#3//Lips Do Lie//Ch 14 on pg 140 & link for THREAD 4 on pg 1 - Page 5

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Posted: 9 years ago
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PROMO


"Don't come near me Manik!! I swear I will shoot", I pointed the gun at him and he swayed in front of me nonchalantly.

"Oh come on Nandu you know its not your cup of tea so stop being stupid and give it to me", he flapped his palm for me to hand over the gun to him.

"Sadly Mr Malhotra I am not that stupid...its over for you Manik..Appa and the cops are going to be here anytime and soon you will be where you should be"

The chuckle on his lips vanished in no time and now I could sense aggression in his movements.

"So you lied??...to me", Manik looked more shocked than angry. It was hard for him to digest that I could lie to him.

"Why do you look so surprised?? You only are my mentor in this lying business.. Its called being fair...Tit for Tat", I don't know how but I had sort of built in a sort of confidence in me may be because I had the gun or may be because for the first time I was seeing the victimized expression on the face of the culprit.

"Enough Nandini you have basically done everything that I had warned you not to", Manik gritted his jaws together bidding goodbye to the last ounce of patience in him and stepped closer to me.

"Stay where you are Manik or you will be sorry"

"Now I really want to be sorry..you want to shoot me na ..come on aim and shoot", he challenged me, "Come on shoot if you have the guts", he almost charged at me dismissing all my capabilities.

I tightened my grip over the gun to overcome my trembling state. A zillion things were running across my mind. I had thought I would be able to scare him and wouldn't need to go thus far but I was forced to do things I didn't intend. I jerked the gun in my hands once again to make him notice that I was dead serious about it. Manik came forward briskly and tried to grab the gun. Helpless I closed my eyes and just fired.

The impact was so massive that my whole body shook and was pushed backwards. I lost balance and fell on the floor with the gun slipping out if my grip. I was so scared that I couldn't help myself open my eyes and see what destruction it had caused.

"I shot him...I shot him", I muttered in my trembling state on the floor. I had hurt him or may be killed him because he didn't give me one sign that he was alive. I opened my eyes slowly to see in the direction where I had shot but he wasn't there.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#42
finally completed ur ff ... n man it's crazy... love it to d core... d flimy story is mind blowing, fantastic, fabulous, out standing ...
u r seriously a super star n a rock star... ur all stories r different ... like in each n every story u described manan beautifully... n in a different way...
just love ur way of writing...

but I must say one thing I find in ur stories is common is d impulsive behaviour of manan... but I love impulsive character's n I love fighting scenes ... n this story is totally flimy style ...

LOVED IT TOTALLY...
plz update soon ...
I m dying to read next part ...plz update soon...
Thanks n Sry...
Thanks for writing such a beautiful stories n Sry Kyuki comment thoda lamba ho gya...

stay blessed n happy 😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
#43
Wow thrilling promo
Cant wait to read it
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Posted: 9 years ago
#44
Wow... Awesome promo...
Sooo interesting... Can't wait to read the full update


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Posted: 9 years ago
#45
Oh My God is the only 3 words that I can utter..Lovely promo and it has increased my eagerness for the weekend to come :( Nandu is super..Manik totally deserved the threatening...think she shot..but he escaped and hoping he will hold from behind (somewhere from thin air)..ha ha ha..
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Posted: 9 years ago
#46
Uff suspense once again...she shot but when she open her eyes he is not there!!!
Then where he is? How about when she lie to him?
So many suspense!!!
Nice promo yaar...
Waiting for the update😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#47
That was one heck of a promo...now please dnt keep uss hanging. Update ASAP. Cant wait now
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Oh my did she actually really shoot him
Thrilling promo yaar...can't wait for the update
Plsss update asap
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Posted: 9 years ago
#49
Ohh wat a promo!! Nandu actually shoot him... I just hope he is fine... Pls update soon... Waiting eagerly... 😊 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#50
Such a exciting promo. .


oh my god..

that's so thrilling promo..

eagerness or bd gyi..


desperately waiting for update


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