LOVED YOU FROM TOO LONG / chapter 2- .page 3 ( 13 december)

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Hey guys, ekta here
remember me


I am here with a new story
well with two or three shots


SORRY FOR ANY MISTAKES...


CHAPTER 1...


Someone's pov


Uncle was scolding her and I was dancing silently behind him...


How cute she always looks when she make those faces ...everytime
time when she is scolded by mohan uncle she is always irritated...and make those
beautiful ,cute faces just like a doll...


As I was dancing she was shooting me with angry glare while I
was giggling ...


Just
then uncle turned towards me ...and I stopped at the mid of what I was doing and
stand like a statue ...


Now
she started giggling


Uncle
: you also manik how many times I told
you both not to fight like children ...you both are not children now ...grow
up...if you both will continue with all this toh I will surely send you back
soon ...


After
hearing the topic of sending me back ,we both become silent ...and shouted in
unison...nooo


And
uncle smiled ...


Uncle
:toh phir kabhi aisa hoga ...


We
both nodded in no and held our ears ...saying sorry...


Then
uncle pulled us in a hug and we happily gave in ...


This
was the daily routine of our life ...we two always fought and uncle always
scold us ...


Then
uncle said to her ,"nandu , beta tu kaha laga main abhi shop se ata hu aur and
tum dono laroge nahi..."


And
we nodded ...


After
that again we were going to start our argument when uncle came and nodded as no and we smiled sheepishly ...


after
that she went to kitchen an I went to my room to fresh up...


Pov's
end


SOME
INFORMATION : MANIK LIVES WITH NANDINI AND MOHAN [NANDU'S FATHER ] AS PAYING
GUEST ...MOHAN CONSIDER MANIK AS HIS OWN SON ...MANIK DON'T LIKE HIS FATHER ...SO HE
IS NOT LIVING WITH HIM...MOHAN OWNS A FLOWER SHOP...BOTH NANDINI AND MANIK STUDY
IN SOME COLLEGE ...WHEN MANIK HAS CAME HERE NANDINI DIDN'T HIM ...BUT LATER ON
SHE STARTED LIKING HIM AND BOTH BECAME INSEPARABLE BFFS ...BUT PHIR BHI THEY
BOTH STOPPED FIGHTING (waise I think friendship in which there is fighting
,ruthna aur manana na ho toh who friendship thori na hoti hai ...RIGHT GUY
S)THEY BOTH HELP MOHAN IN HIS SHOP...AND HAVE EVRYTHING TOGETHER ...THEY THREE
ARE NOW FAMILY ...


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SOME FLASHBACK (THE INCIDENT BECAUSE OF WHICH
NANDU AND MANIK BECAME BFFS )...


Once
nandini was coming back from college...she was all alone in the road and she didn't
even want to go with manik...suddenly some goans started following her ...seeing
them following her ...she started moving
fast ..they also started moving and soon
they surrounded nandu ...they were trying to touch her and nandu ws sobbing hard ...when uddenly one of them
was going to her ki someone came and gave him a tight punch...so that he fall
on ground ...and nandini shouted mnik as someone was going to hit him from back
but listening nandini's voice ...he turned and punched that man also...all of them became
scared seeing manik so angry and away ...
After the goons left and nandini hugged manik tightly ...firstly manik was shocked
then after understanding her he also hugged back...after that take her home
hopfully uncle waas in shop so he made her sleep... after that incident manik had built very good respect for him in
nandini s heart...after that they came close to each other and became very
good friends or I can say bff ...




ENDS
OF FLASHBACK...





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HEY
GUYS NOW TELL HOWS IT ??????


SHOULD
I CONTIUE OR NOT ???????


YOU
ALL LIKED IT OR NOT ?????


FOR
PMS BUDDY ME ...







<font color="#ff3366" size="7"> INDEX</font>

<font color="#ff3366" size="5">chapter 1 ----page 1</font>




LOVE
YOU ALL


EKTA
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vaishnavigarla thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
#2
Congrats for the new story
nice update
seems very interesting
cont soon
ChocolatePie14 thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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THE CONCEPT IS MIND-BLOWING... PLEASE UPDATE SOON... THANKS FOR THE PM... LOVE YOU...
ruchi116 thumbnail
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Nice update waiting to know when they will realize that they love each other pls don't make any kind of love triangle.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Ekuuu...super duper hit...

Manan bff's...soo cool...

Awww...mohan ki scholding...and their behind the back actions...hehe...

Waiting for more

Continue soon



LOVE
SANJANA
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome update. Flashback was fab.intro of manan was amazing. Continue soon.waiting for next update. Thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#7
nice concept continue soon loved it
and do pm me
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Posted: 9 years ago
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congrats for new story nice concept interesting continue all the best
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Posted: 9 years ago
#9
Please continue it...Lovely story line
mananneetu thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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its a beautiful concept...
i really enjoyed reading it
that scolding section of manan by nandus dad was too funny
waiting fr nxt part
thnx fr pm
update soon

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