MaNan Off Passions & Desires #2 part 22 pg 136 thread #3 link pg 1

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Chinmayi

@Chinmayi_11

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Posted: 9 years ago

#881

Oh my god

it was totally wow

witches are bound by vampires

imagining manik literally makes me dead

his anger , guilt, love evry emotion

di u nailed it like never before

thank u so much for the pm

sorry i am very late thoda busy thi isliye

alya she chose to b a vampire but couldnt resist her thirst for blood

new born vampire right it takes time

manik came at correct time

and thank god nandu didnt misunderstand manik

and finally ending it on the romantic part

loved it di

waiting for next update

take care

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tamzzee

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Posted: 9 years ago

#882

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Sweta

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Posted: 9 years ago

#883

TEASER

"Mukti stop it." Nandini screamed; "No Nandini why should I stop he ruined everything." Mukti screamed. "Mukti what are you saying stop it." Nandini tried to reason with her again but failed as Mukti was just not listening and Manik's suffering was increasing every minute. However Manik was still a vampire that a powerful 500 year old vampire; he gathered all his strength and stood up and grabbed Cabir's neck.

Soon the vampire in him took over as blood drew in his eyes and his fangs came out. "Stop your spell or I will suck every ounce of his blood and kill him." Manik screamed scaring everyone. "Manik please." Nandini tried to speak but he looked at her with his blood shot angry eyes scaring her and she decided to keep quite. Manik was weak but he was still powerful for Cabir and seeing Cabir struggle for life Mukti finally let him go saying "leave my brother." After few moments Manik stabilized and said "you witches so need to be disciplined." And he snapped Cabir's neck.