Manan FF- 'More dn Frnzzz' # Chptr 5 updtd - Page 2

Nice I really liked the concept..

Originally posted by: manan_eku

It's just awesome
Very interesting
Continue soon
Thanks for the pm


Love you
Ekta

Thnks dear...ur cmmnts are precious fr me...

Originally posted by: chocopie26

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</table>Nice I really liked the concept..

And Nandu 's entry reminds me of me and my teacher's encounters...

Loved the 1st part...it was pretty/

I hope nxt part we get the darshan of our Manik Baba

Thnkuuu...glad u like it...Its my vry frst stry on manan of facebk..so i thought to share it here..

Chaptr 2
In lab :-

Evryone i doing dere xprimnts grp wise...Navni are in same grp..
Sddnly Navya shouts!!!

Navya- Oooh shittt!!!! Me kse bhul gyi..shitt..
Nandu- Kya hua??

Nav- Yr wo cbr or mra k frn aane wala tha aj...abhi tk to pjnch b gya hga..m late ..shittt!!! I ctch u ltr guyzz...tada!!!!

Alya- where is she going wo b itti jldii me..All okna nandu? kch kh kr gyi h??

Nandu- Yeah ..she ws sayng ki uska or cbir ka koi commn frn h usne aj hi space join kiya h so she s going to receive him...
All- ok...

At clg gate:,-

Guy- Hey navya..where were u yr? M waiting for soo long...!!!

Navta- srry yr actually me nd my frnz were hv jamming session so i frgt abt u...m vry srry...
.
Guy- Are its ok..nw shall we go inside... :)!!

Navya- yeah come.. me tmhe apni gang se milwati hu..cm fstt..!!!

In canteen:-

Druv- Alya!! eat slowly..khn nh ja rha tmhara food...
Alya (give him a dead look) - M soo hungry dhuvi...lt me eat...

Nandu is with her guitar nd try to make some music..nd mukti is waiting for abhi...nd tbhii..

Mukti to nandu (slwly) - oee luk ur bro is here..plz use bulaa na..for me..plzz. :(
Nandu - ooh dear muku..na tu unse bat krti h na wo kch blte hn bs tm dono k dusre ko dkhte hi rhte ho..fr yh se dkhle.. kya krgi bulake!!..

(Mukti gvs her a killr look nd nandu smyls nd approaches abhi)

Nandu-Bhaaii!! cm here na sit with us..
Abhi- yeah baby grl.. hii evryone..hii muktii...(smiles)
Mukti- hii...

Nandu- wse bhai mukti bhi evryone me hi agyi th fr spcl hii ku.??
(strst teasng bth of dm)

Abhi- (feelng embrrsd)-Chlo i hv to leave meet u guys later..ok..bby..

(lkng at mukti nd gvs hr a swt smyl)...
Nandu- Nw r u hppy..i dnt knw tm dono kch bt kunh krte..bs k dusre ko dkh kr hi khush rhlte ho..grw up guys..!!

Mukti -Tu nh smjhgi..iska b apna hi mzaa h..jb tjhe pyr hga tb pta lgega..!!
Alya (seeing dhrv)- muku is rite nandu..strtng stages esi hi hti hn reltnshps ki..frnshp ki..!!!

Nandu- yeah guys wtevr...nd ye navii abh tk ku nhayi kh rh gyi..
(Tbh piche se sound ati h)
I m rite here nanduu..nd all gt trns seeing navya stndng with a handsm guy...

Navya- hey guys srry fr being late..nyways meet my frn Manik Malhotra...
Alya,mukti,dhruv-Hii

(Nandu is bsy in admiring him nd obsrvim him frm top to bttm...she is in her own wrld of thoughts which gt intrrptd by a voice)...

Manik- Hey evryone..
(Navya introdce him muku,alya,dhrv nd dn she trns to nandu who is stll lost)
Navya to manik- Nd manik last bt not d least..multi tallntd gl of our gang miss Nandini moorty...

Manik(lkng at hr)- hey nandni..
Nandu- Hey ...
Navya- guys isne aj hi clg join kiya h nd he is in our clss..
u knw wt guys he also is intrstd in music infct he is guitarist nd hv wndrfull voice too...
All are listning to nvii xcpt nandni..
Mnk- Bs bs navii...Phle hi din itna tareef...!!!

#Nndu pov#-
Hw cn smone be soo polite,quite nd serius lukng..His smile is soo sweet bt his eys..it lks lyk he hs in soo mch pain..his eys r lyk mirror of his face xprssns..
(sddnly hr thoughts gt intrrptd by a ring of phn)..
Manik- Yeah m cming.. (on phn)dn trns to evryone - hey guys i hv to leave..i'll meet u tmrrw..bbye!!!

Navya,alya,mukti,dhruv dn trns to nandi gv hr a weak smyl nd wave bye to hr..nd lft..
(nd nandu is jst watching him gng nd smile unknowingly)
..

Loo g agya hmara Manik ;) ..Ab to jldi jldii cmmnts kro.. Thnkuuu

Nice update but u have already updated this ff na I remember I have read this n give maniks POV also nandu KO pehle hi manik pe lattu mat karwao manik should fall for her first.

Nice story..

WONDERFUL UPDATE

Originally posted by: ruchi116

Nice update but u have already updated this ff na I remember I have read this n give maniks POV also nandu KO pehle hi manik pe lattu mat karwao manik should fall for her first.

Yes dear but i stppd it dn... M srry dear but acc to cmcpt nandu i frst who',ll like mnk... but dere is sm twst...so njoy ...

Nice update