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Posted: 9 years ago


Amazing amazing promo..

Wow they are getting married. ..

Very very interesting update.

Looking forward to seeing more soon. .

Thanks for sharing dear..




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Posted: 9 years ago

Chapter 19 B


Manik's POV..


"I will not wear this..!"I roared once again and threw the Sherwani away..! Max and Cabir palmed their faces..! Jack hide behind bed board as he was really scared of my gusa While Tiger was sitting total unaware from his surroundings with earphones stuffed in his ears..!


"Manik dekh bhai pehan lay..!"Max pleaded..


"You think I will wear this stupid sherwani..!"I roared again..


"Manik..! You will look like a prince charming in it..!"Jack said in a sugary voice still hidden behind the bed...!


"Teri tou..!"I yelled and run to punch him..!


"Tiger..! Bachaoa..!"Jack shouted and hide behind Tiger..


"You moron chup q raha hai..!"I shouted and finally Tiger stood up..


"Calm down you all..!"He said softly and then look at me..!


"Tiger dekh na yaar they all want me to wear this stupid sherwani for my own birthday party..!"I said hell annoyed..


"Manik..! You are going to get married with Nandini once again tonight that's why they all want you to wear this..!"Tiger said in a straightforward tone and I sighed..!


"Tiger..! Why you spoiled the surprise..!"Cabir said angrily..


"Yeah..! We wanted to surprise Manik..!"Max too said sadly..


"Come on guys..! You think wo bina reason k ya sherwani pehny ga? You can't hide all this from him..!"Tiger said casually and I smiled..


"Guys..! There is no need of all this..!"I said softly and sat on the bed..


"Q bay? Need q nahi hai..! You have to marry our sister in front of everyone..! We have called all your business friends everyone..! Give her the deserved honor man..! The honor which she deserves being Malhotra's daughter in law..!"Jack said sitting beside me and wrapped his arm around my shoulder...! Hearing the word honor my mind roamed towards Nandini and Tiger being siblings..! I was unsure of their reactions. I had a doubt that Nandini will feel really hurt..! What if Tiger's father came to know about Nandini's existence..! Ahhh These Dad's always so cruel..!


"What are you thinking man?"Cabir shook my shoulder..


"Ummm nothing..! Ok alright..! But how will we manage all functions at a time?"I asked..


"Tu us ki tension na lay..! Don't underestimate fab 5 yaar..! First you and Nandini will perform the necessary rituals us k liye we want you to wear this sherwani as Nandini is also wearing some traditional according to girls party..!"Max said shrugging his shoulders...


"After that you can change if you want to..! Phir reception pay we will cut your birthday cake..! Baat khatam..!"Cabir clicked his fingers and I sighed..


"You all are impossible.!"I said annoyed because of their stupid arrangements..


"Aray humy chood bhai..! Tu ja aur change kar time ni hai hmry pass..! In evening you have to get married and in night tery ko birthday boy I mean man bana'na hai..! "Jack said and pushed me inside the bathroom..! I gave him a 'tjy dekh loon ga' glare and went inside the bathroom..!


"Kya pata Jack koi dreamgirl mil jye aj kay funtion me..!"I heard Cabir's playful sigh and I smiled. Both of them were totally useless..

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I was alone in my room and was gelling my hair when I heard girls shouts that means Nandini was back..! I immediately ended up my gelling session and was about to step out of the room when suddenly Mukti pushed me back..


"What? Is Nandini back?"I asked excitedly as she must be looking beautiful in wedding dress..


"You are not allowed to see her..!"Mukti said pushing me more inside..


"What the hell? She is my wife tu hat peechy..!"I roared..


"Oncha bool k gala phaadny ka koi faida nahi hai..!"Cabir came with his taunt..


"Kya yaar Manik..! Third class Romeo ki trha q behave kar ra hai..!"Jack said and my blood boiled..


"Third class Romeo kis ko bola tu ny?"I shouted and was about to grab his collars when Tiger came between us..


"Stop it..!"He said coldly..


"Mukti..! Alya is calling you..! Nandini is not comfortable with her shoes..!"Max came and said casually..! What her shoes must be hurting..!


"What happened to her? Is she ok? Ziada dard ho ra hai usy kya?"I asked worriedly..


"Manik let us handle her..!"Mukti said politely but I pushed her away and run to see Nandini..! I heard my friends shout behind me as they all followed...

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Nandini's POV..


"Alya these shoes..! It's hurting very much..!"I said to Alya again as she made me sit on my bed I was all ready for the marriage ceremony but shoes were so annoying..! Before Alya could say anything the room door banged open and Manik rushed in..!


"Baby? Ziada dukh ra hai? Show me..!"He said worriedly and sat in my feet..! All others too came in and I was so embarrassed..


"Manik..! Kya kar rahy hain ap? Get up..!"I said softly and tried to made him get up..


"Aray abhi Max told that your shoes are hurting..!"He said still hell worried. He held my feet and started removing my shoes ..


"Manik no..!"I tried to push him he was touching my feet..! That too like this it was so embarrassing..! What must his friends thinking..?


"Guys..! Come out..!"Suddenly Tiger bhai said and all run out..! Leaving us alone..!


"Manik..! Get up..!"I said softly and finally he got up..! "Kya kar rahy hain ap..! Why are you touching my feet..! Ap kay friends kya soch rhy hoon gay?"I complaint as he sat beside me..


"Nothing matters to me..! Why are you feeling so embarrassed...! Listen it's ok..! My friends know me so koi tension ni..!"He said casually and I smiled..


"I know baba..! I know you care for me..! But acha ni lagta na..!"I said lovingly and cupped his left cheek. He snuggled in my palm and suddenly he held my hand..


"Wow..!"He uttered staring at my hands..! I smiled more brightly..! He was constantly staring at my hena cladded palms..!


"Will you keep staring? Tareef nahi karen gay?"I asked playfully and in response he kissed my palms..! Then he look at me and made me stand..! Then he took two steps back and scanned me from head to toe..!



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Posted: 9 years ago

Chapter 19 C




"I love you..!"He said in a hurry shaking his head and pulling me towards him he slammed our lips..! For a second or so I was shocked but then I too replied with equal favor as my hands traveled in his hair..! He was not letting me go though I was going short of breath..! I forcefully broke the kiss he panted heavily..


"Manik..! Relax..!"I shushed him by tracing my fingers in his hair and he joined our foreheads..!


"You are so beautiful..!"He whispered in my ear and I smiled..


"You are not less too..!" I said playfully and he laughed loudly.. he was really looking awesome in that white sherwani!




"Acha your shoes..! Should I order more?"He was back in his caring mood..



"Manik Nandini..! We don't have time for your romance..!"Before I can speak Cabir bhai shouted from outside..! Manik rolled his eyeballs and I rested my head on Manik's chest finding solace..

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Manik's POV..


"Dulhan ko bulaye..!"Pandit spoke after I sat in mandap. I must say the arrangements were so pretty. My friends were so quick. Pink theme was complementing everyone's dresses.




"Ji pandit ji..!"Mutki spoke and she run to get Nandini..! After sometime Nandini came. Oh my beauty girl..! She was looking so gorgeous. How will I tell you Nandini that how much I love you..! She was wearing a pink lehenga choli..! Her hands the color of Mehndi was so red and dark. There must be my name hidden in it I will find it for sure..! Soon Mukti and Alya made Nandini sat beside me..! She stumbled a little due to heavy Lehenga and I immediately held her..! She clutched my shoulder tightly..


"Are you ok?"I asked softly and she nodded smilingly..


"Nandu theek ho na?"Tiger too came from behind..


"Am ok bhai..!"She replied to him and he stood behind us with Mukti..! I held Nandini's hand and we started the rituals with Pandit ji..! Between all this Cabir excused himself for a call while all other buddies were standing behind us..


"Kanyadaan kay liye dulhan kay peta ji ko bulaye..!"Pandit ji announced and Nandini look at me with sad eyes..! Before I could do anything..


"Main karoon ga kanyadaan Pandit ji..! Main bhai hoon..!"Tiger spoke as he came forward and Nandini's eyes had a never ending spark..! I look at Maa she too was looking at me..! They both had the right to know that they were real siblings..! Suddenly I started feeling guilty..! I was committing a crime..! Tiger completed the ritual and Nandini was smiling ear to ear..! She had a glow..! The connection they both were feeling at that time was witnessed only by me and Maa..! Maa had tears in her eyes..! Then we stood up for seven vows..! My buddies throwing loads of flower petals on us..! Vermilion..! Nuptial chain..! Finally the wedding was done..! During the whole session Nandini didn't left my hand..! Then we walked towards Maa first to take the blessings..! Then my eager buddies pounced upon us to greet..! Except for Tiger as he was standing a little away staring at us with a soft smile on his face..!

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Nandini's POV..


Tiger bhai was standing away from us..! I freed my hand from Manik's grip and walked towards him..!


"Thank you bhai..!"I said in a little voice as I was really feeling very emotional. I bent down to touch his feet but he stopped me..!


"Hey what are you doing? Behan ki jaga dil main hoti hai..!"He said smilingly and held my arms..! "I am so lucky to have a sister like you..! Though I don't have a blood relation with you but still you will not find me less than the real one..!"He said cupping my cheeks and tears rolled off my eyes..!


"Bha-bhai ma-main..!"I stammered going loss of words and he leaned more closer until his lips touched my forehead..! I banged in his chest and he hide me in his embrace..! I cried and cried..


"Hey..! Shh..! Your husband will kill me for making you cry this much..!"He said in an emotional voice and I let out a sad chuckle..! But the tears intensity was not coming to an end..!


"Nandini..!"Manik called me. I broke the hug and turned to Manik. He gently wiped my tears and hugged me..! Tears and tears..! Don't know what was happening..! "Why are you crying baba?"He said patting my head..! I sniffed in his chest I didn't care what everyone was thinking about me..!


"Guys..! We are getting late for the last function of this eve..!"Cabir bhai tried to clear the matter..!


"Manik Nandini..! Your dresses are in your room..! Go and get changed..!"Mukti said in a cheerful voice. But I wasn't letting go Manik..!

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Posted: 9 years ago

Chapter 19 D


"Baby..! Agr tum aisy he roti raho ge aur mjy jany nahi do ge tou we will get late for the party..!"Manik said as from last 30 minutes I was sobbing in his chest we were in our room..!


"I am sorry..! Pta ni why I am getting so emotional..!"I said looking at him finally..


"It's ok..! I love you..! Bus promise me that you won't cry..!"He smiled and peck my forehead..


"I promise..!"I too smiled and kissed his cheek..!


"Aisa krty hain you get ready here aur main guest room me jaata hoon..! Don't take much time ok?"He said caressing my cheek with his knuckle and I nodded..! He picked up his clothes and went out..! I too wiped my tears and got up to change..!

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Manik's POV..


I wore my blazer finally..! Hmm I was looking a lot handsome in that royal blue blazer..!




It was perfect..! I look at my watch it was 10 already. Only two hours left in finishing my birthday so we have to get hurry..! I walked out of guest room to get Nandini..! I knocked our room door as her privacy was important for me..


"Ji aa jayen..!"I heard her voice and I slowly walked in..


"Are you ready jaan? It's 10 already we are getting late..!"I asked as her back was towards me..! She was struggling with her earrings..!


"Ji am ready bus these earrings..!"She was still struggling..! I smiled and walked towards her she was looking stunning in royal blue gown..!




"Main help kar doon?"I asked politely..


"Please..!"She said helplessly and turned towards me..! I gasped..! So much of beauty in a lady..! She gave a what look and my trance broke..! I gently helped her with earrings and she mouthed a thank you. She turned to leave but I took her in a back hug..!


"Man-Manik..! Kya kar rhy hain..! Leave me na..!"She stammered as my fingers lazily run on her bare back..!


"Nopes..! First let me adore my wife..!"I spoke huskily and kissed her shoulder..


"We are getting late Manik..!"She argued again..! I turned her slowly and she smiled..!


"Haan I know..! But I don't want to go..! Let's do 'our' stuff na..!"I said naughtily and tried to kiss her but she palmed my lips.


"Haawww..! Besharam..! Chii..! Chup..!"She said widening her eyes as much as she could..!


"What besharam?"I said with a fake shocked expressions..! "Have you forgotten the 'last night'..?"I asked naughtily and she blushingly lowered her face..


"Oh God Nandini..! How much will you blush?"I asked hell engrossed in her beauty and cuteness..! "I never knew kay 21st century ki larkiyaan itnaa sharmati hain..!"I said naughtily full teasing mood on..


"Manik..! Bus na please..!"She said blushing like hell and hide her face in my chest..! I laughingly wrapped my arms around her..!"Manik..! Tiger bhai bohat achy hain na?"She asked tracing her finger on my chest and again tension started building up inside me..


"Yeah..! I know him since childhood..!"I said softly..

"I wonder..! Agr un ki behan aj zinda hoti tou wo kitny khush khush hoty na?"I don't know what was going on in her mind..! I have to lie once more..


"Haan..! Agr zinda hoti you bilkul tmhry jaise hoti..!"I said breaking the hug and cupped her cheeks..! "Nandini sometimes in life na hmy kuch aisy truths ko accept krna parta hai jo bht bitter hoty hain..! And you are my very strong girl na..! Promise me that koi bhi problem aye you and me we will fight against it together..!"I said in an assuring tone and to seal the promise she tiptoed to kiss me..!

"Together Forever..!"She muttered between the kiss and I smiled..!

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Edited by Mawara_Ejaz - 9 years ago
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Chapter 19 E


"Manik..! It's 11 pm..! Where the hell were you both? Hmy na tum dono ko akela choodna he ni chye tha..!"Mukti yelled as soon as me and Nandini entered the venue..!


"Relax..!"I said placing my hands on her shoulders and she sighed..! I look at Nandini and saw her staring at the arrangements..! I too noticed everything and the only word escaped my lips was 'WOW'...! The royal blue party theme was breathtakingly beautiful..!




"The arrangements are so pretty..!"Nandini shouted happily and all the business men and people present in the hall stared at her..! But she didn't cared for anyone's eyes that's what I like about her the most..!


"Aray it's your reception and Manik's birthday tou arrangements tou achy krny thy na..!"Cabir said smilingly and Tiger came..!


"Congratulations..!"Tiger came with a royal blue and white bouquet..!




He gave it to Nandini and she returned the favor by kissing his cheek..! The sibling bond was growing strong with each passing second and my worries knew no limits now..! Then all my business friends came and started greeting us..!


"Wedding rings time..!"Alya said cheerfully and came with ring boxes..! Nandini gave her bouquet to Mukti. All gathered around us and first Nandini slid the ring in my finger..! Then I held her hand and slid the ring..! I pecked her knuckle and she blushed..! All my buddies were shouting for us..! The rings too were exceptionally beautiful..! Platinum covered..! Royal blue and silver..!



"Cake cut kar lay bhai aa kar..!"Max called us. I stood in front of the cake table and needless to say it was also really very beautiful..!




Nandini was standing beside me smiling cutely..


"What are you waiting for? Main tmhry bina cut nahi karoon ge baby..! Hold my hand..!"I said looking at her and she smiled..


"Wohooo..!"Jack cheered naughtily as Nandini held my hand..!


"Happy Birthday and Congratulations..!"All shouted as I cut the cake with Nandini..! I fed her the first piece and she too fed me. Then I fed my buddies..! It was time for dinner..!


"Eat properly Nandini..!"I said angrily to Nandini as she was tossing the food in her plate all of us were on the same table..!


"I don't wanna eat this..!"She said making a pout and I sighed..


"Acha kya khana hai?"I asked pushing the plate away but before I could say anything..


"Waisy Nandu..!"Jack said munching a sweet pop piece..


"Haan?"She asked casually..


"Tum achi lag rahi ho..!" Jack said nodding his head...


"Main kab achi ni lagti?"She asked raising her eyebrow..! Oh freak her mood is gonna spoil soon!


"Kabhi bhi ni..!"Jack said shaking his head in dismay and here we go..! A tom jerry fight again started between Nandini and Jack..! Jack got up and run outside..! While Nandini too run beind him..! I helplessly look at Tiger and he laughingly followed to free Jack from Nandini's grip..! As she was pulling his hair mercilessly and he was cribbing like a baby..!


I picked up a juice glass and walked a little out of the venue near the garden..!


"Manik..!"Cabir came from behind..


"Haan?"I asked still lost in my thoughts..


"Bro I am noticing you since hours what is bothering you? You know you can share everything..!"Cabir said patting my shoulder and I nodded..


"If you will come to know what i know your mind will be blown out..!"I said in a worried tone..


"Suspense q barha raha hai..! bta bhi?"Cabir too became worried..


"Nandini and Tiger are siblings..!"I said in a hell tensed and worried tone..! Before Cabir could react I heard a loud shattering sound behind me and we instantly turned. Nandini and Tiger were standing there with horrified expressions..! CRAP..! They heard it...!!!! The ice cream cup Nandini was holding in her hands shattered..!


"Baby..!"I extended my hand towards her but she shook her head..!


"You lied..!"She said in a little voice as tears were making their way down her cheeks she run away..! Tiger too run to the other side with shocked expressions and I was helpless..!


"Cabir tu Tiger ko dekh main Nandu ko dekhta hoon..!"I shouted worriedly and rushed to look for Nandini..

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So here is the long long long update..! Ab khush? Chalo ji..! Guess karty raho kay aagy kya hony wala hai..! Waisy idea tou hai you guys ko..! Ufff pictures dhoondny me bht time laga..! Please utna he response dena jitna last time diya tha plz janooos plz..! It took me so so much time to write all this..! Please appreciate..! I am loving this Tiger and Nandini's bond as it's just like me and my own brother..! I hope you all too are enjoying all this..! Less MaNan but very important update..! More secrets will be revealed..! What will happen when Nandini and Mr.Malhotra will come face to face? What happen when Nandini and Mr.Khurana(Nandini's real biological father) will come face to face..! So much drama is coming..! You all are ready? For a super roller coaster? About Sun Sathiyaa tou I am working on it will try to update soon and yeah Sun Sathiyaa ka last update ho ga..!

Keep Smiling..! Keep shining for your Love ones..!

Love,Mawara

Edited by Mawara_Ejaz - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Res...
Unress...

Wow... um first...
Finally done... seriously such a long update dear...
Take a bow... hats off...
Update was wonderful... outstanding ...
Manik and maa part was amazing and emotional too... i really like it...ooo nandini ka wife mode... aur manik ne nicely handle kiya...
Then girls aur boys manan ko unki shadi ka batate hai... that part was really very cute...
then manik is so concerned shoes ka sunkar...jab manik uske foot ko touch krta hai..aur nandini kitna embarrass hoti hai... awesome...then manan romance... beautiful...
Then marriage and all rituals was perfectly describe... love kanyadaan part...
Really love nandu and tiger 's bond... they are adorable ...
All pics was breathtakingly beautiful...
Cake cutting part was amazing...
Jack and nandu part was superb...
manbir bond was superb...
Now let see kya hota hai... nandu ko manik kaise monofy krega... lots of twist on their way... um very excited...
Loved each and every bit of it... simply perfect dear...
Love uh...
Continue soon...
Thanks for pm...
Keep smiling...
Stay blessed...
Lots of love...


Edited by Cute_Inaya - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Finally unres PHEW!!!!!😊
Oh!!! Mawara no words yaar to express .
What a mindblowing update.

I like Jack n Nandu's tom n jerry tashan.😆
Nandani is full of life.
Manik is so tensed, now to revel the truth to Tiger n Nandu.😲
He is already imaging their reaction .

Wow getting married again with all the rituals . SUPERB IDEA.👏
Manik's friends r his true friend, who can think of such a superb idea
And that on his Birthday.

Nandani's Lengha pic was so beautiful.
Manik's Shervani too was cool.perfect for him.
Only hearing a word that Nandu is not comfortable in her shoes ,
He has to react n be with her to check out what's troubling her.😊

Awww!!!!! Nandani was so shy when Manik was holding her feet to check.
After all she is an Indian dhulan it was so cute of her to stop him to touch her feet.

Actually speaking all the pics u have used in this longgg longgg update r perfect n beautiful.
Finally they got married in front of the world .

But CRAP !!!!! Nandu n Tiger heard Manik n Cabir's convo.
What will happen now.

So much to know
Waiting cont soon .

Hey Mawara the pages no. Put up r wrong see if u can correct them, it must be 117 n 118 . But u have given 118 n 119.
Sorry to bother u with this.
Edited by Vandyandy - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
It was really awesome ... your hard work is really worth... but... again cliff hanger... koi nahi continue soon.
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Posted: 9 years ago
awesome update like their marriage eagerly waiting for next part
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Posted: 9 years ago
Goshh itnaa lamba update!!!! It was sooo Awesomee!!!!! Mee too loving tiger and nandini's bond!!
Manan wedding!was a superbb idea! Love their gang yaar! Girls guys both are amazing!!
Nandini's lehenga was breathtaking!!! Loving this storyy yaar! Really excited to know wat will happen?!!! Bro sis are cutest! Their scenes are mature emotional loving caring! 😆

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