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Posted: 9 years ago
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Its awsme i luved it nandu ne aate he fab5 ki le li awsme
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Part 2:


"we need to find this girl as soon as possible" aliya spoke the moment she heard what mukthi said

"bhai..aap kuch bol kyu nahi rahae..?" mukthi asked manik finding him lost

"apnae aap ko bahuth smart samajh thi ho na Ms.Murthy.. maza tho ab aayega.."manik said smirking and continued "lets split up and find her before she escapes.." manik said and all moved in pairs like..Dhruv- Aliya, Mukthi-Abhi, Cabir-Manik. They were searching for her in the whole collage and she was there in parking. Dhruv and Aliya spotted her and immediately informed all others and rest of the gang was there in 5 minutes.

"I think kisi ka wait kar rahi hai.." abhi said as nandini was looking at her watch from time to time..

"vo kisi ka bhi wait karae..humae to mil gayi na.. lets go before she leaves the campus" manik said panting as he ran as fast as he could to reach nandini.

They all moved towards her and the moment she saw them staring at her angrily she got scared but covered with her confident smile..

"hey girlfriend...im sorry..im late.." a voice from behind diverted their attention..

"hai..boyfriend.. yes u r late.. and im not gonna talk to u.." nandini said faking anger and turned her face to the other side

"acha sorry.." the man said holding his ears and she immediately smiled and hugged him tightly..

"I missed u.. sooo much.." she said still hugging him

"maiae bhi.. bahuth miss kiya tujhae.." he said holding her tight

"dad.. whats going on..?" manik said irritatingly and nandini and Mr.Malhotra broke the hug.

"oh.. darling I forgot to introduce u to someone.. meet my son Manik and my darling daughter Mukthi.." Mr.Malhotra said pointing towards them and continued " manik and mukthi yeh hai nandini first year student.. humarae collage mai new admission.. vo marae dost hai na Mr.Murthy unki eklothi beti.."

"ohh..hi.. nice meeting u.." she said as if she met them for the first time trying her best not to show her fear on her face acting completely normal.. and again a shock for the Fab5 and abhi..

"feelings are same" manik said playing along.

"manik.. wht don't u show her the campus.. bechari nayi hai na yahan.." he said looking at manik.. nandini's eyes widened with horror and manik again smirked.

"of course dad it would be a pleasure..chalo nandini.. im sure ull enjoy our company.. itnae bhi burae nahi hai hum.." he said innocently..

"nahi uncle.. its totally fine.. meri na ek nayi friend hai yahan Navya.. mai uskae saath chali jaungi..vo abhi yahan aati hi hogi" she said looking at manik's dad

"arae nahi.. tum yahan nai ho.. aur vo bhi nayi hai.. u do one thing.. bring your friend along.. tum dono ko hum log sab kush dikha dangae.." manik said looking at her and for the first time her face became pale due to fear

"hum aa gayae.." navya said coming from behind and froze at her place seeing fab5 standing in front of her and asked nandini with her eyes if they were caught and nandini nodded a yes. Navya got horrified thinking of the consequences and decided to run away from there when Mr.Malhotra stopped them

"chalo ab tumhari friend bhi aa gayi.. manik mukthi.. in dono ko lae jao.. aur pura campus dikhao.. mujhae thoda kaam hai.. mai jaa raha hun.." he said and was about to go from there. Nandini observed manik coming towards her with a very big naughty smile and said " arae uncle aap tho bahuth formal ho rahae ho.. hum dono chalae jayaengae na in ko kyu pareshan kar rahae ho.. its ok we will manage.."

"arae is mai pareshani kya hogi.. u r new here.. come with us ull definitely have fun.." manik said holding her hand tightly and continued " dad aap jao.. hum acchae sae inko pura collage dikha dangae.."

Mukthi and Aliya held Navya's hand tightly and Manik was holding nandini's.. all waved bye to Mr.Malhotra and he left. The moment his car was out of sight nandini tried to free her hand from manik's hold but his hold was very tight and she wasn't able to free her hand and was struggling hard.

"chodo mera hath.. let me go.." she said

"ahh.. itni jaldi nahi Ms.Murthy.. abhi tho game shuru hua hai.." he said pulling her closer

"dekho mai chillangui.. sab ko batungi ki..ki.." she was stammering as manik was moving close to her and she got scare with his proximity

"ki.." he whispered in her ear moving still closer

"ki..hum parking mai hai.. aur yahan tu kuch karaega tho hum pakadae jayangae" cabir said and manik came back to reality

"lets go from here first.. then we will decide what to do with these two girls.." mukthi said dragging navya with her

"arae.. chodo humae.. dekho yae tum log accha nahi kar rahae ho.." she said pointing her finger towards mukthi and cabir interfered " kya galat hai madhubala ji.." he said turning her towards him and pulling her close to him. His one hand was holding her hand and other automatically moved around her waist. Navya got starteld with cabirs behaviour so were others as he never held some girl like he was holding navya. Navya unintentionally put her hands on his chest and both were lost in each others eyes when Abhi cleared his throat to grab their attention and his plan worked. CavYa straightened themselves navya was blushing and cabir started looking here and there.

"first miss murthy ka kaam dekthae hai.." manik said looking at everyone and dragged nandini to a nearby empty room. Dhruv was the last one to enter the room and manik signalled him to lock it and now the room was locked. Only fab5 abhi and navni were present.

"so.. do u want to apologise for what u did in the morning" manik asked her

"why would I apologise.. what I did was totally correct.." nandini said shrugging her shoulders

"u shouldn't have done that.. aur upar sae yae attitude.. han.." manik asked moving close to her

"dekho.. tum logon nae sab ko pareshan kar kae rakh diya tha.. so I thought to teach u a lesson.. to make u feel how do they feel when u ask them to do something stupid.." she said angrily

"acha.. hoti kaun ho tum humae manners sikhanae wali.. han.. meri dadi ya nani..?"manik spoke a bit loudly

"ok..jo ho gaya so ho gaya.. lets forget it.." she tried to make peace..

"itni jaldi nai.. bilkul bhi nahi.." he said and took out her identity card from his pocket and waved infront of her and said with a smirk " u need this to attend classes from tomorrow.. if u want this u will have to do what all we say.."

She tried to snatch it from his hands but couldn't as he held it high and she couldn't reach his hand.

"stop trying and listen to what I say.. phir tumhae yae card zaroor milaega.." he said

"theek hai bolo..kya karna hai.." she said and manik looked towards others and all exchanged naughty smiles.

"tho one by one we will say what to do any without any fault or excuses u will do it..ok" manik said and she nodded a yes helplessly. Mukthi came and took her bag from her and said "don't worry ill give it to u back once u r done with u tasks.."

"so we will start from.." he said and looked towards cabir who seemed super exicited "cabir" manik said and cabir rubbed his hands and said "yahan nahi..my task will be in canteen chalo.." saying this cabir dragged navya along with him holding her hand and rest followed. Manik not even for a second left nandini's hand. He was feeling something new for her but his stupid heart wasn't admitting it. After few minutes they reached canteen and cabir spoke " so miss nandini murthy.. lets get started.. as im dam hungry.. get all of us something to eat within 10 minutes" he said looking at nandini and her eyes popped out and cabir added "aur haan u should get me something cooked by u only.. and your time starts now.." he said looking at the watch and nandini rushed towards the cooking area. Navya was trying to free her hand to help her friend and cabir seeing this came close to her ear and whispered "itni bhi jaldi kya hai.. aanae do apni friend ko.. tum khud mujhae khila daena.." saying this he moved away and winked at her.. navya's mouth was opened in a perfect o'. she nodded a no' and cabir moved his head in a yes'. While this was going on dhruv came to manik and said "buddy.. tujhae nahi lagtha cabir uss ladki kae liyae kuch alag feel kartha hai..?" he said and manik replied "even I feel the same but lets first focus on this tiny head fir cabir kae barae mai sochangae.." and both nodded.

"time up.." abhi's announcement brought everyone into reality and all were looking for nandini. She came out rushing with a bowl in one hand and 6 plates in another. Everyone made bad faces looking at the bowl as nandini tried to prepare something and it was totally burned. "what the hell is this" manik asked looking at the bowl on the table

"Maggie hai.." she said proudly and started dishing it out into plates..

"do u thing we r gonna eat this.." aliya said looking at the plates as no sign on noodles was visible there

"oh hello.. I don't know cooking.. jo mujhae aata hai mainae banaya hai.. kahna hai tho kaho warna tumhari marzi.." she said shrugging her shoulders..

"wait a second.. I have an idea.. miss murthy why don't u eat it jab aapnae itnae pyaar sae banaya hai.." saying this manik picked up a plate took a fork from the table and started moving towards her.. he was taking one step towards her and with the same pace she was moving backwards. Soon she collided with the wall behind and now manik was standing in front of her with that totally burnt Maggie in a spoon and he moved the spoon near to her lips and she turned her face to the other side.

"listen don't waste our time and open your mouth.." manik said looking at her but she didn't turn her face. She closed her eyes tightly. He with other hand turned her face towards him and placed the spoon very like very close to her lips and pulled her cheeks to which she opened her mouth and he immediately pushed the spoon into her mouth and moved back laughingly. As soon as she tasted the so called Maggie she ran towards the wash basin and spit it out. Everyone started laughing and she frowned for getting trapped in her own plan. She was about to take a step towards the exit when observing this dhruv's said "aren't u forgetting something ..?" he said pointing towards her bag and she accepted her defeat and she had no ther way to escape from there she came back.

"ok.. now its my turn" Dhruv said and everyone signalled him to carry on. "ok ill not trouble u much.. it's a simple task.. u have to propose some one.." he said and winked at her

"what..no.. im not gonna do this.." she nodded her head in a NO

"you don't have a choice.." aliya said

Nandini got frustrated on her helplessness and sighed and asked "kisae..?"
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Edited by neeju_chinnu - 8 years ago
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"usae.." dhruv said pointing towards a guy who just entered the canteen

"uska naam kya hai..?" nandini asked

"Aaryaman..Aaryaman khurana.." dhruv told her and she moved towards Aaryaman.

"hai.." she said as soon as she stood infront of him. He was looking into his phone and suddenly looked up "hey beautiful.. how may I help u..?" he asked her. She felt relieved finding him a bit friendly

"I love you" she said and aaryaman's eyes popped out

"what..!" he exclaimed totally shocked

"arae sont take me wrong they told me to do so.." she said pointing towards fab5 and abhi who were still laughing seeing aaryaman's expressions

"idiots they r.. kitni baar kaha hai mainae.. but they r not gonna change.. so u may go now.. ur task is accomplished saying this he tapped her shoulder and left and she sighed in relief and came back to fab5.

"ok that was good.. now my turn.". aliya jumped "ok now u come with me. Ull not do it here.." saying this she took nandini to a desserted corner of the campus and took out something seeing on which nandini's eyes got widened as much as they could.

"no..im not gonna do this.." she palmed her mouth and murmured

"hey common chill..its not a crime u no.." she said and everyone except navya started laughing

"see.. mai aaisae kaam nahi karnae wali.." she denied clearly and manik came forward. He took the cigarette from aliya's hands.. (yes aliya showed nandini the cigarette).. and lighted it.. he took it near to her mouth and tried to push it into her mouth but failed to do so as she very tightly palmed her mouth. "common ek baar sae kuch nahi honae wala.." he said still moving towards her but nah.. she was not in a mood to listen whatever they were saying..

"ull have to do it.. u don't have a choice baby.." manik said

"see.. tumhae jo chahae bolo ill do it but not these kind of things.. please.. don't hurt my feelings.." she said and again manik was lost in her words and immediately dropped the the idea of forcing her.

"ok..chill.. u need not do this.." he said and moved backwards and was stunned when he saw her holding his hand. She took it from his hands and took a puff and blowed it on manik's face itself and again a shock for fab5. Manik started coughing and nandini started laughing. "kyun bacchu dar gayae.." she said and threw the cigarette in a corner in a pakka hero style

"tum..tum..u smoke..?" manik asked totally shocked by her act

"pictures nahi dekhi hai kya..?" she said and winked at him naughtily. Aliya's face dropped as she wanted to make her embarrassed but falied. Not it was abhi's turn

"ok baby doll.. u r very smart hai na..?" he said and nandini shrugged her shoulders " come with me.." he said and held her hand and made her stand in a corner from where the staff rooms were visible "didi u see the professor coming out..?" he asked and nandini nodded a yes.. "what u have to do is.. make him fall down.." saying this he pointed towards the professor who was coming in their side.. he was actually abhi's sadu professor. Abhi gave her an evil smile and she moved towards the professor with a victory smile. Everyone was surprised seeing her confidence as he was a really really strict faculty member. Nandini started walking towards him. While coming she took some books which navya was holding in her hand. The moment she reached the professor she banged into him with such a force that both of thm fell down

"cant u see.." the professor roared

"omg.. sorry sir.. vo actually im new here.. vo wahan khadae hai na.." she said pointing towards abhi and he gulped his saliva seeing nandini pointing at him and looked at his surrounding only to be found alone as rest of the gang immediately hid behind the nearby wall guessing nandini's some definite mischief and stupid abhi being hell engrossed in enjoying the fall didn't observe them..

"haan..vo kya.. what didi he tell u..?" the professors voice was so loud that abhi's face went pale.. thinking what he might do if nandini tell him that all this was planned by him

"vo.. he told me that u r the best professor in the total academy.. and I in a hurry failed to notice u.. sorry sir.." she said making a cute puppy face that he immediately got melted and said "beta.. see and walk.. u may hurt someone or may hurt urself.." saying this he got up patted her head and left and abhi sighed in relief.

"what did u plan to do.. u know he was my HOD..?"abhi freaked out as soon as the professor left and nandini and fab5 & navya came towards him and were laughing like crazy seeing abhi's face.

"what did I do.. mai nae tho sirf yae bola ki u spoke gud about him..huh.. bhalai ka tho zamana hi na raha.." she said wiping her fake tears and immediately got a shock as abhi hugged her and said "thank u.. u saved me from a Dracula.. pata hai vo mujhae kaccha kha jata.. thank u sweety.." he said breaking hug and pulling her cheeks..

"aww.. its ok.." nandini replied. Watching all their plans backfiring mukthi was fuming in anger as she was next she wants to take full revenge.

She moved towards nandini and pushed abhi aside and putting her hands on her shoulders she spoke "bahuth maza aa raha hai na.. lets have some real fun now.." she said with a very mischievous smile.

"hmm..bolo..ab aur kya bacha hai.."nandini spoke exhausted

"ok..u see that washrooms.."mukthi pointed in the direction of washrooms and nandini nodded nervously and just humm'ed

"so what u r gonna do is.. u will enter the boys washroom.. and scare the hell out of them.." she ended and took a step backward indicating with her hands for nandini to go into the washrooms. As usual nandini nodded a no' as this time she was really nervous as she had to step into boys washroom..!!

She was looking everywhere possible when dhruv and manik came and stood on her either sides and held her arms. She looked at them surprisingly and before she could understand what had happened they dragged her to the washroom and pushed her inside.

Nandini realised the surroundings and screamed her lungs out and all the boys present there started running out. Navya freed herself from cabir as all were laughing like hell and dragged nandini out of the washroom. And to everyone's surprise the moment stepped out of the washroom and seeing the boys running in every direction possible she also joined fab5's laughing club. She was laughing like crazy and all others stopped laughing seeing her.

"yaar.. mukthi it was really very funny...hahaha.. didi u see their faces..hahaha" saying this she again started laughing and navya joined her this time. Fab5 and abhi again palmed their faces. Seeing all this pissed mukthi. She looked at manik and winked at him and signalled cabir to handle navya. Man-bir immediately understood and cabir again held navya's hand and she in a second stopped laughing and looked at him surprisingly to which he gave a what' look and she nodded her head sideways.

"nandini principal is coming.. ab tho u r gone.." mukthi said and nandini stopped laughing and looked at mukthi.

"omg.. lets go from here.."she said and was about to run when manik held her hand and pulled her towards him and she banged into his chest.

"what.. chalo.. warns pakadae jayangae.." saying this she tried to free her hands from maniks grip but couldn't

"no he is cuming.. this way.. u do one thing act like u have fainted and we will manage.." aliya said covering up

"par.."navya tried to interrupt but cabir stopped her by palming her mouth and dragging her with him to a classroom nearby which was ofcourse empty.

"common do it fast.. he is coming.." dhruv said and nandini the pure soul fell in their trap and immediately searched a place for her to sit and act fainted but didn't notice that manik was still holding her hand. She tried to move away when abhi added "oh..shit princi has come..!!"

"ab kya karu.."nandini said nervously

"u faint..ill hold u.."manik said and surprisingly she obeyed without any arguments and fell in manik's arms. Manik held her tightly and hugged her and whispered in her ears.. "we ll move out of here like this..warna pakadae jayangae..ok" and she nodded her head in a yes. Soon they reached the empty class room where cabir took navya and after they entered they saw cav-ya were in the same position. Cabir pinned navya to the wall and palmed her mouth and both were lost in each others eyes. Manik cleared his throat for their attention and was successful they straightened themselves and dhruv had already locked the door and now they were again in the first sceen.

"I don't have any problem in staying like this.. but we still have some things to do.." manik said and nandini's eyes shoot opened. She moved away and straightened herself.

"ok.. ab sirf manik bacha hai.. so bro.. bol" cabir said

"so lets keep it simple.. as we r future doctors u may have an idea of the basics.. common.. now give me CPR.." manik said and nandini saw him as if he was an alien... she was stunned to the core.

"wh..wha..what..c..c...cp..cpr..." she said and manik came forward and leaned his face towards her

"chalo.. do it na..." he said naughtily and she palmed her mouth and nodded a no'. everyone was busy looking at nandini and navya tried to escape to get some help for her friend ahe moved towards the door to unlock it. When cabir found navya missing he looked at the door and saw she was trying to open it and before she could do so cabir reached there "ohoo.. miss madhubala where r u going..?" he asked her and she innocently nodded her head in a no' and in a jiffy cabir pulled her with him and held her hand tightly and entwined her fingers with his. "humae janae dijiyae please.." she said making a puppy face but cabir firmly nodded a no' she sighed helplessly.

"ok..if u don't want to give it to me..ill give it to u.." manik said trapping her between his both hands and himself standing in front of her not giving her a single chance to move in anyway.

"please.. yae nai.. anyother thing .. please not this.." she pleaded cutely

"ahh..nope.. either u give it to me.. or take one from me.. I wont mind.." he said moving still closer.

"please..tum kuch bhi bolo mai karungi.. but not this.." she once again tried her level best to convince him

"ok then.. be my girlfriend.." he said leaving everyone in surprise.

******
ok ppl so here im back as promised...
aagae ka aapko jo sochna hai soch lo..😆😉
mai tho chali...

hope u enjoyed my os...
tak care...
keep smiling...
loads of luv...
neeraja..

my other works :
manan ss barfi...
Edited by neeju_chinnu - 8 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#64
Amazing update
Loved each word of it

D dares were funny

It's good to see strong n fighter nandu

Cpr scene 😳

Now about dis girl friend thing...

Is he serious??

Y did u leave it as a cliffhanger??


Edited by kewlgirl - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#65
Superb yaar!!
Yuhu!!..
Nandini Manik gf wow..
Darling one..was the best
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Posted: 9 years ago
#66
Wow!
Loved it yaar!
Just loved it
Nandu ne 5 tasks back fire karva diye!

But I loved Manik's task...
Either give cpcr or be my gf!

Amazing os

Had an awesome time reading it..

Thanks for the pm

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Posted: 9 years ago
#67
Its nice
But plz continue after it
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Posted: 9 years ago
#68
I came across ur story today only
what a beautiful update but u left all of us at cliffhanger.
so cabir has feeling for our madhubala. cava r so cute as always and so our manan. I always adore both the couple's.
update soon.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#69
Abhi hugged her and Mukti was so pissed because all plans back fired
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Mindblowing
Fabulous update
Amazing superb dares
Enjoyed a lot
Lovd it
Thnks for pm me
Plzz dear continue

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