Manan FF- 'More dn Frnzzz' # Chptr 5 updtd

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey frn m again starting my dis ff fresh...I stoppd writng dis cz of bad respnse nw m again strtng it ..so plzzz supprt me nd keep readng..lv u all..C.S is below.. ..

Index:

Chptr 1- Pg 2
Chptr 2- Pg 3
Chptr 3- Pg 4
Chptr 4- Pg 7
Chptr 5- Pg 8,9
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Character Sketch:

Manik/Nandini- lead members...

Manik- 20 yrs old Handsome luking guy who broke up with his gf soha..A vry gud frn who can even die for his frnz..Superb singer...

Nandini- 19 yr old fun lvng sweet grl..who is full of life..vry gud singr..nd she is vry naughty ;)

Navya- common frnd of manik and nandini..

cabir- Bf of navya, bst frn of manik, nd close frnd of nandu...

Abhi- cool handsome guy, Nandu's bro...nd has a crush on mukti...
Mukti- bst frn of nandu...nd has a crush on abhi...

Dhruv/Alya- sweet couple and nandu's close frndz...

Nandu's gang - "Avengers" (mukti,alya,dhruv,navya) They are science students and music is dere passion..

Nandini and mukti are guitarist..navya flute player..dhruv is drum master..alya piano playr...

Abhi- senior of dem..nd an Architect student..also have sm knowledge of music..

Soha- X- Gf of Manik..

Harshad- Mnk's enymy nd always fnd ways to defeat mnk but always gt fail.. :p

So tell me should i restart it...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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nice c.s. continue soon
and congrats for the new story
and haan do pm me
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Interesting continue but soha ka jyada role mat rakhna I hare her yaar hard baar manik ki gf rakhna jaruri hai kya kabhi to nandu pehli ladki ho uski life me.
Update the first part soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: ruchi116

Interesting continue but soha ka jyada role mat rakhna I hare her yaar hard baar manik ki gf rakhna jaruri hai kya kabhi to nandu pehli ladki ho uski life me.
Update the first part soon


Hehe!!! srry dear but its necssry...Anyways soha's role is also imp here ..but dere is no rmnce of mnk nd soha in my stry ..so relx... :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Chapter -1:
Class room scene:

Alya- hey guys..dnt u thnk dis lectr is going soo borng..i mean i cant tolerate it ..

Mukti-chil babes!! Tere saath at least tera bf toh..mera soch..hw i m feeling.. & God knws ye nandu khn rh gyi.. Daily late hoti h madm...

Dhruv- Hang on guys!! dere she is..

(A sweet bubly grl is standng at d door wearing white top nd red skrt..lkng lyk an angel..hvng an innocnt puppy xpressions on her face)

Nandu- Mam!! may i plzz cm in..?

Mrs Singh- Ooh look whz dere..(in sarcasm) mam aap mjhse puch ku rhi hn..plzz aayiye na.. Aj knsa bhana h apje paas late aane ka..???

Nandu- (yawning) Noo mam aj to bhana sochne ka tym hi nh mla.. srry..(with a cute smyl on hr face)
Mrs singh - seriusly nandini.. u always manage to entr in my clss aftr getting 20 min late.. by showng ur dis puupy face... cm in..

Nandu entrs in clss nd take her seat with mukti...mukti givs hr a killr xprssn..alya ,navya nd dhruv greets her...

Mukti- Late ku hogyi? :/
Nandu- Srry jaan...but bhai ki mistk thi...wo hi hmesha late krwata h.. :(

Muk,- Dnt act smrt miss moorthy...i knw u vry wll...wo bechara khud tre chkkr me late hota h..

Nand- Ooh bhai ki bdi trfdaari horh h.. ;) chkkr kya h..???
Muk- Shut up !!! yr...koi chkkr nh h...Wse b ur bhai dnt evn luk at me... :(
Nand- Dn wrry baby...he'll obsrve u soon..

Dhrv- Oie kya khusr phusr chl rh h tmhri... Nandy abh to ayi h tu clss me..u wnt mam to thrw u out of clss...

Muk- Ok ok..lctr na de.. cncntrate on aliya ;)

Nav- Guys m gttng bor yr...lts do smthng na...

Aliy- Baby hm cabir ko nh bula skte na...m srry.. ;)

Navya glares at her while othrs cntrl dere laugh..

Mrs Singh - Enough of ur tlks "Avngrs" cnsntrate on lctr nw...

After attending class of 1hr and lab of 1 hr...dey all get hell tird nd bor..so dey decide to sm refrshmnt i.e music..
Dey entrs to music room and strt dere jamming session...

Dts it fr nw guyzz... I knw thda borng tha but plz bear wid it fr nw...Nxt chppy me Mnk's entry..
Edited by asangel - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome update
Superb update

Fab update

Loved it

Loved the update

Waiting for manik's entry

And manan meeting

Waiting for the next part

Update the next part soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome update waiting for next part
Update soon n long one pls
Edited by ruchi116 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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It's just awesome
Very interesting
Continue soon
Thanks for the pm


Love you
Ekta
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Posted: 9 years ago
#10
Just read the chappy now
It's was just awesome
Continue soon

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