#2 MANAN SS- ONE MISTAKE CHP18 PG110 (15/2) *PMS TOM

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mairaallauddin

@mairaallauddin

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Posted: 9 years ago

#21

Congratulations for the new thread

Update the next part soon

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Jyoti

@bhagupur

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#22

Congratulations. .dear.

👏👏. 2 .👏👏.

Many more to come.

Thanks.

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Addrita Islam

@Addrita.Jesin

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Posted: 9 years ago

#23

congrats..i v started reading it..its awesome..update soon

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love_manan

@love_manan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#24

Wowww...a big congrats to u...yeyyy u started 2nd thread...bas ab jaldi se update karna

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crazydreamer

@crazydreamer

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Posted: 9 years ago

#25

Yuppie A Big CONGOOOS N BONGOOOS...
dear now plz just post this story... AS Soon AS Possible 😊

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@ps_angel

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Posted: 9 years ago

#26

congrtsss👏

continue soon

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Apurva

@apps33

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+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: if_account
Hey.. Congratulations...!!😊
I hope you know me..
Well I Had commented on your story before too.. But after that I forgot the name..😕

So now today I got it back..

It was amazing.. I mean specially the first three chapters.. My heart was literally in my throat.. 😭 The way you depicted Nandini's emotion and all and Manik.. I sooo hated him..
You made me hate him.. Seriously.. I must say.. Terrifically described..

I mean.. A husband.. Free to do anything.. Shameless.. Jerk.. Looser..
Just because he was in arrange marriage.. He thought that he will find his love outside only..
Forget that..

He was even thankless.. Humanity naam ki bhi cheez nahi hai..
Okay.. He confessed.. He was being honest but he could've checked on her too.. Whether she is fine or not..

But no.. That time all he wanted was his freedom and soha..😡

Huh...!! I toh wanted to slap him then only..

Now I want Nandini to find someone.. I mean as a friend.. She should get more close to him.
Like Aryamann..

I want Manik to taste his own medicine.. He is just not putting any efforts..
Okay.. I agree he is crying for her.. Now he misses her but what is he doing to get her back..

I wanna love Manik.. Please.. Do something na..😳

I know you will.. Well sorry of I sound offended.. But trust me I absolutely loved this story when I read it first..

Please bring that magic again..😛

Baaki you are amazing and know better than me.. And of course you pen down everything beautifully..!!😊

Congo again...
👏👏

YESS .. I do know you. .. How can I not 😉

And yeah I know people often tend to forget the story name... Happens with me too...

But glad you remember the story at least 😆

Thank you soo much for the comment dear...

And you didn't offend me in any way at all...

In fact I like when readers/friends tell me what all they like and want in my story.. So m glad to read your comment too...

And dont worry... Hence forth in most chapters you will only find manik putting efforts to win her back...

So i suggest you to stay tuned .. 😉😆

Love

Apurva

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Apurva

@apps33

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+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#28

Spoiler Time...

Update in an hour... HOPEFULLY!

Manan first night flashback....( Aise waise koi cheez mat sochna)

ONLY ON HIGH DEMAND 😆😆😆

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sanjana

@krazzy_parthian

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#29

Hey appu...
Congrats...for the new thread...

Though am nt a regular commentor...bt I love it very much...

Though I cant hate manik even if I try my best...
Bt still he needs to go and get some brains...
Loved the way u have portrayed nandu's emotions...
U have kept everything intact and beautiful...

Aiting for update...
Aur aisa waisa ni socha...;)

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SANJANA