IF YOU HOLD MY HAND -A Manan FF chapter 7 Pg 36 - Page 22

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Cuteprincess6 thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
Thanxxx a lot guyz
cant tell u hw much happy i am after reading the comments
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice chapter
Looking forward to the next one

Nandini ke baare mein aur pata Chale ga!

Loved it

Thanks for the pm
Continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome
Manik knows a little abt nandini and he shared it wid all
And now they all come together to bring her out
Thanx for pm
Unfold this mystery soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
hey aditi..
really very sorry for commenting late...the cicumstances are nt allowing me to be on if much...

anyways...update was terrific...

hehe...the lift scene...it was too good...
loved and enjoyed it soo much...

she doesnt pray anymore...and manik's songs...haha...lovely...

nandini has really gone far.she is very hurt of smthng.and has created a dark shell around her..

haha..cabir...they did right...

waiting to know wat plan...aur manik ne aisa kyun kaha...end mein...
loving it...

aur mera naam kyun likha...everyone would be cursing and would be sending abuses to me...

so...now plz..update soon


LOVE
SANJANA
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: krazzy_parthian

hey aditi..

really very sorry for commenting late...the cicumstances are nt allowing me to be on if much...

anyways...update was terrific...

hehe...the lift scene...it was too good...
loved and enjoyed it soo much...

she doesnt pray anymore...and manik's songs...haha...lovely...

nandini has really gone far.she is very hurt of smthng.and has created a dark shell around her..

haha..cabir...they did right...

waiting to know wat plan...aur manik ne aisa kyun kaha...end mein...
loving it...

aur mera naam kyun likha...everyone would be cursing and would be sending abuses to me...

so...now plz..update soon


LOVE
SANJANA



no one is gonna curse u dear
ur suggestion was really gud
hope i left in in solid wala suspense
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Cuteprincess6



no one is gonna curse u dear
ur suggestion was really gud
hope i left in in solid wala suspense


wohoho...solid ni super solid...i was biting my nails in suspense...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Great..!!!
Eager to know nandini's secret which is so dangerous that can kill someone's life..
Loved it..
Cont soon.
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Posted: 9 years ago
nice episode..
nandini didn't open up but she definetly gave up hints as to why she is staying away from eeveyone..
and the songs that he was singing, it was irritating nandini a lit and he was loving it..
But what is super six planing..
Update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hey amazing update! Nxt part update soon..!!!
😊 TC
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Posted: 9 years ago
Chapter 7


A new started with new hopes. With the rising sun , the hopes of super six were also rising. They know tht what they wanna do is going to b very difficult for them. But they dont hv any other option. They know they will hurt nandini bt without doing tht they will not b able to know the reason if her broken heart. They hv left the success if their plan on god nd destiny.


The day started as usual. Super six was jamming nd nandini was just watching them. She wanted to appreciate them, clap for them bt she can't. As one emotional step of her can distract her from her determination of being professional only. But to her surprise today noone from super six talked to her other than hii-hello even manik nd cabir also didnt talked to her much. One side if her heart was happy tht things r under control bt on the other side she was disappointed too as yhey didnt talked to her.

Manik was singing nd whole gang was playing instruments. It was their plan for 'Raag' tht each member will s


Hmm...tumse h jeete rahe
hmm...tum pe hi marte rhe
jab tak h jaan

tum do lafzon me
tum se ye kehna tha
tum se hi mohabbat thi
tum se hi mohabbat h
tum se kehna h yun rehna h
jab tak h jaan

( manik was singing these lines with so much love nd passion that nandini was also slowly slowly drowning in his eyes. The love of manik was making nandini loose her sense. )


teri aankhon ke sajde me rehna
palkon ke parde me
jab tak h jab tak h jaan
teri baahon ki narmi me
saanson ki garmi me
jab tak h jab tak h jaan

( nandini was so much lost in manik tht she also started singing with manik)

tum se do lafzon me
tum se ye kahna tha
tum se hi mohabbat thi
tumse hi mohabbat hai
tumse kehna h yun rehna h jab tak h jaan


Raatein jagenge raaton me
teri bemaani baaton me
jab tak hai jab tak hai jaan
kori kori shaamon me
gungunaaye kaano me
jab tak hai jab tak hai jaan


Nandini finished the song. She was singing with the same passion that was in manik's singing. As soon as she finished all the members of super six started clapping for manan. By the sound of claps the trance of manan was broken. Nandini ce back in her senses nd started regretting in her mind tht why she sang the song. But manik was very happy as nandini singing was a great hope nd kinda surity for them tht tey will be successfull in what they r planning.


Nandini didnt tried to talk to anyone nd to her surprise they also didnt talked to her even about song except than cabir.Nandini nd cabir were leaving nd talking to each other as anothers hv already left bt they both were unknown to the twist coming in their life.

Cabir - Nandu , u were awsm. Agar tune singing na chodi hoti to tu aan hum ze b badi singer hoti.

Nandini - Cabir dont start it again . Mere liye b easy ni h apne dream ko yun hi chodna bt u know i cant do it as it will show my identity to whole world. Nd i dont want another trouble for me.

Cabir - Yaa, i understand. Bt plzz agar tu singer nhi ban sakti to atleast singing to mat chod.

Nandini - Hmm. I will try.

Nandini nd cabir reached the parking of the studio nd the scene in front of them was enough to scare them. Maddy nd dhruv were lying on the floor with blood ozing out from their hands nd heads. Mukti nd aliya were crying nd holding them. Nanbir were shocked to see this bt major shock was about to come.

Cabir - Guyzz,ye kaise ho gya. Tum dono ke itni kaise lag gyi.

Mukti (while crying) - We dont kniw cabir vo kon the. Jab hum log parking me aaye to they started beating maddy , dhruv nd manik.

Listening manik's name both nandini nd cabir got tensed as manim was not there.

Nandini - But manik kahan h. Vo yahan to h hi nhi. Mukti manik kahan gya.

Mukti - Manik ko vo log apne sath le gye nandini.

Nandini was frozed on her place. Her worst nightmare has come true. Tears rolled down her cheek nd sbe started crying bitterly. Cabir firstly helped maddy nd dhruv to get up nd then he tried to handle nandini.

Nandini - Cabir , ye sab meri wajah se ho rha h. Un logon ne mujhe doondh liya . Pta ni vo manik ke sath kya karenge . Vo log bahut dangerous h , vokuch b kar sakte h.

Cabir - Ssh...nandini. Manim ko kuch ni hoga. We will find him. Use kuch ni hoga.


Maddy - Ye chal mya rha h. Tum log kiski bat kar rhe ho.

Cabir - Vo hum kisi ki bat ni kar rhe. U dont need to know it.

Dbruv(shouting) - Off course we need to know. Humara best frnd un logon k sath h. Uske sath pta ni kya karenge vo log.

Aliya - Yes nandini, ab tak humne tumse much ni pucha bt now we need to know. Bcoz its not only related to ur life , its related to our life also. Nd hum b ye janna deserve karte h ki vo kon log h jo hum par attack karke bamare best frnd ko le gye.

Mukti - Aliya is ryt nandini. We need an answer to all our questions.

Nandini (shouted crying) - What do u want to know. U want answers na , i will give u . Vo sab mere ex fiance ke log the jinhone tum par attack kiya. Or kya janna chahte ki mere oarents unki so called reputation nd society k liye meri shadi ek gangster se karwana chahte h.

Saying all this nandini fell down on her knees nd cried more bitterly. Now all of them were shocked . They know that how much nandini is hurted so they decided to stop it. Nd suddenly manik came wbo wss hiding behind the pillar nd he must hugged nandini.

Manik - Nandini plzz stop crying . Look i m here only nd nothing happened to.me.

Nandini nd cabir were shocked to see manik. Before tey can ask him something mukti spoked.

Mukti (crying) - We r really sorry nandini. It was my plan to do this , jisse ki tum hume bta do ki what happened with u. Bt trust me hum tumhe hurt ni karna chahte the.

This was another shock for nandini nd cabir. Nandini was numb to hear this whereas cabir was very angry on them . This plan has scared them both to hell.


Manik was still hugging nandini. Cabir just came towards them nd jerked manik away from nandini nd slapped him . All were shocked by this act of cabir.

Cabir (shouting) - What the hell ws that. U know hum dono kitna dar gye the. Nd manik u says na ki u love her na then how can u do this to her.

Manik - Trust me cabir hum na.dini ko hurt ni karna chahte the. Hum sab pareshan ho gye the nandini ko ese lifeless dekh kar. Hum bas uski hp karna chahte the.

Maddy - Haa cabir, humara tarika galat tha bt intentions sahi the. We all r her frnds nd we were not able to see her lyk tht.

Cabir - But tum log...

He was cut offed by nandini.

Nandini - They r ryt cabir. They only wanted to reduce my pain. Nd i guess they all deserve to know about my past as jo aaj inka natak tha kal vo sach me ho sakta hai. I m ready to tell u guyz . Bt not here. I think we should go to my home.

Cabir said srry to manik nd hugged him.All were happy tht now nandini us ready to tell them. Nd they all leaved to her home.


Hii guyzzz. I know i broke my promise of past revealation bt i was very ill nd not able to write it completely. So i thought not to spoil it nd just gave a teaser of it. Nxt part will b of detailed revealation.

Hope u all will lyk it bt personally i m nit satisfied with it. So if u even wanna bash then more than welcm. But if u lyk it then atleast hit a like . And a big big thanks to all who liked nd commented on last update. Bcoz of u guyz i wrote it even after being ill.
Take care.


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