Manan FF - 'The Aroma of Love'-Chapter 18 on page 141- 11th Feb 2016 - Page 51

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: lovePANI


aree manik doesn't know na that she is not he but actually she🤣🤣
waiting for manik reaction when he will get to know the truth
hoho i think nandu is falling for him thodi thodi


Yes Manik doesn't know...but even when he is getting closer for a kiss...prior to that..he imaged her as a girl na?😆😆

Manik's reaction..hmm let's see😆😆😆
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Chapter 10
A past..😕😆

'T...Tum ye kya kar rahe ho? Tum free main mere saath aise kuch bhi nahi kar sakte!' Nandini said a bit loud pushing Manik away from her waking Manik from his dazed mood.

'Matlab?' Manik asked with a perplexed look on his face.

'T..Tum agar mujhe mere haath pe choona chahte ho..tho alag rate lagenge...gaal pe choona chahte ho..tho uske bhi alag paise add honge' Nandini said trying to find a way to escape from his touches.

'Arre..tum tho pakka businessman nikle yaar..har ek touch ke hisaab kitaab?' Manik asked with a smirk secretly enjoying this boy's smartness.

'Haan..mere body main kisiko aise hi free ke liye kyon choone doon? Maine tumhaare saath time spend karne ke liye agree kiye hai..aise kareeb aane aur choone ke liye nahi!' Nandini stammered.

'Ok...chalo! Tere baaton main bhi point hai!' Manik said as he walked thoughtfully rubbing his chin and sat on the sofa. 'Tho tere track pe hi chalte hai! Let's fix rates for touching U!' 😈

'K...Kya?' Nandini asked her eyes opening wide in disbelief.

'Hmm why? Tujhe mere saath bithaaoonga aur kuch na karoonga..tho unn girls ko shayad aise bhi lag sakte hai..ke tu mere dost ya phir cousin brother ho! Agar unn girls ko bhagaane hai...tho jaise tune bole hai..waise hi humko act karne padenge..jaise boyfriend girlfriend act karte hai. Main tujhe aise hi touch karoonga..taakki girls soche ke hum dono lovers hai!' Manik said in a victorious tone.

Nandini cursed the moment when she suggested him that they can confuse the girls by acting like a romantic couple.

'Achcha chal..tere rate bataa..tujhe haath pe choone ke kitne rate hai?' 😛

'Hmm...50 rupees!' Nandini said thinking that the high rate will make Manik drop the idea of touching her.

'Arre...only 50 rupees? Tujhe zyaada rates bolne chahiye the na?' Manik suggested back. 'Par chal...tere hisaab se hi rate lagaate hai..so for touching on your hand..50 rupees...and for touching your cheek?' Manik asked with a smirk.

'500 rupees!' Nandini raised her rate thinking Manik will re-think the idea.

'Ok..chalo! Ye hisaab baraabar' Manik said typing in the rate on his mobile😆

'Next tumhaare neck ko choone ke liye?' Manik asked with a naughty smirk. 😉

'T..Tum mere neck kyon choona chahte ho?' Nandini asked nervously.😕

'Arre yaar...hum dono act kar rahe hai...tho romantic act karne ke liye accidentally bhi main tere neck ko choo sakta hoon na?' Manik said in a matter-of-fact way😛

'Hmm...1000 rupees' Nandini said because she wanted Manik to think before touching her neck.

'Ok...done! Now...tumhaare lips...tumhaare lips ko choone ke liye' Manik said biting his lower lips as he sneaked a glance at Nandini. 😛

Nandini froze. She felt her throat go dry as she licked her lips.

'Ayyappa..ye kaise din hai aaj mere? Main sapna tho nahi dekh rahi hoon na? Main ek ladke ko apne har body part touch karne ko allow kar rahe hai aur ladka usko touch karne ke keemat dene ke account banaa rahe hai' 😕

'Hmm...lagta hai...tumhaare lips main free main choo sakta hoon' Manik said with a smirk raising his head and looking at her. 😛

'N...Nahi!!!!!!!! Mere lips ko choone ke liye na tumko mujhe 10,000 dene padenge!' Nandini suddenly shouted her voice stammering.

'Achcha? Sirf 10,000? That's less yaar! But it's ok! So for touching your other body parts..I'll give U 50 rupees! Ok next comes the kiss' Manik said in a naughty tone.😛😆

Nandini felt as if the earth was slipping from under her feet.

'K..Kiss? Tum mujhe kiss nahi kar sakte!' Nandini stammered as her voice broke from shock.

'Arre kyon nahi yaar? Tu ladka hai...main ladka hoon..hum dono acting kar rahe hai! Tujhe paise milenge..aur isse zyaada tujhe kya chahiye?' Manik asked casually.

'Nahi! Tum mujhe kiss nahi kar sakte' Nandini said in an affirmative tone.

'Achcha achcha!! Ok ok..yaar iske liye itne stressed kyon ho rahe ho? Main tujhe force thodi kar raha hoon? Hum acting kar rahe hai..tho kiss ke acting tho karenge hi na?' Manik said with a little smirk. 😉

Nandini never felt this nervous before any guy in her life. If it was any other guy...she would've gone to him and given him a nice punch for putting a rate for touching her. But this guy...she felt that even when he was pulling her into something which is not natural...there is a decency in the way he suggested things and his intentions were not to harm her and also he doesn't know that she is a girl. Nandini didn't want to help him...because she felt that maybe it will lead to something which she will regret later. But Nandini couldn't stop herself from helping him. 😕

'Ayyappa..ye kaisa confusion hai..please mujhe bachaalo' 😕

'Ok yaar...abhi almost everything is set. Now time for shopping' Manik suggested as he got up and suddenly he said 'Oh but wait..before that...U can go home and come back...I mean U may want to get changed, freshen up and also U may want to inform your workplace and take a day off, na?' Manik suggested to Nandini.

Nandini heaved a sigh of relief as she nodded.

'Ok...I'll also freshen up now! U go and return in another 1 hour' Manik said as he criss-crossed his legs and sat on the sofa majestically.

'Ok sir' Nandini said with a nod.

'Wait...sir nahi...U must call me Manik...mera naam Manik Malhotra hai' Manik said passing his fingers through his hair.

'Nahi..main aapko aise nahi bulaa sakti' Nandini said suddenly.

'But why? Hum dono abhi lovers ke tarah act karenge...if U accidentally call me sir- hamare plan flop ho jaayenge na? So call me Manik' Manik said looking at Nandini in a bossy manner.

'Ok..sir...hmm...Manik..' Nandini whispered Manik's name reluctantly.

'Ok now that's better! Go now and meet me in another hour'

'Ok sir...M..Manik' Nandini said as she bit her tongue slightly on saying sir.

Manik smirked seeing the way Nandini bit her tongue slightly and walked out of the hotel room. 😉

'This boy is truly interesting. It would be fun to keep him with me. I think this is the funniest thing that happened to me after I returned from U.S. Abhi tho aur bhi mazaa aayega...jab main aur Nandu milke ladkiyon ko gay romance dikhaayenge😆 and it will be the biggest fun to see girls running away after seeing us together.' Manik thought to himself as he laughed slightly. 'But..dadi..I hope she doesn't get to know of this..warna problem ho jaayega' 😕

Nandini reached home tired and yet her heart was feeling excited like never before. It's her first ever date with a guy she is attracted towards but who thinks that she is a guy. Has it ever happened with any girl..she wondered as she entered the shower. The cold water that seeped down her face brought memories of her first ever attraction towards a guy.

Harshad- He was the hottest guy in the neighbourhood...tall, handsome and with a lovely smile on his face that charmed every single girl in the neighbourhood. Always friendly and helpful...such a guy is a true charmer. In those days, Nandini never dressed up much and was a true plain jane who used to wear simple jewelry, who used to dress up more like a girl. At that time she had long hair. The girls who got attracted to Harshad were the hottest girls in the city and Nandini never dared to speak to Harshad. One day while returning from class, she heard the horn sound of a bike and turned around. The guy on the bike removed his helmet and it was 'Harshad'.

'Hello Nandu' Harshad said with a smile.

'Tumko mere naam kaise pata hai?' Nandini asked her eyes widening in disbelief.

'Wo...wo isliye kyonke main tumko hamesha se dekhta aa raha hoon...tum ho hi itni sundar...iss frock main U look like a princess' Harshad said with a little smile.

'Oh..thanks' Nandini whispered with a little blush on her cheeks.

'Kaha jaa rahi ho?' Harshad asked.

'Ghar..' Nandini whispered.

'Kya main tumhe lift de sakta hoon?' Harshad asked with a smile.

'Nahi..main chali jaaoongi' Nandini whispered reluctantly.

'Mujhpe trust nahi?' Harshad asked in a bit disappointed tone.

'N..Nahi..aise koi baat nahi' Nandini mumbled softly.

'Tho phir baitho na...main tumhe aaj ghar chod doonga' Harshad said suddenly grabbing her hand.

Nandini froze at that touch and her heart beat wildly. He is so handsome and the way he is being helpful...should I continue to say no?

Nandini reluctantly nodded her head in a 'yes'.

'Magar...mujhe bike pe baithne se darr lagta hai' Nandini said biting her lower lip in embarassment.

'Arre...tum kaisi ladki ho yaar..kabhi bike pe nahi baithi?'

'Nahi...aur main paidal chali jaaoongi' Nandini muttered as she realized that she is wearing a frock.

Harshad seemed to have realized the reason for Nandini's reluctance. He suddenly got off his bike and parked it and said 'Chalo...main bhi chalta hoon tumhaare saath. Iss bike ko yahan rehne do'

'Nahi..its ok..main chali jaaoongi'

'Tum jaisi beautiful ladki..akeli jaa rahi ho..main tumhaare saath chalta hoon na' Harshad offered as he walked up to her and indicated as to let's walk.

Nandini felt truly special for the first time in her life. No guy ever looked at her till then...all the girls she knew had boyfriends or she had atleast seen guys being attracted to her. But boys never seemed to have any interest in her. Harshad is the first guy who is showing an interest in her.

'Tumhaare ghar main kaun kaun hai?' Harshad asked with a smile.

'Maa..aur ek behen' Nandini whispered smiling back at Harshad.

'Tum zyaada baatein nahi karti ho na?' Harshad asked as he walked even more closer to her.

'Nahi...karti hoon' Nandini mumbled as she felt Harshad grab her wrist.

Nandini froze as she felt the way Harshad's finger traced on her wrist.

'Tum mere saath date pe chalna chahogi?' Harshad asked suddenly.

Nandini couldn't believe her ears...is this true or is this a lie? Am I dreaming or is this real?😕

'Ayyappa...mere dil ke confusion ko duur karo' 😕

'Nandini...aaogi na mere saath?'

Nandini didn't know what to reply as she stood frozen on her tracks. 😕😆

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Chapter 11: Page 80

Edited by priakachan - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Res

unres. .

Yeah yeah yeah. .

Thank u. . Thank u. . Thank u. . So much. .

U are sho shweet yaar(pull your cheeks while reading this)

Thanks for dis update. .

Now coming to d update. .

Haai manik is such a tease. .

He was noting down the rates in mobile. .! Like seriously. .

Nandu tried hard to challenge hin with her rate. .

But she didnt know how our Manik Malhotra is. .
He always gets what he wonts by hook or by crook. .

Nandu is really excited to go on date with manik. .

But her past. .

She had long hairs and really she used to dress lyk a girl. .yar i really miss that nandu. .

'Harshad is nice guy. .' this sentence dnt knw why but is hard to digest. . This sentence seem to be logically, grammatically, umm. .from every angel this sentence doesnt suit u knw. .

But more shocker was nandu was attracted to him. .*confused*

anyways eager to knw her past. .

Kya hoga. .!!

Lots of love
Drashti
Edited by DhruShti - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: DhruShti

Res

unres. .

Yeah yeah yeah. .

Thank u. . Thank u. . Thank u. . So much. .

U are sho shweet yaar(pull your cheeks while reading this)

Thanks for dis update. .

Now coming to d update. .

Haai manik is such a tease. .

He was noting down the rates in mobile. .! Like seriously. .

Nandu tried hard to challenge hin with her rate. .

But she didnt know how our Manik Malhotra is. .
He always gets what he wonts by hook or by crook. .

Nandu is really excited to go on date with manik. .

But her past. .

She had long hairs and really she used to dress lyk a girl. .yar i really miss that nandu. .

'Harshad is nice guy. .' this sentence dnt knw why but is hard to digest. . This sentence seem to be logically, grammatically, umm. .from every angel this sentence doesnt suit u knw. .

But more shocker was nandu was attracted to him. .*confused*

anyways eager to knw her past. .

Kya hoga. .!!

Lots of love
Drashti


U are most welcome yaar..and ouch! U pulled my cheeks😛
Yes...I mean any friendly guy will feel attractive na?😆 Didn't U get those vibes about Harshad when U first saw him helping Nandini in KY2 Season 1?😉😆

Thanks a lot, yaar😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update. Loved the way nandu z trying to get away from manik by increasing her rate, 😉 but manik z Manik he never gives up on anything, here it is nandu den how will he do dat. He and his teasing, poor nandu .
Harshad, I have a bad feeling dat he z up-to something bad, may b dats d reason nandinis boyish behavior.
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Aamikrish

Awesome update. Loved the way nandu z trying to get away from manik by increasing her rate, 😉 but manik z Manik he never gives up on anything, here it is nandu den how will he do dat. He and his teasing, poor nandu .

Harshad, I have a bad feeling dat he z up-to something bad, may b dats d reason nandinis boyish behavior.


Thanks a lot, dear😃

Haan yaar..Nandu ko khud ko protect karne haina? Warna Manik ne tho almost kiss kar diye the and now he wants to tease her more!😛😆

Harshad...hmm...U'll know soon😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
awesome update
nandu ko chooneki rate omg
very funny
thanks for pm
continue soon
waiting for next part
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Posted: 9 years ago
manik really a tease... chune ka rent was epic... 😆 waiting for manan fake gay romance... 😉
what????? nandu was attracted by harshad???? 😡 huhhh... btw di please update ayioo ayappa too... &update soon... can't wait for next update...
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Ths is too much yar! Fixing rates for touchng! Seriously!!!

Mai aapko aise nai bula SAKTI ... Manik did nt not notice... :p

I had hard time in controling my laugh! My aunty was glaring at me seeing my expressions! :p

wen wil manik knw that nandu is girl nt boy!
I eagerly waiting to knw manik's reaction!

N wht do u mean by nandu 'had' long hair? Nw she dnt hv? :(

U r an amazing writer! Stay blessed n do update soon! :)
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: priakachan



U are most welcome yaar..and ouch! U pulled my cheeks😛
Yes...I mean any friendly guy will feel attractive na?😆Didn't U get those vibes about Harshad when U first saw him helping Nandini in KY2 Season 1?😉😆

Thanks a lot, yaar😛



well i will pull your cheeks with every update. .*wink*
ya in season1 he was. .
But still. .
Anyways leaving it to you. .
But i think Harshad will show his true colors soon. .
Thats why nandu is like dis today. .hmmm. .i am smart u knw*wink*

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