#3//Lips Do Lie//Ch 14 on pg 140 & link for THREAD 4 on pg 1 - Page 97

You are mindblowing, amazing, just fabulous as you have written it. I mean how you get all those things in your mind.
Outstanding yaar,
that's what seriously you are.

Itbwas soo awesome
It was like Watching a movie
Wonderfull
Yr story is really different from others
I love yr story very much
Keep it up

nice update
Manik wanted Nandini to cook fr him...bt she cant cook.. 😆
Bt its okay she'll lrn fr him
Omg!!! The bullet firing nd all was so scaring nd filmy at the same time...
I literally got scared...I was just wishing nothing happens to Manik nd Nandu...
Bt I really felt bad fr tht old uncle nd aunt...they died without any fault of theirs...
Nandini thought tht they died bcoz of her...well tht was natural, she didn't face such kind of situations ever in her life so she got so shocked nd scared...
Bt I liked it when she used her innovative ideas to save Manik frm the gunmen...
Manik got hit by the bullets...bt he didn't show his pain to Nandu...
Thnkfully it just touched him...
She took him to the clinic...nd got his treatment done...
She again confessed her love for him...whn will ths stupid Manik confess his feelings...
I hope he does it bfr its too late...
I really liked the update...
Plz continue soon...
Thnks fr pm in adv.

Awesome

wow...it feels lyk watchn a movie...awsm narration..amazing style of writing...all the best...tc...udate soon...:)

No less than an action packed film .
I love the way you guide your story .

The start was hilarious though .
Teaching Nandini how to cook.. Hahah.

Well , girls !
They do take care of their first gift.
Amidst the mess she has to take those earrings .

Feeling bad for the couple though .
And Nandini is going through such a mess .

Guys are bad at consoling and so is Manik but his hug is enough to provide the warmth .

Taking him to a private clinic was a smart move Nandu .
God bless the doctor though . ;)

Wondering how will Manik react after her confession !

Excited for the climax ! *happydance*

-God bless

Y y y y I can't see all these happening 😭 I really wish this was series .. Uff too much action .. nandu the sherni was awesome 😆 the chilly powder thingy lol .. she is so cute .. ayoyoyo uncle aunty died 😭 poor couple .. aunty was so happy to feed them .. I felt so emotional whem nandu was crying .. that hug .. I always tell yu that I love the way u describe their hugs .. it's awesome to read..

Awesome but sadly small update.

Awesome update..plz update next part soon...continue take care...keep smiling..be happy...god bless you 😊

Read all in a go..! Manhh u jus rockk yaar! This story is something!! Superbbb concept..!!!! Suspensee all the way!!!!!!