The forceful kiss manan ff on hold note on pg 60

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@dreamy_doll15

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#141

Oh My God..

it is so damm funny..

I can't stop myself from laughing. .

like seriously
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that's just amazing. ...

poor nandu..
manbir k track me fas gyi...

poor.

n she don't want to die .

because she is a virgin. .
hahahaha.

like seriously. .

she is damm funny. .

that was freaking awesome. .

I just love it..
Itsss soo awesome ..
So amazing. .just love to the core. ..

Soo .fantastic. ...

Keep updating. ..

U r such a beautiful writer...
Update soon..
Waiting for next update eagerly ..
Thanks for this update
.
Thanks for pm too.

..

Stay blessed

Love Geet

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HTA111

@HTA111

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#142

Lol it was fun

The way they both are trying to scare the shit out of her but in the end manan had their eye lock which takes them into trance and drowning into each other eyes

Continue soon and thanks for pm

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prasanna77

@prasanna77

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#143

wow it was damn funny...awesome update..i cant stop laughing ...loved it..😃

specially those theories...hilarious...

nandini was so cute...

theory 4...vitamin deficiency...they can't make happiness so they suck other's happiness,,,lol..😃 loved these lines and entire theory...

and the entire ghost thing was amazing...nandini was so cute...

manik and cabir cant stop laughing...

and manbir fight for cupcakes...enjoyed reading it...

and finally manan's cute romantic moment.😛..

thanks for pm...

Edited by prasanna77 - 9 years ago

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nara26

@nara26

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#144

Omg omg 😆 😆 😆
Manbir is so funny hah and nandu i dont want die am am not married yet 😆 😆
Ufff i can not more my stomach hurts from laughing so hard 😆
Dear pls pm me next time

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edward_twilight

@edward_twilight

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#145

OMG...that was so hilarious 🤣
Nandini's theories and then talking to ghost and striking a deal with it ... hahahha
Naughty and bhukkad Manbir scared the hell out of Nandini. ..
She is not going to leave them.

Waiting to see how Nandini wilk react now.

Update soon

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Sonalmanan

@Sonalmanan

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#146

Amazing!! Nandu's theory of ghost n manbir scaring her so much... Bhookhad kahi ke...hehehe... 😆 😆 Now gondola has to face the consequences... Thanks for pm... I really enjoyed reading it... 😊 😊

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piyu008

@piyu008

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#147

nice ..😆

update soonish

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kishubedi

@kishubedi

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#148

thanks for pm

loved it lol

too funny nandu with her theories ahah

n rules of course!

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sweet_kaur

@sweet_kaur

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#149

Omg still can't stop laughing
I love your writing girl
And the part that amazes me the
Most is the way you manage to give us flawless
Updates of the two most captivating stories
Which are from different genres and inflict
Different emotions
Loved it
Thanks a lot for the pm!!!