ROOMMATE: The Right Mistake(new ff) [ON HOLD] - Page 19

Originally posted by: mehak_ahuja

Awesome ... Mind blowing just loved it..

Manik I'm sure will novbe able to conti with his plan of kicking her out... 😛

N this alia has to poke her nose every where

It was so much fun reading the update...

Just totally loving the story

Cont soon...
Keep smiling
N Stay Blessed 😊

Originally posted by: shruti_gupta

Amazing update...
Manbir and their bromance...it was so funny...
Loved the way manik was concercerned for nandini...and the way he replied to Alia...
Eagerly waiting to see what will he do next to send nandini...
Update soon...

Originally posted by: Princeraj1425

Wow the update was awesome.
Loved laughing like hell during the convo of manbir. That was so funny. Hahahhaha... . .. .
It reminds me of manbir of the show.
Eagerly waiting to see how manik gonna fail in his every attempt to send nandu out of his house and more manbir hilarious convo.
Update soon and plz PM me.

Originally posted by: bhagupur

Thanks for pm dear

Very very interesting going on. .story.

Looking forward to seeing more.

Stay blessed dear.

Thanks.

Originally posted by: Manansamkhan

intresting ..

cont soon ..

Originally posted by: cute-aly

Hi Rahul





Great Update dear

Originally posted by: za90

hmm nice

nd manbir rocks

waiting for the next update

continue soon

Originally posted by: SHYPN

majja aa gya . .nandani bhi smart hai.. I like dat beauty wid brain... jealous alaya, baba cabir, monster +majnu Manik... great mixture.. 😳
Excited for next part... Update soon

Originally posted by: mini_manan

Amazing story yaar..
Manik thought that he can trap her...but she was way too smart..
Lets see how they will pass this amazing journey..
Cont soon.

Originally posted by: Lovelylav7

Lovely update..Lovely story line...but one suggestion I'm unable understand bad means bedroom or bed ?...Please b specific

Thanks for pm me..