#3//Lips Do Lie//Ch 14 on pg 140 & link for THREAD 4 on pg 1

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Posted: 9 years ago

#151

Aiiiyyooo

Kitna drama

But i loved it

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Aamikrish

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Posted: 9 years ago

#152

It was a wow update. Full of filmy stile, action, comic, romance.

I loved d line Manik says to the ladies that his first kiss is still pending. God such a tease he z.

Loved action hero Manik. And yes nandini too, gun, shoot and all haa.

She z really crazy, who hugs someone after shooting him.

Last part was the best, he knows her very well. Dat kiss of assurance, loved it.

Loved the update very much.

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rajirock123

@rajirock123

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Posted: 9 years ago

#153

Hey dear wst a update full on filmy mode and action u just rocked it but manik manges to kiss her in any situation his lips will do his work

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Sujitha

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Posted: 9 years ago

#154

Finally the wait is over..
I know its not that much long time you updated..
But what to do..
This story is really attracting me to read..
Really a filmy update and story..
But you know what that's y this is different and unique at the same time..
Coming to the update..
So these are from past right..
The present is from prologue..
Really want to know who is manik and others..
This hide and seek game is really thrilling and interesting..
Continue soon..

Love
Suji :-)

P.S:- Waiting for Ex's at war.. Update that too.. ;)

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etu

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Posted: 9 years ago

#155

update was full of filmy masala... oh just loved it ... when I was reading your story I was like " I'm reading a film's script...
action comedy romance... update next chapter soon please

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parthsha

@parthsha

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Posted: 9 years ago

#156

Wowww awesome yaar...so so loved it...

U r amazing

Movie likh do aap m d first one to watch😃

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priya_28

@priya_28

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Posted: 9 years ago

#157

absolutely loved it,nandini still strongly feels for manik and manik cares for her understands her just amazing.

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BlueJayFire

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Posted: 9 years ago

#158

wow..such a long update...super duper..you know I didnt even step out of the house today..ordered groceries thru bigbasket..:) LOL..

Coming to update..Man..Manik is something...I am putting myself in Nandu's place..what mystery she has to deal with, but her impressions are so innocent..Love how she shot and then hugged him..Love is there..in a really really complicated way..

Forces...tells me he is some under cover cop or the Matt Damon (Bourne Series) or Tom Cruise (MI)...Love them to core and now Parth is added to that list for living and breathing the Manik personality..

Love you...your updates are so awesome and you cover the finest of detail..

Stay blessed.

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Vidhiarora1

@Vidhiarora1

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Posted: 9 years ago

#159

Such an amazing post

Sooo good yr

Keep it up

U have portrait it very well dear

Eagerly waiting for next part dear

Do pm me next part

pretty pretty please

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Sudha14

@Sudha14

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Posted: 9 years ago

#160

Oh God di the update was tooo good..eto awesome bhabe kibhabe describe koro shob kichu?? Seriously...it's totally like watching an action film 👏 Mone hoe shob kichu dekhte pacchi!!

Super entertaining update it was!!..Finally ami ektu relieved..Manik tahole criminal na. he doesn't have any criminal records. n plus mukti was talking about sending their 'forces'. So, hopefully he's the good guy with some mission.

Such an effortless liar manik is..first kiss bole pending ache. eidike je oder kissing saga shesh e hoe na sheita r ke jane 😳

Loved the chasing part..n nandini trying to help manik..but hitting him instead 😛 Nandu tum rehne hi do 😆😆

So finally they reached the motel where ur prologue was set.

Bechari nandini..ektar por ekta shock pacche. she doesn't even know the real name of the guy she fell in love with 😔

Haayeee!! the ending was a bliss 😳..thank u je kono cliffhanger e chere dao ni. Ei nail biting update er pore cliffhanger e shesh kore dile i would have chewed down my fingers too 😆

Keep rocking.

Joldi update koro.

Love u n stay blessed.

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