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Posted: 9 years ago
Thank you SooO much Guys for ur lovely comments and likes ...am glad you guys Like it ...and sorry for late update ...hehe ...accha chalo ...yeh rahi aapki update ...I hope you guys like it ...ENJOY😛

PART-1(A)

IT has been a week ...since they kissed ...manik was searching for her ...he used to go on that club ...tried to get some information about her ...but still no use ...he just have her a picture whom he found out by cctv footage ...of club...suddenly a idea came to his mind...he thought to check on social networking sites ...now...all just he knews about her was...her face ...her magical smile ...he has a hope of finding her ...Manik was sitting in his room doing something in his laptop ...he was so agrossed in his lappy ...he didn't realized cabir came in his room ...he snatched laptop from his hands to which manik gave him a deadly glare ...

Cabir shoutedly said: Abbe saale kab tak yeh majnu bana apni lela ko dhudhta rahega ...agar milna hota naa ...ab tak mil jaati ...

Manik angrily stares at cabir and cabir said

Cabir : Aise kya ghur raha ha ...jaise abhi kha jaayega ...dekh bhai ...maan meri baat bhul jaa usse ...arre lakho ladkiya ha jo tujhpe marti ha ...

Manik angrily said :Marti hongi lakho ladkiya mujhpe par main ...main sirf uspe marta hu ...Aur main kya haa ...dekh main toh usse dhudh kar hi rahunga ...bhabhi toh tumhari bas vahi banegi ...aakhi ishq ha voh mera

Cabir frustratedly said: Manik dekh sun yaar ...bhul jaa naa ...aur yeh kya ishq ...ishq laga rakha ha ...

Manik sarcastically said: Pyaar voh ha jo tum log har din har dusri ladkiyon ko bolte ho ...Par ishq ...ishq voh ha jo main usse karta hu ...maanta hu ...tarika galat tha mera ...hogi naaraz voh mujhse ...par jaanta hu mana lunga main usse ...bas ek baar ...mil jaaye ...

Druv who was listening all there talks came towards manik and placed his hand on his shoulder and said

Druv : Bahot pyar karte ho usse ...

Manik smiled : Apni jaan se bhi jyada ...tum logo ko lag raha hoga ki main pagal hu ... aaj tak kabhi kisi ladki ko hug nahi kiya aur aaj sidha kiss ...par main kya karu KABHI KABHI PURI UMAR NIKAL JAATI HA YEH JAANANE MAIN KI AAP kISSE PYAR KARTE HO...AUR KABHI EK LAMHA HI KAFI HOTA HA ...YEH JAANANE MAIN KI VOH YAHI HA ...JISSE SIRF AAPKE LIYE HI BANAYA HA...aur meri zindagi ka voh lamha bas yahi tha ...

Both smiled after listening manik answer ...now they were sure ...he is serious about her ...cabir said

Cabir : Accha chalo dhudhte ha teri uss lela ko ...jaayegi kaha hum se bachke

Cabir gave an evil smile ...Manruv smiled weakly and again started searching ...finally after a lot of hard work ...they find her ...

Cabir shoutedly said : OTERI ...BHABHI

After listening bhabhi both Manruv got shocked and said

Manruv:What?

Cabir : Arre what ...what nahi ...dekh mil gayi teri lela ...

After listening this Manik immediately snatched his laptop and saw her profile ... a bright smile crept on his face ...

Manik lovingly said : NANDANI

Both smiled after seeing manik smiling bcz manik never smiled ...he is a guy who always concentrate on his work ...nothing else ...now both were sure this girl brings a lot of changes in his life ...

Manik smilingly said : so finally I found u...

Suddenly manik's room door open and saw a girl who was standing there with full on angry mood

Girl angrily said : kya ha matlab...haa ...ha kya yeh ...laga kya rakha ha tum logo ne...pichle rk hafte se dekh rahi hu ...naa kissi se baat karni ha naa kuch ...Scriously manik ...I never expected this kind of behavior from you ...

Manik : dii voh main

Girl:kya main ...matlab tum log

Cabir : arre navya ...shant ho jao ...main promise karta hu ...aage se esa kuch nahi hoga ...pakka ...

Navya looked at manik whose head was down ...he was guilty for his behavior ...Navya smiled and said

Navya : it's okay but yeh last time ha ...

Manik smiled and hugged her tightly ...she too hugged him back ...cabir teasingly said

Cabir teasingly said : Agar bhai behan ka bharat milap khatam ho gaya ho toh ...hum bhi ha yaha ...KATAR MAIN (line main)

Manik broke the hug and punched cabir lightly in his stomach ...

Cabir fakingly said : aaooohhh

Manik smiled and said : saale tu nahi sudhrega ...

Everyone smiled looking at there cute fight ...

Cabir smirkingly said : Agar main sudhar gaya toh navya ka kya hoga😉

After listening his comment ...Navya blushed harder ...manik and druv smile by looking at love birds ...

Navya : Arre ha hum toh bhul hi gaye ...hume manik tumse bahot important baat karni ha ...

Manik : bolo naa di ...

Navya : Dad ne tumhare liye ladki pasand ki ha ...voh murty ha na ...unki beti ...bahot sundar ha ...aur pyari bhi ...dad wants u to meet her ...

Manik horrifiedly said : what? Dii main ...matlab main kaise ...dii ...

Navya : Manik hume kuch nahi sunana chahte ha tumhe hamari kasam ...u have to go to meet her ...dekh bhai main bhi teri khushi chahti hu ...maan meri baat ...she is the best for u ...

Manik looked at cabir for help ...cabir gave him U-KNEW-HOW-MADHUBALA-IS ...look ...

Navya : Please jaayega naa mere liye

Manik : Thik ha ...

Navya instantly hugged him ...

Navya : hame pata tha ...tum hame naa kar hi nahi sakte ...

Navya left from there ...cabir came towards manik and said

Cabir : saale sahab ab kya karna ha ...matlab tu toh already

Druv : ISHQ karta ha Nandani se ...toh phir tune haa kyu ki ...

Manik smirks and said : tum logo ko main kya pagal dikhta hu ...

Cabir confusingly said : Matlab

Manik smirkingly said : check ur bhabhi profile ...u will get to knew ...

Cabir and druv saw her profile and gave manik looked MAAN -GAYE TUJHE-and manik just smirks

Cabir teasingly said : kya baat ha bhai yaha hum log uska pata dhundh rahe the ...par yaha toh bhabhi khud chal kar aa gayi ...vaah mere sher teri toh nikal padi ...

Manik smirks and thinks

Manik Pov :

So miss. Nandani ...ups in short my kishmish ...see I told you ...I don't want u to leave me ...so here u toh found me in ur own haa ...am impressed ...mazza aayega




MURTHY MENSION -

Nandani was sitting in her king size bed and blabbering something

Nandani : Kutta ...kamina ...ullu ka patha ...agar saamne aagya toh jaan le lungi main uski ...he ...he kissed me ...naa ...naa ...he ruined my first kiss ...why haa god ...how .. how can u manage haa ...hamesha mere saath hi kyu ...ab patani konsa Namuna laayi ha maa dhudh kar jisse milne mujhe voh coffee shop jaana ha ...Scriously god ...I knew yeh jo bhi ladka hoga naa ...voh bhi bilkul ek no. Ka jerk hi hoga ...bilkul uss kute ki tarah haa ...I just hate him ...huh ...

After thinking about each other ...both drifted into sleep ...


NEXT MORNING-

A new morning that changed both of them life's ...here Manik was so happy to meet her ...and on other side nandani was just cursing that guy who comes to meet her ...manik wears blue jeans and white shirt and blazer ...on the other side nandani wears red color anarkali ...she was looking not less than an angel ...she did some light makeup and went to meet her would be ...


COFFEE SHOP-

Nandani was waiting for the guy ...but he didn't come yet ...she is damn pissed ...first she doesn't want to meet anyone ...and here the guy is still not here ...in the mean time manik to reach in the coffee shop and saw nandani who was sitting with a pissed expression on her face

Manik pov :

God manik kya karta ha dude ...pehli hi date pe late ...ek toh pehle hi gussa hogi ...aur upar se tu late ...bagwan baccha lo aaj ...I knew ki uska gussa kaise ha ...ek pad chuka ha ...ab dusra nahi khana chahta...vaise she is looking nice in this indian outfit too ...well kaise nahi lagegi ...aakhir meri kishmish ha ...

He slowly come towards her ...and placed his hand on her shoulder ...nandani turned and looked at him .. .her expression is worth watching to see ...her face is like perfect oO shape ...she is so shocked ...and on the other side manik was smiling looking at her expression ...

Manik Pov :

God she is so cute ...why on the earth ...she makes these kind of faces ...I just wanna kiss her ...no manik ...no ...control dude ...ek baar karke thapad khake dekh liya naa ...aur agar dubara ...no no ...vaise meri kishmish ha bahot cute ...and her cheeks ...I just wanna eat her up ...

His thought broke by nandani loud voice

Nandani shoutedly said : what the hell ...what are u doing over here ...piccha kar rahe ho mera ...ek baar ka thapad yaad nahi ha ...jo aur khane chale aaye ...dekho main bilkul bhi fight ke mood main nahi hu ...it's better ki tum yaha se chale jao ...

Manik was just staring at her ...

Nandani : kya ese kya dekh rahe ho ...

Manik smiled and said : ho gaya tumhara ...so yaah first of all hii ...aur raha sawal tumhare dusra question ki main yaha kya kar raha hu ...so am the one whom u r going to be married ...in short ur would be ...

Nandani shockingly said : What?



Bus guys ho gaya ...kaisa laga ...
Acha laga yaah nahi ...
Dekho I knew thoda short ha
Par am not well issiliye
Bas itna hi manage ho paya
Batao kaisa laga
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Posted: 9 years ago
Wow nyc start
Eagerly waiting for the next

Update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
I just love it..
Itsss soo awesome ..
So amazing. .just love to the core. ..

Soo .fantastic. ...

Keep updating. ..

U r such a beautiful writer...
Update soon..
Waiting for next update eagerly ..
Thanks for this update
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Thanks ..




Stay blessed


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Posted: 9 years ago
Very very nice
Bt y is it a fs?? Nd nt an ff??? 😭

Plz update soon N big one


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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome, the story is different liked it. :D
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Posted: 9 years ago
Amazing update
Manik's character is awsm
Plz pm me
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update
Superb update
Fab update
Loved it
Loved the update
Waiting for the next part
Update the next part soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
Haha... That was crazy...
Kishmish...

Awesome update

Loved it...

Poor nandu...

She still thinks he's a jerk... And why wouldn't she...

After all mr malhotra was soo good at giving her a first first impression...


So excited to read further

Continue soon

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Apurva
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Posted: 9 years ago
Fabulous update
Too humorous
Enjoyed a lot
Thanks for the pm!!
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Posted: 9 years ago


Thanks for pm.


Very very beautiful and interesting story.

Looking forward to seeing more.

Stay blessed.



Thanks.





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