MANAN OS- FALLING FOR HER (PART-A PG1 PARTB PG2) UPDATED

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tanishasac

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Posted: 9 years ago

#61

It was the best one shot I have ever read... Plz if possible continue it.. I just loved it a lot.. The story was so cute :)

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kishubedi

@kishubedi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#62

Thanks for pm!!

loved the os a lot!!

n specially the message behind it

mindblowing!

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asmi.6

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Posted: 9 years ago

#63

Aww that was tooo cute !

Like? NO.

Loved it ! :*

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mehak_ahuja

@mehak_ahuja

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Posted: 9 years ago

#64

Awesome... Its not only a like but kind of loved it...

So cute... N such beautiful writing...

It was blissful experience...

Thank u for sharing such beautiful story...

Keep smiling

Stay blessed

😊

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anya

@anya21

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Posted: 9 years ago

#65

superb OS...

loved it...

manik's confession was awesome...

bt he made her cry alot...

finally at d end...happie ending...

its a nice update...

keep smiling!!!

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kavyach

@kavyach

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#66

OMG... Its an amazing story... Loved it...

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filter.coffee

@filter.coffee

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Posted: 9 years ago

#67

I got a bit emotional while reading it.the words manik said hurts.but the ending is amazing.as always you wrote beautifully.

please update one mistake asap

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PamAlps

@PamAlps

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Posted: 9 years ago

#68

I loved it,u r such a good writer ,its quite mesmerising (y) keep it up n thanx 4 d pm :-)

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Pravallika69

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Posted: 9 years ago

#69

Beautiful dear... I kw it's one shot but hope u wrote more chapters of this n made it a SS instead if OS loved the concept too much n specially Manik... Bichari nandu n thanks for writing the store room scene in all new form lovely it is...

God bless
Love you
Pravallika aka PraNi