MANAN OS- FALLING FOR HER (PART-A PG1 PARTB PG2) UPDATED

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Lizbeth

@Lizbeth

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Posted: 9 years ago

#31

Dat ws gud. Really really gud... A diff one.
Write more yaar.. Try to write more os on manan. Its nce

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crazydreamer

@crazydreamer

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Posted: 9 years ago

#32

Awww the Cutest Love Story dear I really Love It... that's bad when he knows that Alya won't love him then y he had to push nandu but it's alright pyaar me kuch apna dil kho dete h or kuch dimaag b saath me company dene k liye 😛🤣
awesome Fantabulous yaar mast tha now u take care tysm for pm
love u dear 😊

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Megha Agarwal

@megha6agrwl

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Posted: 9 years ago

#33

This was so cute!!

Marvellous n Fab!!

Srsly if u get time continue it...nhi to bs epilogue Hi dedena!!

Just a friendly suggestion..do think!!

All The Best!!

Keep giving OS's like this!!

Love

Megha

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tas456

@tas456

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#34

Awesome!!!

Loved it..pls write more OS like this

Tqvm for the pm dear

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Cooki

@Cooki

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#35

This was the cutest story dear...
Manik just couldn't push her away when she broke down..
I love this story...
It was simple & sweet..
Thnxx for sharing this...
Thnxx for the pm..

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Sunshine2604

@Sunshine2604

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Posted: 9 years ago

#36

very beautifully written os.

love it completely.

continue to write.

hope to see your next work soon.

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Pinkswan_24

@Pinkswan_24

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#37

I really loved it too much...
Was crying like litrly crying while reading...Manik's words was so harsh for smone delicate like Nandini...
Although i loved d whole OS except Manik's behavior,der iz no way to treat a girl u love..srry...
Bt end me he finally confessed it..dats good n he cried also..happys endings...
U r fantastic writer...thankxx
keep entertaining..

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sri_valli

@sri_valli

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#38

superb,mind blowing and some what emotional update...maniks explanation In the end was superb...u penned it beautifully...and their kiss and the way manik asked it for kiss was too cute...thanks for the pm dear..

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prasanna77

@prasanna77

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#39

awesome..these two parts are just amazing...specially second one...

plz do write more stories...

loved manik lines ..ur cheeks are like rasgulla😃...

thank u so much for pm...

love u loads...

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sweet_kaur

@sweet_kaur

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#40

This eas undoubtedly one of the best os
That I have ever come across
Fantastic imagination and beautifully put
Into words
Loved it
Pls pm me about any new work of your
Would love to read it!!

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