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pioni

@pioni

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Posted: 9 years ago

PROLOGUE
HEY MY NAME IS NANDINI MURTHY
SO YOU ALL MUST BE LIKE YA WHAT EVER AS IF I CARE THING
BUT TRUST ME IF YOU HEAR MY STORY NA YOU WILL FAINT THEN AND THERE ONLY
MY LIFE WAS NO LESS THAN A JOKER NOW AND THE CREDIT GOES TO THE MOST HATABLE AND THE SAME TIME MOST LOVABLE MONSTER LIKE SERIOUSLY I FEEL MYSELF INSANE AS OF HOW HE IS STILL SO CLOSE TO ME EVEN AFTER WHAT HE DID TO ME...HUH I WILL BE MAD NOW..😡😡

HELLO PEEPS MY NAME IS MANIK MALHOTRA YA YA I KNOW
YOU ALL MUST BE LIKE EXCITED I KNOW U KNOW😉
SO HERE NOW I AM GOING TO NARRATE THE MOST BEAUTIFUL TRAGEDY HAPPENED IN MY LIFE YOU KNOW WHENEVER I SEE COUPLES NAA I GET REMINDED OF MY TINY DELICATE AND THE MOST FRAGILE DOLL YOU KNOW YOU WILL BE AMAZED IF YOU WILL MEET HER SHE IS HEAVEN FOR ME HER INNOCENCE IS THE THING I COULD NEVER JUDGE HER
SHE BEING HER IS THE PUREST THING AS SHE DOSENT FAKE EVERYTHING AND YOU KNOW ANY GUY WHO WOULD GET HER WILL BE THE MOST LUCKY BUT YOU KNOW
SHE IS MINE AND ONLY MINE!

SO HELLO GUYS THIS IS THE PROLOGUE NOW PLEASE COMMENT AND LIKE PLEASE!!AND I WILL POST 1st PART VERY SOON

Prologue-pg 1
Character Sketch-pg 2

Edited by pioni - 9 years ago

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akshima1995

@akshima1995

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Posted: 9 years ago

Sounds interesting
Nyc concept
Waiting for the update
Cont soon...
Stay Blessed
😊

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analaxmi23

@analaxmi23

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Posted: 9 years ago

AWESOME dear

waiting for the 1st part

continu soon

take care

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Nitu

@Angelic_Doll

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Posted: 9 years ago

Continue soon waiting for the story to proceed

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pioni

@pioni

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Posted: 9 years ago

Character Sketch
Manik Malhotra-The man who is in pain but never lets it out he makes other assume that he is the most arrogant person but in real he cares for everyone without anyones notice no one would ever imagine that THE MANIK MALHOTRA can ever be the one who will fall for a simple girl.

Nandini Murthy-she is not hot sexy or attractive...she is very silent she has a big responsibility on her and to fulfill that she is always into herself as she fears she may be distracted she is pure and innocent but knows how to react in some situations.

manik has fab 5 as the show and navya is nandinis only friend here abhimanyu is also there as a friend cum brother to nandini and navya
nyonika is positive and harshad and aryamann are negative

so guys please share your views😊😊

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ananya1917

@ananya1917

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Posted: 9 years ago

Nice story dear..

Continue soon

Do pm me plz

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akshima1995

@akshima1995

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

Waiting for part 1
Update soon 😊
Keep smiling
N please pm me

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Cuteprincess6

@Cuteprincess6

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+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

Nice prolouge waiting for update plzzz continue soin

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ruchi116

@ruchi116

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

Nice prologue n cs looks like manan r couple from prologue anyways update soon n ya pls don't link manik n alya or any other girl if its not nandu
Update soon

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pioni

@pioni

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Posted: 9 years ago

#10

SO hello guys heres the first part hope you like it ands please give your precious comments to me 😊

part 1

manglore

a girl is running all around the house and shouting
"amms dekho mujhe space main admission mil gaya yipee!"
she was jumping all around the house
suddenly there came a n old woman she stood in front of that girl she was glaring at her as if she had commited a crime
"nandu kanna kya kar rahi hai baju vale aake complain karenge mat macha shor"
"are amms aap ye dekho ge na toh khud uchalne lagoge"girl said giggling
"achcha aisa kya likha hai isme ki tu itni khush ho rahi hai"
"dekho toh sahi khud pata chal jaayega"
amms opened the letter and read it she was speechless she was
very happy "nandu tujhe..tujhe space main admission mil gaya hai vah main abhi aiyapaa ke mandir jaake aati hun tere liye mannat mangne"
"amms chali jaana pehele mun meetha karlo"
saying this she pushed a toffee into amms mouth
"nandu yeh kya kar rahi hai bachche hi kitne daant hai ki aur toffee thus ke saare nikalna chahti hai"
"aiyoo amms main bhool gayi mujhe ye baat rishu ko batani hai vo kitna khush hoga yipee"
saying she ran from there leaving her amms behind smilling at this girl who was big but still a child for her
amms had tears in her eyes of imagining nandu going away from her she has been her only support in life as when nandu and rishab were small they lost their parents in an accident after that it was amms who took care of them she then smiled of realizing that from now on nandini will be independent and will be a successful person in life...
then amms headed towards the temple
meanwhile..nandini came to her brother rishab who peacefully watching tv..
nandini jumped on the couch and shouted "rishu"
rishu was startled by the shout he got scared and instantly looked at nandu who was glowing very much
"di are you mad seriously you scared me "
"are rishu i got admission in space see"
"what i am really happy di "saying he hugged nandu tightly he had tears in his eyes as now their parents wish was going to come true...

MUMBAI,near the necklace road.
there was a man with a lady eating kulfi near an roadsidse icecream bandhar
"mom i am saying this is not hygienic its not clean see we will eat in a goods icecream parlour come na please.."
"shutup manik roadside kulfi ka maza kahin nahi aata i dont know how you could be my son your father and i used to comehere almost everyday to spend time but you yahen ek minute bhi ruko hyper ho jate ho pata nahi kaisi biwi milegi tumhe.."his mother saisd in a taunting tone
"biwi ka to pata nahi ppar filhal maa se kaam chalana padega you know optiion nahi hai"he too shot back the reply
"oh really beta ji then rehene do kyunki you never leave your mother and you know that aur dusri baat main tumhe bata rahi hun ki tum us soha ko to meri bahu kabhi mat banana otherwise
i have go to meditation for my whole life"
"mom she is nice just try her once please"
"oh for gods sake manik dont ever say that main pagal ho jaungi college main kam thi ki ab ghar pe bhi jhelne padega"
"achcha ok leave her we will spend our mother son time ok chalo ab jaldi finish your kulfi we have to go home varne aapko thand lag jaayegi"
"ji ji hogaya"
saying this both laughed whole heartedly ansd marched towards the car..
this was manik who never ever bothered anything except his mother even though she was hiss mother he used to pamper her and also give up to her silly requests as a father does to his child
manik never ever said no to his mother and fab 5 were his seconds family soha is maniks girlfriensd.
hope ou liked the first part...😊

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