MANAN OS- FALLING FOR HER (PART-A PG1 PARTB PG2) UPDATED - Page 2

Originally posted by: Cooldude101

Dude yeh toh Khatam karti! :P xD
Waiting

Omg

IN MY OPINION IT IS """THE BEST OS EVER""" TILL NOW... I JUST LOVED IT SO MUCH THAT MY WORDS ARE DITCHING ME... OMG!! THANK YOU SO MUCH APURVA FOR THIS AMAZING OS... LOVE YOU YAAR...

We'll i m suppose to be the first commenter according to the response but I may not be first as well as I am writing such big comments while others write small ones and then post!
I loved it okay I loved it!
This makes me want to write an OS too! Should I?
Manik was bullying her on the chubbiness of her cheeks? Hawww bad boy!
I agree with everything manik said, it was as though manik is saying everything he loves about her but just in your os.
I loved it sooo much, more please?

Wah wah wah wah enjoyed reading it...short of words.. ⭐️ 👏

Its mindblowing... Soo much swtt nd emotionl story... First meet of manan on stairs is ao swtt...
Mank is to bad.. Only to avoid his feeling he play with nandu ki feeling...
Store rum scene is so emotionl... Rula diya bhut jaida... Actually during their conversation m also crying nd n between them smiling also on mani's comment... Thanxxx for ths lovly os...

Plzz likhte rhiye or hm pdhte rhege or apki rely v krte rhege... 😉 😳 😆 sorryyy
Bt yr at end so beautiful story... Waitng for next & new...


Keep smiling...
Lots of love...

Manan soo cute..

Originally posted by: Cooldude101

We'll i m suppose to be the first commenter according to the response but I may not be first as well as I am writing such big comments while others write small ones and then post!
I loved it okay I loved it!
This makes me want to write an OS too! Should I?
Manik was bullying her on the chubbiness of her cheeks? Hawww bad boy!
I agree with everything manik said, it was as though manik is saying everything he loves about her but just in your os.
I loved it sooo much, more please?

Originally posted by: aarohi_angel98

Amazing update...
Cont soon...

LOVE,
AAROHI...

wow..just awesome..
Its true just to get fun we sometime force people to take dangerous steps..
But end vala to sab vala..
So sweet..
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