|FF-Whom Destiny Chose?|updated Part3 (MCD Roomie) Pg19|25/11 - Page 15

Originally posted by: heemasomani

Superb update

Originally posted by: sri_valli

full tooo boys wala update...need some colours in next update😉😉😉...beyween nice chappy...waiting for 4th chapter

Originally posted by: Snehasn

Hello Mr. Friend...
Sholly sholly sholly for the super duper late comment... I won't tell the reason here as you knew it already... Shoo... Maafi milenge kya??
I na just loved this concept...and by seeing that banner i think Manruv is really going to have lot of screen space compared to Manan...
Well just liked your edit...
Hmmm...coming to the update... This topi waale family toh bohut bare hai yaar for this generation... Means 5 sisters... God...ye ho kya rahe hai...well i think there is some loophole for his choices... I mean He's just attracted towards those girlie stuffs... Coz communication is most important to know the second thing too...but he's babysitting by his elder sis and het friends... He never got the opportunity or tried to have convos with others so he created those walls in him its just like living in shells... Let's see what's your take on this... Coz i think more like this...
Wow Manan's first meet was too good...seedhe floor pe hello hai...it's so cute... He's giving chocolates to all kya baat hai... Kuch meetha ho jaaye types.. Hmm...nandu's cute... Mamma's girl...stranger's se chocolate ya koi food items lena is not good wow...aahhh...he's too adamant to give her chocolates... Hmm...lunch sharing was good...then he finally succeeded in giving that chocolate to her...hmmm...that old lady thing was really heart wrenching... Like floor pe phenke huye food khaana its really unimaginable... But you spread the awareness hope aapke reader's yaani ham log future mein kisi ke saath aise naa kare... Nandu really a golden hearted girl...She take and gave some eateries to that old lady... And gave her chocolate also...wow...i liked the step her parents taken... Oldage home is better than roadside... Wow manik's so touched by her concern he kept chocolates in her bag when she went for play period...Its so sweet... Then she also did the same with him...awww...then again game continued for some more days... So cute... Poor nandu she have to distribute all her chocolate... Holy crap yaar... I felt really bad for this... Huhh...uss princi ko kya kitne bhi chocolates ho ya chips ho bag mein unke toh books se MATLAB rakhne chaayiye teh right...
Wow manik gave her big chocolate this is impressive...

Oyee hoyee Golu n all...kya baat hai...good going golu's lover boy 😉

Then Manan's budding relationship was nice..
Ohh...he have to go for SPACE... gosh yaar this separation will change every damn thing...
I'm feeling like crying now only for nandu... Jahaan tak story hamaare samaj mein aaye hai i think you're trying to portray manik as Bi...what will nandu's condition after knowing all this...pls don't break her hopes...
That one kiss and ten kisses exchanging were shoo cute... Aww Mr. Malhotra is too wicked... Hehehe par sweet lover too.,
Finally he reached SPACE... wow nyonika as good mamma... Its nice...
Topi waale too reached SPACE... mama jii is very humble person... He came to drop him..
Goshh!! Mr. Malhotra don't have the strength to help himself with those baga...phir dole shole kis kaam ke...how sweet... Topi waale ne help offer kiye... Hmm...aashirvaad lena and all..haayoo rabba this is indigestible fact agar ye tv mein dikhaaye toh...well mannered guy and over shy types... Let's see where it leads
Wow cabir's entry...such a cool guy...cricketer.. Hmm...navya ko fan girl banaake entry karaane ka iraadha hai kya??...
Well first day Manbiruv bond shown very well...
Wow their room settling way was so cute... Koi haath se dusting karna...wow how adorable... Then lazy head cabir... Over talented topi waale you've shown really well
Holy shit!! This jerkshad na...urghhh...i just wanna beat the hell out of him... Is he blind or what?? Apne se badon se baat karne ke lijaaz tak pata nahi... Huhh..moron...mama jii se badtameezi karne lage... I so hate all this yaar.. If i would've in their place na toh saare bones tor k rakh dete... Huhh...
Anyways update was awesome...
Continue soon...thanx for the pm...
Take care stay blessed...

PS- pls don't be mad at me if i didn't replied or quoted any of your msgs or updates... I'll reply for everything after going through it..
Ab toh I've whole one and a half months holiday from company so I'm checking each PMs and updates of everyone's and quoting it... So thore time chaayiye... That's it... Thanks for understanding Mr. Friend... Keep spreading happiness

Originally posted by: vickysinghalwal

<font color="#0066FF"><font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">hello miss friend

so come back
wow i am happy that u come with your holidays
now u have only on work
sit and read my work and give me good good response😉
i read ur comment
wow its very big
i must say u make it awesome miss friend

u write my all parts in a single wow just amazing
u r really talented 😆

so u like my story
before i am mad at u but now i am happy after getting so much big response

u know how to make smile and happy

chal now i am happy so i will think about to forgive u
hahahahaha
yeah now i am not mad at u
so don't be sad miss friend
keep smiling okay

now i have replyed ur
comment

now complete your promise
i am waiting 😃😃😃

vicky</font></font>

Originally posted by: Snehasn

well you're multi talented... Msg bhi kar rahe ho...aur quote bhi... Wow... Quite impressed... So janaab hamse cutty nahi hai...
Wait for more replies... I'm reading other writer's work...ab aapki baari aane mein bohut time hai... Hahaha...Mr. Friend intezaar ka phal lambaaa hote hai... Hehehe... Sana's theory you know