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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: diyamanan

ok sorry for late

awsm update
like always
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: arshuaar

sorry for late comments...
thanx for PM
thank you for the wonderful upate...
Manan moments...awesome...
egarly waiting...



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surprise main agayi comment dalne mein ...hmmm the story is super duper hit...sachi mein ...the banner is very nice...firstly after reading the prolongue i was shocked dhruv bechara ko gay ban gaya then thought unique concept maza toh ane wali hain parne mein ...the character sketch was very nice...then comes to part-1A...yaar u portraited dhruv's character very well...hahaha dhruv ak lauta bhai 5 behen o ke bitch ...i love the make up wala part cocktail mein saif ali khan ki yaad agayi par ne ke bad...imagining dhruv putting make up so cute...harshid kamina ka kamina hi rahenga...isski dum kabhi sidha nahi hoga haha...dhruv is so innocent harshad ki chalupanti dikhai nahi diya...48% is a paas mark even ??? now its our manan's turn part-1 B...aww manik attention seeker type tha so cute...haw bully karta tha ladki o ka iska kya hoga kuch nahi ho sakta...then dialogue kya tha boy se shaddi kar lunga ?? i know ur mind hayyy kya kya shock dene wala hain age jake yeh ladka janab ne mujhe bataya tha par abhi nahi bataungi...manan ka first encounter was really nice...then their cute convo at the canteen so cute...then the tiffin sharing awww so cute...then nandu helping the old lady very nice...she is a gem...then comes my favourite chocolate sharing part awww i just loved it i know u are really attached with this part superb...aww chocolate sabko de di hmmm...propose kar di aur ha bhi bol dia...manik's departure was sad for manan ...emotional kar diya tune...the hug so cute...manik ke ankhein mein ansu !!!...nandu ko panic attack when manik was teasing her shakal dekhne layak thi...aww the kissy was so cute...then the 10 kiss wala part hahahah...the cab wala incident very nice...dhruv se manik aur parents ka milna bhi ho gaya...hmmm abhi jaldi next part plz ...main thaak gayee...ab khush hoja !!!! jaldi update...
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: kitkat5756

surprise main agayi comment dalne mein ...hmmm the story is super duper hit...sachi mein ...the banner is very nice...firstly after reading the prolongue i was shocked dhruv bechara ko gay ban gaya then thought unique concept maza toh ane wali hain parne mein ...the character sketch was very nice...then comes to part-1A...yaar u portraited dhruv's character very well...hahaha dhruv ak lauta bhai 5 behen o ke bitch ...i love the make up wala part cocktail mein saif ali khan ki yaad agayi par ne ke bad...imagining dhruv putting make up so cute...harshid kamina ka kamina hi rahenga...isski dum kabhi sidha nahi hoga haha...dhruv is so innocent harshad ki chalupanti dikhai nahi diya...48% is a paas mark even ??? now its our manan's turn part-1 B...aww manik attention seeker type tha so cute...haw bully karta tha ladki o ka iska kya hoga kuch nahi ho sakta...then dialogue kya tha boy se shaddi kar lunga ?? i know ur mind hayyy kya kya shock dene wala hain age jake yeh ladka janab ne mujhe bataya tha par abhi nahi bataungi...manan ka first encounter was really nice...then their cute convo at the canteen so cute...then the tiffin sharing awww so cute...then nandu helping the old lady very nice...she is a gem...then comes my favourite chocolate sharing part awww i just loved it i know u are really attached with this part superb...aww chocolate sabko de di hmmm...propose kar di aur ha bhi bol dia...manik's departure was sad for manan ...emotional kar diya tune...the hug so cute...manik ke ankhein mein ansu !!!...nandu ko panic attack when manik was teasing her shakal dekhne layak thi...aww the kissy was so cute...then the 10 kiss wala part hahahah...the cab wala incident very nice...dhruv se manik aur parents ka milna bhi ho gaya...hmmm abhi jaldi next part plz ...main thaak gayee...ab khush hoja !!!! jaldi update...



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Posted: 9 years ago




here is next part as i promise

i said na i will daily give u update for this

so here is the update

now do like and comment plz


Part 3


After registration in hostel office everyone is going to their respective rooms


Manik and druv also goes to in search of their respective rooms from different sides, manik took the long way from which he take minimum 15 min to reach to his room. Druv take the way which only take only 5 min to reach to his room


In hostel all type rooms are present single sitter double sitter, triple sitter.


Who come early book rooms respective their choice


Actually all the persons in 1st year is new so they chose to live alone in single sitter because they don't want to live with unknown person.


So all the single sitter and double sitter are already booked


After some time druv return to hostel office and informed that his room is locked. The hostel officer said that your roommate must be here anywhere, he will come any time till u can wait in waiting room.


Sometime later manik also come back with the same issue and got same answer to wait for some time in waiting room.


Druv and his mama ji already waiting their after some time manik and his family also come there for wait.


They manik saw druv and pass him a smile.


Druv also pass him a smile and both didn't talk with each other and sit with their parents.


After some time manik's mom notice druv and said


M.M.: arre druv beta u also waiting for your roommate ?


Druv: yes aunty, actually my roommate has gone to play cricket and he will come in anytime.


M.M.: actually maniks roommate also outside so we also waiting for him.


Suddenly a peon come and said


Peon: manik malhotra and druv vedant come to the office sir is waiting for both of u?


Then both go to office


In office


Sir: actually I want to apology from both of u that I have to canceled your double sitter room registration and transfer to triple sitter room because I already said na only 2 room are vacant in double sitter, actually 2 students already booked both double sitter room online before u book here so I have to give them priority u have to stay in triple otherwise u can take a room on rent outside.


After some time both manik and druv said together


Manik and Druv: we take triple sitter.


Both looks towards each other and passed a smile


Sir: then okay I will allot the triple sitter room both of u.


Sir: if u both doesn't have any problem then I will allot both of u rooms and when your roommate will come I will introduce with u


Manik & Druv: we don't have any problem sir.


Sir: so rooms is 130 in A block for manik malhotra and 98 on 2rd Flore in B block. It is okay with u.


Manik and druv looks towards each and said


Manik and druv: sir I leave with DRUV MANIK


Sir looks towards them and said


Sir: wow that's great here students in 2nd year chose roommate by their choice but I guess u both know each already


Both m and d: yes sir we know each other.


Manik looks towards druv and winks at him, druv feel shy and looks down and smiles


Manik notice druv but didn't said anything and put his hand on his solder and said


Manik- yes makes us both roommate and when our 3rd roommate comes let us introduce.


Sir: then it's okay I will give u both room 130 on 3rd Flore in A block and when your 3rd roommate come I will meet him u guys


Unknown boys from behind: I am their 3rd roommate sir


Sir: ohh yes how can I forgot u already said me that give u triple sitter room.


Then sir turns towards manik and druv and said


Sir: so manik and druv meet your 3rd roommate Mr.


That boy cut him b/w and said


Boy: Cabir, my name is CABIR DHAWAN and forwards his hand for hand shake.


Manik: I am manik malhotra do handshake with him and turns towards druv and said


Manik: and he is Druv, Druv Vedant My First Friend of Collage.


Druv look towards manik and pass him a smile and turns towards cabir and said


Druv: hello cabir I am druv vedant. And so hand shake


Cabir: nice to meet u Mr. Malhotra and Mr. Vedant.


Manik: same with u Mr. Dhawan.


And druv didn't said only pass cabir a smile in return.


Sir: okay so u all three meet each other then I will allot all of three u a single triple sitter room.


M D C: yes sir


Sir: okay then room is 130 on 3rd Flore in A block and here is the key of your room


They took their room's key and come out.


Their parents are waiting for them


Manik: mom we got triple sitter room because double and single room already full and my roommates are druv and cabir and introduces them to his parents


And druv also introduce to his mama


They all happy that druv and manik is roommate


They they all precede towards triple sitter room a guard come and stop them


Guard: mum u can't go inside boy's hostel to maniks mom.


MM - its okay I am waiting here you go and settle in your room your papa will come with u.


Manik- I am not kid mom, I will arrange my room, u guys already late u have to go back home na, so u should leave we roommate arrange our room easily and looks towards druv and hold his hand in friendly manner.


Cabir also said same yes aunty we will arrange our room and hold druvs 2nd hand and said


Cabir- kyu druv?


Druv: yes aunty u don't worry I know how to arrange a room.


MM: then its okay we will leave


Then they give them blessing and took maniks promise to come next month home they leave for home.


After that manik, druv and cabir with druvs mama ji went to their room.


They open the gate and saw that room is very dirty.


Druv when saw this much dirty he took broom and start cleaning the room


Manik and cabir saw that druvs mamaji is looking towards them so they also start work


Manik didn't know how to wipe the dust and all he put his luggage in a side and start wipe the room with his hand only.


Cabir also start wipe the dust with the help of wiper.


Druves mamaji looks them working together he smiles and said


U clean I come in some time


Actually mamaji notice that room is very dirty so he went office and ask for sweeper to clean the room.


Sir said u go I will send sweeper.


Mamaji- okay and he goes back.


In room


When mamaji went outside


Cabir put his wiper in a corner and lay down on dirty bad


Manik still wiper chair dust with his hand and the dust is not removing from it, and all his cloths get dirty by this action


Druv notice cabir and manik


He looks manik struggling with a chair he knows that manik don't know ABCD of how to clean room and chair and all he start to laugh to see manik


Manik looks towards him and said in anger


Manik- y r u laughing, ek to I am helping and u r making fun of me, I never do such things in my home


Druv controls his smile and said


Druv: I know manik that u don't know how to clean and u guys are doing cleaning to show my mamaji its okay u don't have to


Mu mamaji also know that u don't know anything so he went to call sweeper so u don't worry and again smiles on him


Cabir keep his eyes close and hears their conversation and didn't said anything only smiles


Manik also smile after druv and sit on that dirty chair


And said


Manik- okay if your mama ji went to call sweeper then y r u cleaning?


Druv: because I like to keep my thing and place clean, and I like to do these things so


Manik didn't said in return and smiles on his innocence


Suddenly they hears some sound outside the room


They all goes towards outside


Outside the room in the corridor


A group of boys are forming and they are shouting


Suddenly M D C saw that druvs mama ji is coming from opposite sirection of that group with a sweeper


Manik looks towards druv and druvs also looks manik and cabir said


Cabir- look manik druv is right , his mamaji is coming with sweeper.


And looks towards them


Then they notice that that boys group is going towards mamajis side


Suddenly they stopped mamaji


M D C saw it and goes towards them to see what the matter is


When they three reach near that group which stops mamaji


They hear that one boys is saying to mamaji that.


Boy: oye where r u going? U didn't saw us? U didn't even with us? And what is this u r wearing? In 1st year only formals are allowed, so u didn't follow our rules so u have to complete our task


U have to open your shirt and pant and do 5 rounds of this corridor so u will never forgot who is senior and who is junior and how to respect our seniors


Mamaji didn't said anything and looks backside where MDC are standing


MDC also got shocked,


Druv got afraid very much


Manik and cabir got very angry after hear such thing and manik and cabir goes forward and manik said


Manik- how u expect respect from us when u don't have manners how to behave with parents of other students and holds that boys collar and punch him hard on his face.


Boom


And that boy fall on the ground


Note - Actually in engineering collage they boys are doing ranging and when they saw mamaji they thought to bully him

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Next part 4: SUSPENSE

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Posted: 9 years ago


thanku ji😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
manik ,dhruv,cabir room mates too good
they r cleaning room ...manik with hand ...haha
nice update
ty for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
Thanks for the pm
Nice update
So manik dhruv and cabir as room mates wow!!
That means journey of new friendship has began!!
It was a nice update
Manik and dhruv's little si bonding was nice!!
Manik and cabir don't know even the abcd of cleaning that was nice! !
And last the seniors they were ragging dhruv's mama!!
Let's see what more is to go
Nice update
Waiting for next
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Posted: 9 years ago
Superb waiting for nxt part
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hahaha ab Cabir b add hogaya..Cabot is gay?

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