at this ring so I decided to buy for you. Waise yeh me tumhe engagement pe pehnanevala tha but I just cannot wait to mark you as mine. And this ring mark u as mine."

Na-"I love you."

Arya-"I love yu baby. Mera gift kaha hai...?'

Nandini feeling shy.

Na-"arya plz... close your eyes."

Arya-"ok."

Arya close his eyes n nandini kiss his chicks. Aryaman open his eyes. N nandini blush.

Arya-"ohh my god... what is this you kiss me... it is real or I m dreaming."

Nandini chichs become dark red.

Arya-"ohhh... my baby is to much inoccent."

Aryaman hugs her. Arya got a call n after attending call he come to nandini.

Arya-"baby sorry I know ki aaj ka din mujeh tumare sath bitana chahiye par ek important meeting ke liye mujeh pune jana hoga. I m sorry."

Na-"it is ok. U go but come soon."

Arya-"I will come back before evening."

Na-"ok."

Aryaman kiss nandini's chick n left from there. In car arya call navya.

Arya-"choti mujeh ek imporant meeting ke liye pune jana pad rahahe so plz... tum jake nandu k parents ko le aana."

Nv-"it is ok bhai."

Navya go n receive nandini's parents from airport. All reach at arya's house n nandini is already there.

Na-"amma... appa aap yaha..."

She hug them.

Amma-"ha meeraji ne hume tumhare aur aryaman ke bare me bataya so hum aa gaye. Kaisi hai kannna tu...?"

Na-"amma I m fine."

Appa-"tu khush haina kanna..."

Na-"ha appa bahot."

They are talking n nandini's phone rings. Nandini pick the call but after listing the news the phone fall down from her hand n see sit on the flor. All look at nandini n rush towards her.

Meera-"nandu kya hua...?"

Nv-"nandu kon tha phone par...?"

But nandini doesn't say anything n sit there like lifeless person navya pick the phone n she ask the caller what happened n after listing news see cut the call.

Meera-"navu kya hua...?"

Nv-"mom bhai..."

Meera-"kya hua arya ko...?"

Nv-"mom bhai ka accident ho gaya aur..."

N she cannot say anything started crying.

Meera-"kya hua mere bete ko...?"

Nv-"mom...mom... bh... bhai... is... is no more."

After saying this she started crying. All happiness converted into sadness.they rushed to the hospital. Nandini doesn't say anything she is just there like lifeless body.

Other side at navay's college.

Cabir is waiting for navya.

Muk-"cabir... chill wo aa jayegi."

Mnk-"ha cabir."

Cabir just smile at them he wait whole day but navya doesn't come.

Drv-"cabir koi bat nahi kal bol dena."

Alia-"but kal to Sunday hai."

Muk-"to Monday ko bol dena. Wo thodina kahi bhagija rahi hai."

Cabir doesn't say anything n eft from there. Manik follow him.

Mnk-"cabir sunn..."

Cabir stop there.

Mnk-"cabir wo kahi fas gayi hogi."

Cbr-"manik pata nahi bahot hi ajeebsa feel ho raha hai. Plz... wo thik ho."

Mnk-"bro... wo thik hogi aur wo Monday ko college aaye tab bata dena."

N all left for home.

At night arya's house.

All the rituals are done n now only family members are there. Nandini doesn't say anything till now. She just crying. Afetr sometime she speck something.

Na-"kyu... kyu chale gaye mujeh chod ke...? Kya galati ti meri...?"

Another girl come there.

Nv-"nandu sambhalo apne aap ko."

Na-"navu kya galti thi meri ki me usse pyar karti thi...? Bola na... yeh galti thi meri."

Navya also start crying.

Nv-"bas karo nandu wo wapis nahi aa sakte. Wo jaha gaye hai waha se wo kabhi lot k nahi aa sakte. Plz don't cry."

Appa-"nandu vapas ghar chal kanna."

Nandini look at her father.

Amma-"manglor chal wapas."

Nv-"ha... nandu tumhari puri zindagi padi hai aage."

Meera-"tum aage bad jav. Bhool jav jo hua wo."

Na-"mom pyar koi bandhan nahi hota. Me arya se pyar karti thi, karti hua aur jarti rahugi."

Rahul-"ha beta tum kyu nahi samjati arya nahi aayega wapas."

Na-"me janti hu ki wo nahi aayega wapas. Par wo nahi hai to kya aap sab to hona."

Nandini go to meera n hold her hand in her.

Na-"mom aapka beta nahi hai par aapki bahu to hai na... mom dad kya aap apni bahu ko apn sath nahi rakhenge, kya arya ke jane se aap sab se mera koi rishta nahi...? Me janti hu ki hamari engagement bhi nahi hui par kya ye sab maine rakhta hai...?"

Rahul-"par beta tum kyu nahi samj rahi ye thik nahi hai."

Na-"dad plz... arya ke janese aap par kya bit rahi hai janti hu me. Mene arya ko kho diya hai ab aapko nahi khona chahti."

Meera cannot say anything she just go n hug her.

Na-"mom aajse ghar ki sari responsibility meri. Me job karungi."

Nv-"mom mere college ki fees bahot jyada hai me to koi bhi college me pad sakti hu. Me kalhi jake leaving certificate le aaugi."

Na-"navu is ki koi jarurat nahi hai. I will manage."

Nv-"nahi nandu to pehlehi bahot kuch kar rehi hai plz..."

Navya go to her room n nandini follow her.

Na-"navu me janti hu ki tu cabir se pyar karti hai."

Nv-"ab kuch nhi ho sakta."

Na-"kya kuch nahi ho sakta. Tu jake usase bat kar wo samjega."

Nv-"mujeh yeh pyar me padanahi nahi hai. Teri halat dekhi mene. Pyar dard ke alava kuch aur nahu deta."

Na-"mere sath aisa hua iska matalab yeh nahi ki sab ke sath yehi ho."

Nv-"nandu plz... mujeh ab kuch nahi sunana."

Nandini left room.

At hall.

Meera-"rahul me soch eahi thi ki karan ki scool fees, navya ki college fees n baki ghar ke sare expenses nandu akele kese manage karegi."

Rahul-"me bhi yahi soch raha tha."

Meera-"me kya soch rahithi ki yeh ghar bech dete hai aur ek ghar rent pe lelete hai aue baki ke paiso ko bank me rakh dete hai so uske interest se sare expenses nikal jayenge."

Rahul-"thik keh rahi ho tum."

Meera-"aapko pata hai jab arya ne mujeh nandu aur usake bare me bataya tab me soch rahi thi ki ek south indian girl hamare punjabi family me adjust kar payegi. Nandu bahot achchi larki hai par mera dil man nahi raha tha par arya ki khushi ke liye mene ha kardi. Par aaj me soch rahi hu ki is larki ke liye me na bolna chahti thi."

Rahul-"mera ek friend hai jo mujeh is ghar ke bareme bat kar raha tha me usase bat karta hu."

Next day.

Navya go to college get L.C n rahul's friend say yes to buy the house. They left that house till night n go to a rented house.

On Monday.

Cabir is waiting for navya but she doesn't come so, he go to admin office for her address n cabir get the biggest shock of life that navya changed the college. Cabir go from there.

Mnk-"cabir kaha ja raha hai...?"

Cbr-"navya changed here college."

Fab4-"what..."

Cbr-"yes."

Mnk-"cabir chal uske ghar chalte hai."

Drv-"ha chal cabir."

They all go to navya's house n they get another shock that they leave house yesterday. Cabir broke down.

Mnk-"buddy sambhal apane aap ko."

Muk-"ha cabir tu aise tut nahi sakta."

Cbr-"kya bacha hai ab wo chali gayi. Manik me bol raha tha kuch galat hai. Wo chali gayi."

N he stared crying. All hugged him. Then they go to home. Manik inform his mom n dad all thing. They decide to send them out of country. N after a week FAB5 left the country.

So here is 1 chapter sabse big chapter bcoz I want to write about presenr track so past ko ek hi chapter me khatam kar diya

Precap- after 2 years...

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey nice and long update thanks for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
#35
Great !!!!!
Now suspension
Can't wait
Update soon
And thanks for the PM
Edited by 12345niyati - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Amazing update
continue soon
thanks for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Actually, i don't want to read this story sorrie.. Tik hai na arya mar gaya, story was going awesome..M going to read all your stories accept this one, like seriously without marriage typical bahu and all just can't handle it man. Thankyou for pm..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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thanks for the long update
love the bonds u showed in the relations that were made by heart.
plz make my cabiraa happy I really love him and can't see him sad.
update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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nice update its emotional interesting continue thanks for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Emotional start. Waiting too how vl nandani be able to move on in her life.
N about ur other story. I think its fair u should give importance to every character

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