#3 Stranger (part 35/page 119) 10 oct - Page 5

Created

Last reply

Replies

770

Views

74.8k

Users

172

Likes

1.6k

Frequent Posters

_Myrah_ thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 9 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: _Samthanian_

Awee.. thnkew baby.. n i will wait for your comment...


Sorry dear actually mainey teri updates toh padhli bt filhaal m tired due to weakness n also time for medicine n rest toh main pakka kal comment kardungi.. Waisey toh main avi vi kardeti bt agar avi karungi toh it will be small n i wanna give u a lambaa wala comment so kal kardungi.. I hope its okay wid u...😊😊
ashitha.kerala thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
#42
congrats for new thread u deserved it stay blessed nd smiling keep going like this
Luving_Gari thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 9 years ago
#43
COMPENSATION PART

Yey... 1st part in thread 3...

This part is dedicated to mah Myrah baby... as she is fit n fine now...

Sorry for the typing errors if any...


PART 24


At night...

Manik was busy with Abir while cabir was searching for Nandini. He found her in the balcony.


Cabir : Tum akele yaha pe kya kar rahi ho?

Nandini : Kuch nehi, just spending some alone time.

Cabir : Ek baat puchu, sach sach batana.

Nandini : Hmm bolo.

Cabir : Kya tum sach main manik se pyaar karte ho?

Nandini : Haan, par he doesn't love me.

Cabir : He loves you too, but he can't express his feelings, I know him very well.

Nandini : Really!!! U think that he loves me.


Saying this she hugged cabir in excitement.


Nandini : But I have a que. Who is Abir? Kya wo sach main manik ka beta hain?

Cabir : Nehi, Manik ki toh saadi bhi nehi hua toh fir beta kaise ayega, aur hamara manik characterless nehi hain ki saadi se pehle hi usko beta ajayega.

Nandini : Toh fir Abir usko dad keu bulate hain?

Cabir : Actually it's a long story & it's related to your brother, would you like to hear that?

Nandini : Of course, please tell me.

Cabir : Toh fir suno but Manik ko batana mat ki main tumhe kehdiya.

Nandini : Tum tension maat lo.

Cabir : Few years ago tum tab London main thi, tumne Suna hoga ke tumhare bhai ki saadi hone wala tha.

Nandini : Haan, main toh aana bhi chahti thi par bhai ne bola saadi cancel hogayi.

Cabir : Actually saadi cancel nehi hua tha, tumhare bhai ne saadi karne se mana kar diya tha aur Iska reason unse bola ke he wanted to marry in more rich family.

Nandini : Par bhai ne aisa keu bola, I don't believe this.

Cabir : Yeah, even mujhe bhi believe karne main problem hua tha, keuki Abhi Mukti se saccha pyaar Karta tha.

Nandini : Mukti kaun hain?

Cabir : Manik's sister. Abhi ne toh baas ek phone karke saadi cancel kar diya tha. Mukti ne Abhi se baat karne ke liye ghar se nikli thi akele car lekar. Par uski accident hogayi thi kisi auto ke saath. Auto main jo thi wo spot dead hogayi aur mukti coma main chali gayi thi.

Nandini : Mukti aab kaisi hain?

Cabir : Wo aab thik hain. Aur us auto main jo thi manik uske family ko dund nikala toh tab pata chala ke uski koi nehi tha, sirf ek saal ka ek baby tha & wo baby hain Abir. Tab se wo manik ke saath hain.

Nandini : Ayappaa, Manik itni accha hain. Aaj uske liye toh mera pyaar aur bhi jayda badh gaya.

Cabir : That's great, Don't you think ki now manik ki bari hain?

Nandini : For what?

Cabir : Aapne pyaar ko izhar karne ka.

Nandini : Par mujhe nehi lagta ke wo bolega, he is so rude, Huhhh.

Cabir : Jab cabir hain saath, darne ka kya baat. Main tumhe batata hoon ki kya karna hain tumhe. You have to just ignore him & make him jealous tab dekhna vaag te vaag te tumhare piche ajayega wo. Main janta hoon ushe.

Nandini : Really!!!! You are so sweet.


Cabir's pov :

Hu hu ha ha!!!!! Manik baba aab tera kya hoga.Tu toh aab gaya, keuki pataka ane wali hain tera zindagi main.


Meanwhile manik reached to the balcony looking for them.


Manik : Tum dono yaha kya kar rahe ho?

Cabir : Tujhe keu baatau? Tu kaun hain? Ja yaha se, yaha pe ek private baat chal raha hain.

Manik : Cabir lagta hain yamraj tera wait kar raha hain aaj, bheju kya tujhe unki pass?


Without answering manik, Cabir turned to Nandini & said...


Cabir : Nandini ghar main nimbu hain kya?

Nandini : No, par keu?

Cabir : Lagta hain manik talli ho gaya, ishi liye yamraj bhi ushe dekhai de raha hain.

Nandini : Par cabir, ghar main "VIM" hain. Aur usme hain 100 nimbu ki shakti.

Cabir : Ye wala accha hain.

Manik : Cabir tu marega mera haat main.

~~~~~~~

Hola peeps!!! I know this part wasn't funny but I need to reveal the truth also na... So this was it... N Liz_beth(hope i speeled it right) Hope uh r happy by this part... as uh wanted something emotional in the update... I know the update was short but I promise next will be long update...

LOVE,
PARI N RIFA
Luving_Gari thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 9 years ago
#44

Originally posted by: myruh



Sorry dear actually mainey teri updates toh padhli bt filhaal m tired due to weakness n also time for medicine n rest toh main pakka kal comment kardungi.. Waisey toh main avi vi kardeti bt agar avi karungi toh it will be small n i wanna give u a lambaa wala comment so kal kardungi.. I hope its okay wid u...😊😊

Are koi na baby,.. U rest... N kal kar diyo tera reserved comment kahi ja thori raha hai...,
chocopie26 thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Explorer Thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
#45
Awesome I guess Manik ka gussa is ovio
N he z such a sweetheart...usne abir ko itna support kiya
BT I think he thoda zada emotional ho skta tha...BT koi nai
Ye v boht acha tha...
Update soon!!! Loads of love
N I have a big bang news !!!!
Yaar Mera promotion ho gya!!!
Main Bua ban gayi!!!!!
Hehehe!!! My chotu champ z chooo cute..
He z ittuuu sa...
akshima1995 thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
#46
Cabira back on work as cupid 😆
Loved the update 😊
Cont soon...
shruti1997 thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
#47
Congo for the new thread
Cabira is back the cupid
Manik is so nyc he took care of abeer
I hope he confess his feelings soon
The chapter was nyc
eppie99 thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
#48
Awww it was such a sweet update lttle sis
Really luvd
koi nhi aaj zyada funny nhi tha to kya hua
kabhi kabhi emotional hona bhi zaruri hota hai
this time abeer wali mystry to solve ho gyi bt a lot more keft to know
cabini talk...finally
varna bechara cabir to pita hi hai ab tak usse
nice one dear
nspsly that vim vala was really nice
It was really funny
continue soon
stay blessed
mona_angel thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
#49
Wowww so Manik is not married, make Manik confess his feelings in next part cont wait for it so long plzzz make him jealous also love to watch jealous Manik update next part soon and longer one plzzz
Priya.T thumbnail
Explorer Thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
#50
Good chappy ! But was little small .. Waiting for the next one !! Nandini gonna ignore Manik !! Damn excited !:)!:)

Related Topics

Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".