LOVED YOU FROM TOO LONG / chapter 2- .page 3 ( 13 december) - Page 2

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Posted: 9 years ago
#11
nice concept dear...manan are beat frnds...and waiting to know how manans relationship takes a new turn.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#12
nice concept.
awesome Update.
loved it.
waiting for next.
continue soon
keep smiling
stay blessed
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Posted: 9 years ago
#13
BT how ll they fall in luv??,
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Posted: 9 years ago
#14
superb eku
loved it
continue soon
thanks for the pm



Edited by prathyushaeluri - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#15
Awesome post

Waiting for next part dear

Keep it up
Do pm me next part

pretty pretty please
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Posted: 9 years ago
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After they all had their dinner with lots of nok jhok between manan...and that uncle went to sleep and manan were sitting in the hall...manik in nandu's lap ...



Nandu : manik chalo na kahi gumne chalteh hai plz ... With a puppy face ...


Manik : but nandu bhar toh itni thand hai aur lagta hai barish bhi hogi. ...nahi hum nahi jayenge okay ...


Nandu : manik plz na jaldi ajayenge. ...plz. ..



she was making such a cute faces that he melted ...and he agreed. ... and they moved outside ...



Nandu : manik jaldi chalo na. ...


Manik : ha ha aya ...



And he came with a stole and coveted her with it ...and she smiled ...


Both were walking hand in hand on the side footpaths ... enjoying the cool breeze and the silence ... They were feeling each other...


Suddenly it started raining heavily ...


Manik : nandu ... dekh it is raining ... maine kaha tha ... acha chal dekh waha par chalte hai ... jab tak barish na ruke ... ( pointing toward a place ...)


Manik took her hand ... and was going to take her toward the place when nandu opened her arms and was enjoying the rain .. ..seeing this manik smiled ...



And moved toward her ... and asked her for dance ...







And nandini happily gave in ...







Both were dancing ...




Suddenly manik stopped and cupped her cheeks ... and nandini was also lost in him ...Both were very much closed to each other ...So close that they can feel each others breathe ... but but but their trance broke when they heard the thundering and nandu hugged manik tightly ...manik smiled at her innocence ...and soon they realise their position...and nandu immediately left him and looked here and there ...same goes with manik ...but he was looking at her from the corner of eye...and saw her shivering...Then he make her wear his coat ...Nandini saw that and smiled ...Then they moved toward home...rain was now almost stopped...


Soon they reached home ...manik left nandini in her room and was about to leave when nandini stopped him...manik with eyes asked , " what ?? " then she removed the coat and came close to him ...


Nandini : manik today I wanna say something that sayad I wanted to say from long time ...

Since when you came here I really didn't like you ...but you saved my life ...that day you make a very good respect of yours in my life ...

Every you came close to me I feel different ...Every touch of you wanna feel again and again...manik you have made me live my life ... main humesha log se durr bhagti thi. ...issiliye jab tum yaha aaye toh main tumse bhi durr bhagti thi ...magar ab dekho humesha sirf aur sirf tumhare sath rahna chati hu. ...Kyuki ab is dil ko tumhare alawa kuch Acha nahi lagta. ...yes manik I LOVE YOU ...LOVE YOU TILL MY LAST BREATHE ... HUMESHA ...



And she goes on knees ...



So will you love like I do ?? Will you with me like I want ??



Manik was totally numb he wasn't expected this ... he has always loved her ...yes when he came here in the first site he fall for her ... but never dared to say that ...he always feared what if she says no to him ... what if she break her friendship with ...

But today everything was different ...



Nandini : arey yaar kuch toh bolo ... ek toh main ladki hokar bhi tumhe propose kar kar rahi hu aur tum hoki kuch bol hi nahi rahe ...


This broke manik's chains of thought and he nodded as yes ...



Manik : yes nandu ... I will live with you forever ... I toh loved you from the first time I saw you ... but I always feared what if you say no ... yes nandu ... I love you and will always love you ...



And he cut off by the nandu ...



As nandu she just did nothing but pulled him from his color and kissed him pouring all her love ...





THE END ...


HEY GUYS HOW'S IT ??
I KNOW I WROTE ALL CRAP...



I am very happy guys I became goldie
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THANKS THOSE WHO COMMENTED ON PREVIOUS ONE

SO DO TELL ME HOW'S IT BY COMMENTING

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LOVE YOU ALL

EKUUU


Edited by manan_eku - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#17
it wasnt a crap
i really loved it
the confession was the best
and haan thanks for the pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
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nice update dear...nandini is taking the lead is some what new and bold...i always like bold nandu..😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
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so nice update happy ending thanks for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
#20
IT WAS VERY GOOD... THANKS FOR THE UPDATE AND PM... LOVE YOU...

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