IF YOU HOLD MY HAND -A Manan FF chapter 7 Pg 36 - Page 8

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Posted: 9 years ago
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awesome update
oh so now manan will work together
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Thanks for the pm ...wow surprising update it was ... Awww the song which manik sand for nandu was so cuteee ... Hahaha monkey malhotra nice name !!!!!! The small encounter of manan was awesome ...omG nyonika ios nandu's boss and manik is now Gina's work with her hahaha ...wow Wala surprise thi...just loved iT ...thanks for the pm ...love u ...update when possible no prob ... With lots of love anD hugs
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Originally posted by: kitkat5756

Thanks for the pm ...wow surprising update it was ... Awww the song which manik sand for nandu was so cuteee ... Hahaha monkey malhotra nice name !!!!!! The small encounter of manan was awesome ...omG nyonika ios nandu's boss and manik is now Gina's work with her hahaha ...wow Wala surprise thi...just loved iT ...thanks for the pm ...love u ...update when possible no prob ... With lots of love anD hugs


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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome Update.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey Thanks for the pm!! Really nice story!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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awesome..
Liked it..so nyonika knws the reason why nandini is like that..
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CHAPTER 3

Hii mom. Manik said while entering in cabin of nandini. Manan's met each other the moment he entered nd both were surprised to see each other.
Neonika- Aao manik , i want u to meet nandini who according to u my second daughter nd she will b representing MMUndustries for the collaboration with ur music company. I called u here to meet her.

Both manan were still lost lost in each other eyes. Now neonika was also confused as what happnd to them. She said loudly" what happnd to u both."

Manan(in unison)- Tum yahan kya kar rhe ho / rhi ho???

Now neonika was surprised. " U guys already know each other" neonika asked.

Nandini- yes aunty, nd he is the guy i told u about, my neighbour. Mujhe pta ni tha ki ye duffer, stupid nd idiot aapka beta h.

Manik(shocked after listening his taarif)- M duffer stupid nd idiot ?????

Nandini - Is room sirf tum hi aunty k bete or mere neighbour ho to obviously tumhe h bola h nd even these words are small for u. Aunty r u sure he is ur son.

Neonika - Haa nandini, he is my son.

Nandini - Auny dont mind me asking bt is he ur real son or adopted as iski harkatein apse bilkul match ni hoti h

Neonika(supressing her smile) - He is my one nd only real son nandini bt i agree thode screw dheele h iske

Nandini(in low tone) - Thode ni saare screw dheele h.

Manik - I heard tht nd aap dono shayad bhool rhe ho k m b yahin hu. Nd let me tell u k agar mere screw dheele h to tumhare to h hi ni.

Nandini - what did u just said ???

Manik - Dimag k sath hearing power m b defect h kya. Ek bar m sunai ni diya kya ki tumhare screw kisi ki dhulai karte tym kahin gir gye.

With tht manan started their tu tu - main main. Till now neonika understood that nandini is manik's love ehom he is trying to win nd manik is nandini's clg love nd now a irritating neighbour. She thought of doing something so tht they can come close to each other. Suddenly a idea came in her mind. She took her phn nd msg something nd send it.

Manan were still fighting. Suddenly they heard a scream 'Aaahhh'. Both stopped their fight nd looked towards neonika. She just fainted there nd nw she was lying on the floor. Manan were horrified seeing neonika in that condition. Manik took her to couch nd nandini xalled neonika's doctor.

After sometym doctor came . She sent manan out of the cabin for her check her. After they went from there neonika got up nd told the doctor what she has to do. Neonika had already msgd her doctor abt er drama so there ws no problem for her. After their discussion doctor came out from the cabin nd said " Manik neonika just fainted due to stress nd tiredness. But as u know she us a heart patient, u need to b carefull. Just keep her away from any type of stress otherwise it will b dangerous for her life. Manan were tensed listening this. Aftr docter went back they marched in cabin where neonija was taking rest with anger

Manik - hw r u mom now ?

Nandini - Why didnt u told us that u were nt fine.

Manik - u know how much tensed we were .

Nandini - Maine kitni bar bola h aapko k dont take stress bt ni, apko to kisi k sunni h ni h.

Manik - Nandini u r right , mom ko humse pyar h ni h isliye khud ki care ni karti h.

Now neonika was shocked . " Shut up u both. Itni der se bole ja rhe ho. Thodi der pehle to tum log fight kar rhe the or ab har bat m 'hum'. Mere faint hone k bad tum dono ka oatch up ho gya h kya.

Now manan realised that neonika is right. They were feeling awkward. Bt they also realised that they said too much to neonika.

Manan(in low tone) - Sorry

Nandini- nd from now on u will take rest. I will handle the collaboration . U dont need to worry abt that.

Neonika- Bt nandini i was thinking to manage all the performance nd music of super six. Nd if u l handle that u need to b with super six till collaboration.

Nandini( after thinking for a while)- I will handle both finance nd management of colkaboration . U just dont take stress.

Manik - Yes mom, we will handle it. Now u need to tske rest. Come mom, i will take u home( manik stays alone bcoz his studio is near from his flat.)

Neonika - No beta. I will go by myself. U stay here nd discuss the collaboration details with nandini.

Manik - Bt mom

Neonika- Ni if no but. U r staying here nd thats final. My blessings r with u . Hope this project will be a success.

Manin- Okk mom. With that neonika left from there . Now manan were left alone. Both were thinking abt each other. Nandini was sad as now she has to work with the persin she lives bt dont want to show. She knew that working with manik nd super six will b tough for her as they will try to ask for the resson of her pain.

Nandini - Listen manik, i didnt knew that u r noenika aunty's son. Nd for only aunty i m working with u. So u better stay in ur limits.


Aftr saying this nandini left from there. Only manik was standing there. He was happy from inside as now he nd super six with the help of cabir can try ti mend her broken heart. Manik was detrmined to heel the unknown pain of nandini


Done with chapter 3 . Thanxxx a lot alk of u who gave their like nd comments nd those who didnt pls atleast hit a like yrr. I know i m giving updates very latel bt cant help it as i m stuck in personal life. Even nw i hv to prepare dance fora wedding nd i m here writing a update. So plzz wait for my updates nd do leave ur cmmnts.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#78
Nyc concept
Awsm update 😊
Loved the nok jhok of manan 😆
N bond between neyonika and manan
Waiting for next update
Cont soon...

STAY BLESSED
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Posted: 9 years ago
#79
Amazing updates...story is going good
Keep writing. ..Thanks for PM...eagerly waiting for
Next part. ...:)
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Posted: 9 years ago
#80
Nice update nd thanks fr the pm
Ufff they both r fighting like kids but that was fun to read
Nyonika came up with wat an idea nd it worked as both of thm r soo concerned fr her
Sooo nandini nd manik r gng to wrk together
Continue sooonnn

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