#6 MANAN SS~YOU BECOME MY STORY Ch 30-61Wattpad query -63 - Page 19

welcome back kavya🤗🤪
missed you and your stories soo much
i literally felt that you left the forum😔
plzzz take care of your health...don't take unnecessary stress dear😔
hope you are fine now
coming to the update...
it was brilliant
beautifully penned manik's emotions👏
manik is now determined not to loose nandini
hope his dad doesn,t creates any problems for manan
manik's morning...his sunshine woke him😳
mr.kidnapper wants to narrate mc.donalds story to his children😆
ohhooo...nandini is ready to be manik's wife😉not bad
awww...manik wants to be thief😆
his dad is soo mean😡
can't he see where his son's happiness lies😡
hope no more manan seperation🤔
thanks for longg update
take care
can u plzz update bucketlist...plzz

Awesome

hey di...
wow wat an intrsting update...
maniks life is full of suspense...
reallly liked it...
the way he described his dad his grnd fathr s death his mom...
it ws emotional...
his dad is sch an orthodax narrow minded greedy prsn...
wat hppnd to his mom...
n his dad is gud fr nthing ...jst uses his own son...his own family fr his benefits ... fr money sch a cheapo ...
n hw beautifully he described wat nandu meant to him... it ws peaceful...it ws beautiful...
di u r a brilliant writer ...
awsm seriously...always manage to say to put so mch emotions in ur update ws so awsm...
i lv longgg longgg updates...
realllyyy lvddd it...
n manik n nandu s talk...ahhh...
awsmmm...
hahah...
he reallly knws wat she will do nxt..hr expresssions...
hahah...
mcdonald wala to schi epic tha ...use to kbi nai bhul skti...
to manik kaise bhulega...
hahah...
n children wali batt...
awww so cute...our shy nandu...
she loookkss tooo cute whn she blushes...
lvd it...
waiting to read n knw more abt mr strangers strange life...
he hs gone through so mch...
tht cn b seen by his wrds by his talks...
hw he describes evrythng...
bt i reallly lv ur writing diii..
its jst amazing incredible...
bt wat will hppnn whn nandu will cm to knw abt his family... bechri tb manik k sth nai thi whn he needed hr...
bt nw they will b togthr frevr...
ahhh lv thm n u too di...
cntinue sooonnn...
u rocked as always...
tc...
hope to see u sooonnn...

loads of lck n bst wishes..


manan frevr

Aww. I miss them being together too..!!

amazing update

hey kavya
nice update
continue soon...1!!!!!
😊

Awsme update. Manik's dad is so cruel and greedy.
Aww manik loves nandu so much and nandu also love him so so much.
Plz pm me also
Waiting for the nxt part

superb update... amazing update...
loved it ...
manik is like hell... so formal... his dad huh I hate him... apne son se bhi itni formally baat koi krta h ...
manik description about nandini his love... d way he loves her so blissful... n she is d only one who can give him peace n bring smile on his face...
manik is missing his mom' s 😔 ...
but jab tak nandini manik k pass h Vo happy hi rhega...
their morning talk was Awsm ... cute couple... 😉

Thanks for coming back ... mje laga tum to hume bhul hi gyi...
Thanks for d long wala update... n plz next update village story...

Owww loved it yaar, it was super cute and emotional.. Manik's dad actually m wondering.. Even m missing manan. Hope koi kand na ho, fingers are crossed..

OMG ur back wit an update. Missed ur story very badly. Manik's past story started it's nice to see. I love Manan in ur view especially in dis story I love dem madly. U write stories in such a beautiful way, we fell in love wit every character surely MaNan madly. Plz update next part soon waitinggg eagerly.