MANAN OS -AASHIQUI on Page- 17 ) 20/dec/2015 - Page 6

Created

Last reply

Replies

140

Views

18k

Users

82

Likes

372

Frequent Posters

urvisaini thumbnail
16th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail Networker 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
#51
Nice start
Nandini trying to move..that's like a kick start

Loved it

Btw which song was it

Continue soon

Thanks for the pm
aarohi_angel98 thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail Networker 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
#52
Amazing update...
Very well written...
Loved it to the core...
Cont soon...


LOVE,
AAROHI...
sreesri thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
#53
Wow yaar..luvd it 2 d core..continue soon..
diyaNarwal thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 9 years ago
#54
Thank you SooO much Guys for ur lovely comments and likes and sholly couldn't reply ur comments ...hell busy ...so here I come up with a update ...I hope you guys like it ...ENJOY😛

PART-1(A)

Manik was driving and nandani was sitting beside him ...she was just looking outside the window ...she is in deep thought ...


Nandani Pov :

Life ...log kehte ha ki jab pyar hota ha ...toh aapki life magical ho jatti ha ...voh aapko itni khushiyan deta ha ki aap apne aapko sabse special feel karne lagte ho ...par ...meri zindagi... main pyar aaya par uss pyar ko meri kadar hi naa thi ...shayad ...main hi badkismat hu ...yaa shayad kissi ke pyar ke laayak nahi ...kyunki hoti toh shayad esa naa hota mere saath ...aaj jab manik ko dekha toh mujhe apne liye dard aur pyar nazar aaya...shayad issiliye maine usse yaha se bahar nikalne ko kaha ...main usse mana kar kar usss darkness main nahi bhejhna chahti thi jaha main khud hu ...pyar karta ha voh mujhse...par nahi jaanta ki main kissi se pyar nahi kar paaungi ...kyunki pyar toh bas ek hi baar hota ha naa ...aur voh ...voh toh maine kar liya ...toh kya hua ki mera pyar adhura reh gaya ...toh kya hua iss pyar ne mujhe dard ke alawa kuch nahi diya ...toh kya hua ussne mujhe ek esi andheri galliyon main chod diya jahan se vapas aana namunkin ha ...par maine toh usse pyar kiya ha naa ...sacche dill se ...aur shayad issiliye aaj usse hate bhi sacche dill se hi karti hu ...par ek sawal jiska jawab mujhe jaanana ha ...WHY ME? WHY U LEFT ME? WHY U BROKE ME? WHY U SAID THAT U LOVE ME ? WHY U ALWAYS CARE FOR ME WHEN U WANT TO LEFT ME? WHY? shayad in sawalo ke jawab mujhe kabhi nahi milege ...I just hate him ...hate him from the core of my heart ...


A lone tear came from her eyes ...manik who was just looking at her ...observing her ...knows how she must be feeling but he needs to heal her ...to tell her ...he is always be with her through it didn't effect her much but it gives her relief ...
Maybe an assurance that someone is there who just love her ...without any condition just love her ...who doesn't want anything just smile which left her face from five years ...he wants to give her that smile back ...he stops the car ...that breaks her trance ...she come out of the thought and looked at the place ...who is looking like a hill ...she looked at manik


Nandani confusingly said : why are we here


Manik smiled and said : To get some answers ...


He get down of the car ...makes her to come outside ...


Nandani coldly said : kya keh rahe ho tum ...hosh main toh ho ...


Manik smiled bcz he expect this ...he cupped her face and lovingly said


Manik lovingly said : ANDHERA KO ANDHERA NAHI SIRF ROSHNI MITA SAKTI HA ...NAFRAT KO NAFRAT NAHI SIRF PYAR MITA SAKTA...JAB TAK USSE NAFRAT KAROGI KHUDKO TAKLIF HI DOGI ...USE MAAF KAR DO TAAKI AAGE BADD SAKO ISS ZINDAGI MAIN ...JAANTA HU KEHNA AASAN HA ...AUR KARNA MUSHKIL ...par karna hoga tumhe yeh ...apne liye ...maa papa ke liye ...amms ke liye ...apni friend ke liye jo bahot pyar karti ha tumse ...mere liye jo tumhe ese nahi dekh sakta ...koshish karo nandani ...problem se bhagna uska solution nahi hota ...uska solution usse face karna hota ha ...baat karo nandani ...please jo bhi ha nikal do ...jitna dard ha usse bahar nikal do taaki khushi paa sako tum ...jiski hak daar ho tum ...


Nandani was just looking at him in shock ...she didn't understand what was happening ...why he is saying like this ...suddenly she saw someone is standing in the hill ...his back is facing towards them...nandani couldn't believe in her eyes ...all just could she managed to say


Nandani shockingly said : Druv ...


Druv turned around and looked at them ...tears were flowing from her eyes ...the memories just started flashing ...she is not able to stand ...manik holds her hand and said


Manik : Go and get ur answers ...


Nandani looked with tearfully eyes ...he kissed her forehead and wiped her tears and make her go ...


Manik Pov :

I promised you Nandani to get u out of this darkness and this is the only way to get u out of this darkness ...this is the only way u get peace ...this is the only way you get ur smile back ...my love is not my weakness nandani ...my love is for you is my strength ...that strength makes me ...force me to do this ...I want ur happiness Nandani ...just ur happiness ...I love u Nandani ...I love u a lot ...




So how's it Guys
Well I hope you guys like it ...I knew it's short ...but I hope you guys like it ...chalo agar aachi lage toh comment or likes karna mat bhulna ...aur socho ki ab kya hoga ...kya Nandani druv ko maaf kar degi? Kya manik ka pyar nandani ko ek nayi zindagi de paayega ...
Love you all
Keep loving
Keep smiling
And
Keep shining For Ur loved ones
Love
Diya😛

Edited by diyaNarwal - 9 years ago
NiyaJaiswal thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
#55
nyc concept...
lill short bt loved it...
written very beautifully...
update soon..
fireflies10 thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
#56
amazing update loving manik's character loved it update soon
rushagree thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
#57
nic update
plz update next part soon
Tiara115 thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
#58
Aww..it was too cute...
This true love which doesn't expect anything in return... just the if happiness. .
Do update soon
Waiting eagerly
Dhingli44 thumbnail
9th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 9 years ago
#59
Speechless di...
Spellbound I am..
Aba ap hi aochlo kitna acha hai ye..
Especially the words you have used..Nandu's POv ❤️
I LOVED IT.
⭐️ 👏
aarohi_angel98 thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail Networker 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
#60
Amazing update...
Very well written...
Loved it to the core...
Cont soon...


LOVE,
AAROHI...

Related Topics

Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".