#3//Lips Do Lie//Ch 14 on pg 140 & link for THREAD 4 on pg 1

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Ruh Ved

@Ruhanikaved

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#141

From this chapter at least we all know dat you really are bollywood movie lover with loads of actions n drama. :D
but den ur work has always been a treat to read.
u really know how to spoil ur readers just to have fantasies like ur thoughts :p
It was a great chapter.
kudoos to you for ur works!!

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aahanaK

@aahanaK

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#142

update was fantastic

they are still running

manik ko nandu ki baat maani padi

manik n his besharam talks

n then nandu ka tricky idea

bechare manik k kapde

aur kharab ho gae

n hten bathroom scene

for me it was very funny

manik said coreect

dat she is very strange n stupid

pehle maarti h phir chinta krti h

n then manik's herowali ladai

nandu b maan gai manik hero

par madad krne k bajay

manik ko hi maar rhi thi

n then mr n mrs duggal

n their kiss was a bliss

kab solve krogi mysetery

plz jaldi krdo

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Adeeba

@Aadee04

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#143

Oh my
Filmy it was !
Hahah 😉

Her thoughts .. Damn
She loves him !

First she shoots
Then she cares
Nandini Nandini . :)

I loved the action sequence.

The best part was Manik walking coolly , taking the gun from the goon's hand and firing back at him .
Suave !

And Nandini trying to help . Hahaha

Cabir should do something !
Waiting for his part of action .

Motel room
Checking the wallet
Disheartened at finding two more fake Ids
Stomping into the bathroom
Questioning .
His satisfaction at finding that his girl has not given up on him.
And finally giving in .

They are a bliss to read

-God bless you in abundance <3
You make my weekends special ! :)

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Ayushi04

@Ayushi04

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#144

Superbb update!!!
As expected nandu ka hero saved her
It was lyk a total action movie 😉
Manik's talk vd the ladies in village was hilarious 😆
And angry Nandini.. 😛
Nandini indeed wd ve lukd cutee while pointing the gun..
N dat concern after the gun shot..aww..nandu definitely cant hurt him
Then the ultimate fight vd the goons..treat to read 😃
Motel scene..was funnyy..identity changed!
Nanduz sudden encounter vd manik in bathroom..amazing! 😉
Manik is happiee to c nandu has still nt given up on him..nd the kiss at end !
Loved it! 😊

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akshima1995

@akshima1995

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#145

That was amazing
Total filmy
With lots of action
Just loved it 😊
Eagerly waiting for next update
Cont soon...

Keep smiling
N Stay Blessed 😊

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nikinidhi

@nikinidhi

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#146

Amazing.yrr..

Every emotion well portrayed..

Seems I m getting addicted to ur ffs...but its worth it..

Just loved today's update.. Fab work dear..cont soon..

Stay blessed

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gauriangel

@gauriangel

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#147

U updated this one...n I was stalking ..exes wala thread...

Kya filmy story hai...but I likes 😆

Manik sachi mei hero hai...hindi movies jaisa...I could imagine him kicking ass of those goons...

I have strone feeling now..He is some secret agent...since u gave hint of Mukti saying shall she send force to search them...its some secret operation right,...

Btw how many spy types serials or movies u watch...kafi inspired ho usse...Acha hai..hume aisa ff jo mil raha h uss banane. ..

Nice update...

Exes b update kar do..