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Posted: 9 years ago
In the evening

Nandini's pov
I was in my room i took bath five times i brushed my teeth almost 16 times than i forget counting them still i am not satisfied with all this i tried to puke but nothing happened
but what about that shadow ghost ?


Meanwhile with kabir and manik

"Yar manik muje bhuk lgi hai ye mess ka khana ek din meri lash milegi tuje is khane ko khane ke bad bhai badla lena in logo se "kabir said while placing his hand on his tummy


"Ye kya hai kabir "manik said

"Mere bhuke pet ki awaz "kabir said while making the face like he haven't eat anything since so long manik rolled his eyes

"Muje bhi bhuk lgi hai par tu kal hi sare cupcakes or cookies chips kha gya we have nothing to eat bro "manik said

"But yar i want something now other wise tuje sach me meri lash milegi yha tu apne bhai ko marne dega "kabir said while wiping his fake tears

"Mar ja tu acha hai "he said
Just than and idea pop up in his mind

Dimag ki batti jalii !

"Kabir i have plan "manik said and whisper something in his ear

* Evil grin *


She was trying her best to sleep but sleep didn't came than she heard the sound of walking and the sound of dragging one foot out side the window
She was scared
This began happening more and more often.
It was enough to drive her nuts...
Then she heard a knock on the door she was absolutely terrified. She hissed her eyes were glowing red in the dark!
Than again a loud knock and sudden the door of window opened with a jerk . This terrified her even more
Surrounding herself with positive thoughts, actions, she came near the window

"Kon hai wha "she said fear was visible in her eyes but there was no one she turned she was about to go near the bed but someone tapped on her shoulder
She again turned other side but there was no one
She was scared
Very scared !
She moved away from there and sudden the vase of her room fall down and broke into piece
She screamed
As if she heard the sounds of dynamite blasting off, and echoing in the mountains ...!!!


Sudden curtains started flying in the air, she heard sounds of laughing and giggling, more noises came from the washroom
The noise of water
Tappp...
Tappp...
Tappp...
Those noise was enough to make her froze on her place
That noise of plain natures had terrified her
Her heart begin to play drums in her body
She was froze in fear as a rock, just the size of a cricket-ball, fell just in front of her. A split-second more or less and her skull would've been split open. That was the next most frightening moment of her life ...!!!!!
Just than a shadow appear in front on her eyes , it came there for only to disappear when she focused on them... !!!!

Shadow Creatures ...

Again came !
Bhoot bhoot bhoot
bachao ...
Koi hai ...!!!!!!

Nandini's pov

I heard a tapping sound cut through the silence of the night. I craned my head to see if I could pinpoint where the sound was coming from. Dread began to wash over me as I realized that tapping was coming from the out side from the window . I inched my way over to the window.
I opened it to see the blackness of the depths below.
My ears perked up. There it was again. That hollow tapping sound. The same sound I had heard a while ago . I turned on the lights . The tapping continued as I took the first step. Fear overtook me.
. Though I was in a state of near panic when I ran from the window , I distinctly remember leaving the door open and not turning off the lights. I heard the sound of the hot water clicking in the night. I knew better, but welcomed a logical explanation.

Hearing the hollow sound echo with my footsteps, a cold sweat started to form on me.
Then I heard it. A faintly audible whisper.
At first, I thought it was somebody calling from me but no somebody was laughing and giggling , and their voice scared me . That sound was coming from out side the window ,
As I stood frozen with fear, it began to increase in volume but still remained barely above the threshold of human perception, what was being said incomprehensible to my young ears.
Then it stopped as quickly as it began.
I took my first step to escape this ever growing nightmare, the most profoundly terrifying moment of my life occurred. A loud, hollow bang
Almost knocking me to the ground.
Through tears and shaking me uncontrollably They tried their best to calm me, but nothing they said could ease my mind. I can't tell you how terrified I was,
Than a shadow appear in front on my eyes and disappeared !!

my mind was SHOCKED and Blank and I was scared as shit. I remember telling myself, breathe, breathe again, RUNNN. But even though I stood there the This is the most frightening thing that has ever happened to me ...
my legs felt like they were made of cold water. That's the main sensation that I felt . Time also seemed to pass very slowly.

It is one thing to get pumped up and spring into action in a frightening moment, and then there are situations like these, where you can do absolutely nothing The reality slowly sinks in, and the fear persists and the only source of hope was the invisible almighty. It is said that an atheist has no invisible means of support,
All we could do at that moment was pray - Instantly i started chanting the gayatri mantra. While I took out a small book of verses and hymns given by amms, and I read it in trepidation, without knowing the meaning of what was I reading.
Aiyaapa save me
aiyaapa ...!!!!!
I closed my eyes my mind was blank
Just than shadow again came

"Nandini murthy you ate me now i will eat you hahaha"shadow said to me

"No no no i haven't ate you it was a plan against me "i said while fidgeting with my words

"So what the key word is my heart is in your stomach "thr shadow of rooster said

What "i was confuse his heart in my stomach

"Yeah you only ate one part of my body my heart i want it back anyhow "shadow said this to me

"But how i am supposed to give you back it is inside my stomach "i said while wiping those drops of fear on forehead

"I don't know i want it do what you want "shadow said to me

See i told you that's the advantage of being ghost we can't even ask them anything

"But please at least try to understand how i will give it you back even i want to give u your heart back but i can't koi muje nh samjta amms bhi muje ghar se nikal degi she will disowned me there is no place in this country where a disowned young can live even aiyaapa is angry with me or tum bhi kha jaoge see i told you mera koi nh hai is duniya me koi bhi nh "she started crying like a child while wiping her nose
Manik and kabir kept there hands on their mouth stopping themselves from laughing loudly

Nandini's pov
The naked dance of death came in front of my eyes
I discovered how the last wish of the dying was carried out, i need to make sure i am indeed dead before being buried. What of the covers being tucked in tightly all around me up to the neck with my arms to my sides? This is how they set the body before rigor set in to where the body could not be posed for viewing. What about the pillow? Again, this was done in order that the corpse looked as natural as possible. Laying flat in a pine box in the normal state without help to hold the neck forward meant that the jaw would be pushed down towards the chest. Problem solved by setting the body with the pillow just below the neck.
That's the last wish of my life i need pillow under my neck ...!!!

The fear that struck me simply made me respectful of our nature. It made me realize that we are all but a scintilla of the universe. No matter what you do, you cant fight it. You can't do anything about it, and it only makes your resolve, to live a happy and fulfilled life, in the best possible way you can. Who knows, an earthquake might strike this very moment and bury you forever. So what fear taught me was, live life in such a way, that when you face death, you don't have a reason to fear . Recounting the whole episode as only made me think this yet again. As destiny would have it, I needed to learn this. who knows when your life is going to be end if we knows we would've cleared that stretch and would've never encountered it,
But the keyword was my death was in front of my eyes !
Thankfully i all lived, and 20 years , I think I have done pretty well. I have a few regrets, and a lot to achieve, but as long as I am on the right track, I don't think I'll have a reason to fear death again
Fine i am ready for the death ...!

"Manik isko heart attack toh nh aa gya why she is so silent "kabir said
Manik gave him
I-don't-have-any-idea-bro look

"What the hell are you thinking "shadow said

"N...not..nothing "she manage to said those words she closed her eyes and opened it

"I am ready for it you can eat it me but i have one last wish "she said while gulping her saliva down

Manbir eyes popped out from their socket

"What"shadow said

"I want a pillow below my neck "she said

"What pillow below your neck now "shadow said both was confused

"No no not now meri death body pr neck ke niche i want it cremation ke time par "she said

"Stupid girl agar me tumhe kha jaunga toh death body bchegi hi kha "shadow said in a loud voice

Hawww
No death body
No cremation
No aatma ko shanti that means i will be a ghost ...!!!
Aiyaapaaa
I want to become a scientist not a ghost ...
Everyone is so unfair to me
why ? why ? why ?

"You can do one thing for me"shadow said

"What i will give whatever you want but please leave me i don't want to die so early i am not even married"she said while joining her hands

Kabir kept his one hand on his mouth or another one on his stomach but he couldn't control himself he was about to laugh but manik placed his one hand on his mouth and another one was on his own mouth both kneel down in the balcony


"Tell me what you want "she again asked

"Shhh"manik and cabir calm themselves down

"I am hungry you have something "shadow said

"Yes yes i have so many things yesterday amms send me muffins, cupcakes,cookies tum sab le lo bas muje chod do " sha said

After hearing this to her
Kabir's tongue came out from his mouth

Just like crocodile of alpenlibe ...
Kaise jeebh laplapai ...!!!!

Same goes with manik

Jee lalchaye raha na
jaye ...!!!!!!!!


"Arey toh jaldi do na i will leave you alive "shadow said

"Thank thank you thank you so much wait me abhi lekar ayi kahi jana mat "she said happily she move towards

She instantly came with muffins, cookies, and cupcakes

"Have it "she while placing them on window
She was so happy
She was never been so happy so much in her whole life
Not even when she was born !

"Turn your face other side"shadow said
She instantly turn to other side kabir grab those things from window
Instantly !
As if they are going to disappear ...

Kabir begin to eat cupcakes

"Kabir me bhi hu yha "manik poked him

"Manik tu kuch or khale you know cupcakes are my favourite" he said while stuffing them in his mouth

"Kabir i want cupcakes de muje adhe "he said while gritting his teeth

"Nahi tu kuch or kha le "he said while snatching them from manik's hand

"Kabir i want them "manik said loudly

Gondola "she said when she heard manik's voice she came near the window and saw manbir fighting for cupcakes

"You both iska mtlub tum dono urghh i am not going to leave you both "she said while glaring at them

"Manik bhag "kabir said while gulping cupcakes

She was about to shout when manik placed his hand on her mouth nandini looked in his eyes
kabir picked up those things from there and came down through the pipe
Manik look towards her shiver of pleasure passed in her body
Just because of his mere touch !
Both shared a deep eye lock

"Manik jaldi aa na "kabir shouted manik came in his senses and ran from there
He came down

Both ran from there as if there ass was on fire !

She hissed
"Gondola if someone will lock me in a room with u hittler or bin ladden and gave me a gun with two bullets i would've shout you twice right there without any second thought
I hate you urghhh "she said while gritting her teeth



Pheww i am done you must be thinking mera upar ka mala ud gya lol sachi me
Wese i am trying my best to make you all laugh if it won't crack you please feel free to throw chappal or tamatar on me ande nhi ha veg terrain hu acha ab comment bhi kar do gaaliya hi de do for this crap you want to know what is the mean of gondola will tell you but not now
Or devils will be there on Thursday bye bye
Edited by Aashna_chawla - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
as u say dear.. nyc crap... hahaha... really its v funny... waiting for next update
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hilarious 😆
Nandu's weird dreams
About death n ghosts
Just bcoz she ate chicken 😆😃

Amazing update

Thanks a lot for d pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
it cracked me up big time
i have never read anything this funny in IF before
you are just awesome
keep up the good work
and your humor is a big time advantage
lovved nandus theories they were so funny how can nandu be so naive want to see manik punished and the feel of romance you left was also awesome
in love with your gutter mind comedy

update soon
cant wait to read the next
update it more often
waiting for more comedy and romance
Edited by pnlove - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update
Hilarious update
Superb update
Fab update
Loved it
Loved the update
Update the next part soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
I dnt understand any thing. except the last convo
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Posted: 9 years ago
Aaawww Nandu is very innocent.
Manik and Cabir are hillarious.
Ghost rules and theory 😆
At the end cup cack fight oh my God.
Nandu won't spare them.
Next part soon plz.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hahaha That Was Hilarious Nandu's Rules & Theories About Ghost & The Way Manbir Scared The Shit Out Of Her 😆 Poor Soul Got Trapped & Scared Easily. Manbir Are Sooo... Cute!!!
Fighting For Cup Cake 😆 Looking Forward For More Funny Updates.
Keep It Up
Stay Blessed :)
Edited by M_R3 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: assuuu

I dnt understand any thing. except the last convo


lol you should read this again concentrate wahi rkho
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Posted: 9 years ago
Omg.. Seriously..

Theories can't even imagine..

Very funny.. Nandini poor girl..

Always get cheated by manbir..

Tanq for pm..

Pls continue soon..

Love
Suji :-)

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