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Posted: 9 years ago
U were right I liked it a lot Interesting concept Sure that Nandini , the sacrifice queen banegi .. Would love to read Manik kese pahchanega Updt soon Thnkq so much for the PM n do PM me
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Posted: 9 years ago
hey I really liked the story
its different
mukti as negative that's interesting
eagerly waiting to know why nandini lied to manik about her identity
eagerly waiting to see manan
thanks for the pm 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
Its really nce.. I hope its not a dark ff lyk d othr one.
U lready hav 2 dark sad ff.. Not ds one yaar. Pls . Its a request
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Posted: 9 years ago
I loved it . Very emotional story i like it very much. Plz pm me.
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KHAMOSHIYAAN

Part : 2
EK UMEED MILENE KI

"congrats sir.. u were to good.."organiser said as After completing the song manik comes at backstage

"Thank.. u.. "manik said n give a smile

"Bro.. u rocked.. "cabir his brother said taking him for a side hug

"As always.. "manik said with his attitude

"Manik.. dekh alai tujhse kitni.. naraj hai.. teri first live performance tk dekhne nhi.. ae.. "cabir as now they going toward their car n 2 3 bodyguards following them

" bhai.. bachle.. teri.. toh voh hr bt sunti hai.. i can't handle.. her.. "manik said showing as if he is afraid from her

" ab glti kari . hai.. toh.. saza.. toh milengi.. i can't help in this matter sorry.."he said holding his ear

"Saale.. jb teri bari aegi.. toh main.. bata hn.."he said holding his neck from back n they both laugh

"Sir.. aaj.. apki.. first live performance howz.. u feeling.."one reporter said as soon as they come outside the crowd of his fans n reporters r waiting for him n the bodyguards controlling the crowd

"Great... "manik said gently.. giving a warm smile to his fans who were hooting his name

"So.. yha.. sb jana.. chate.. hai.. voh kon special hai jiske liye.. apne.. yeh.. gana.. gya.. as u said in previous interview that this song is for yr someone special.."the another reporter asked n the reply he give make all them baffled

"Yeah.. she is special for me.. my childhood friend.. i sing today for her.. "manik said making all of them shocked as he for the first time gave answer of this question

"Childhood friend wht's the name of dat lucky girl.. "reporter start asking question from him but after that he ignoring everyone walks away n his body gurd control the reporter n crowd

"Sir.. rukiye.. one last question"all this voice r coming but after that driver open the car door n manik wearing his aviator set in car with cabir

Murty Mansion , Delhi

Nandini is standing in her room in front of tv

Nandini P.O.V.

Oh i just can't believe today manik.. said in front of whole world about me.. that the song he sing only for me so that means he also wanted to meet me.. main dhrti.. thi.. khi.. main ushai.. yd bhi.. hogi.. but i was totally wrong.. i have to meet him khi dhr na ho jae.. manik.. yr.. nandini is coming.. vaise toh u promised me.. in childhood that u will come one day but tumhai.. toh mere bare.. kuch pta.. hi nhi.. hai.. vrna.. main.. janti.. hn.. tum apna.. promise jarur pura.. krte.. i have to meet him khi.. ise phle.. kuch glt na.. ho jae..

Mumbai

Manik P.O.V.

"Oh.. this media ek bt ka anwer de do shr pr hi chah jati hai.. thank god.. i saved today.. "i think in mind after sitting in car

"Really.. manik.. tune.. yeh.. answer tu janta.. hai.. na.. yeh media.. wale.. wht they now.. start talking about.. it.."cabir.. said worriedly as he was so much care about me..

"As if i care.."i said as i m not care about wht people talk about me..

"Cabir.. tu.. janta.. hai.. na.. yeh.. answer .. maine.. ushai.. yeh msg.. convey krne.. ke diya.. hai.. that i m waiting for her.. "i said as he is really looking worried for me..

"Sach.. main.. manik.. u r really.. crazy for her.. i hope same for her also.. "cabir said yeah.. i m crazy for her voh thi hi aisi..

"Acha.. manik.. agr.. voh moti.. ho gye.. ho.. aur... uske.. dat bhr.. ho.. "cabir.. said showing his teeth out . Oh god he again comes in his funny attitude

"Cabir.. just.. stop.. i know.. i don't care.. voh moti.. ho yeh kali.. ho yeh wht else as uska.. heart.. toh abhi.. same.. hoga.. uski.. bate.. uski.. eyes.. uski muskan uski hasi.. uski.. gussa.. uski.. cutness " i was again lost in her than i realizes that cabir is staring at me.. as jb bhi main uski bt krta.. ho meri yeh.. jubaan.. band hi nhi.. hoti..

"Manik.. tu.. ruk.. kyo.. gya.. continue.. as i m free.. today.. "cabir said n i playfully start puching on his tummy

"Acha.. acha. Sorry... ab bache.. ki jaan.. lega.. kya.. vaise.. ek bat bolu.. sach.. main.. bacpan.. se dekh rha.. tujhe.. u never look at other girl yaad.. hai.. tujhe.. main.. kitna.. khta.. dat u should date.. someone.. but u always.. refuses seriously manik.. main chta.. voh tujhe jldi.. mil jae.. "he said i rember in collage i always ingore girls but cabir always.. pushes me with one or another girl thank god.. he understand that i didn't need anyone as mere dil main toh ab tk vohe.. basi.. hai..

"U know.. na.. Till today I love her the same ... not because I didn't find anyone else ... but because I don't have time left after loving her "i said n take out my voilet n see her cutie.. pic.. don't know how.. now.. she looks likes

Than i look outside the window n i notice smally smally children are playing in garden so i goes back to my childhood

Flashback

"Manik..u r so.. bad.. main.. tumhre.. sth kabhi.. nhi.. khe lungi.. "nandini said cryingly holding ludoo game which is broken

"I m sorry.. nandu.. voh.. maine. Gusse main.. "manik about said sometime more but she cutted his word n said "manik.. tum humshai.. aise.. krte.. ho.. jb tum hr rhai.. hote.. u never complete the game u. always stop the game by doing this way or some another.. way"she said n in b/w he snatches that ludoo game from her hand n try to Fixed it

"Dekh.. tu janti.. hai.. na..main.. kitna.. badha.. fool hn.. bs roh.. mt.. tune.. meri.. jinte.. chocolate leni.. hai.. lele.."he said cutely as he can't able see her crying

"Sorry.. apne.. ish chote.. se rockstar ko maaf nhi karegi.."he said but she shows her full attitude n wrapping her hand on her make angry pout

"Acha.. ab dekh main.. toh yeh.. jodh.. bhi.. di.. " he said showing the ludoo

"Really.. tum jodh bhi.. di.."she said hugging him

"Haan.. lekin.. meri.. chocolates dena.. mt bholna.. "she said showing her finger toward him

"Deni.. padhegi.. kya.. voh toh main mazak kr rhai tha "he said n she shouted "manik.."n start slapping him allover his body.. n he tried to stop her

Than she fallen on him n now also she is slapping him "bsh.. meri.. jgli.. belli.. agr.. mere.. dimagh ghum gya.. na.. toh.."he souts siding her away

"Toh.. i will ran.. from here... "he said opeing her hair ran inside the house

"Manik.. u r monster.. "she shout getting up

"I know.. "he said after turing n looking toward her

Flashback ends

Manik P.O.V.

I was fully lost in her memory voh din bhi.. kitne.. achai.. thai. Jb tum mere sth thi.. i like to tease.. u.. becoz.. jab tum mujhe.. monster manik bolti.. thi.. i loved dat.. really.. i m dying listen that words again from yr.. mouth

My thought of terrance is broken by cabir voice as he is asking me to come out as we reached at our home

Me my bro n my sister alai lived here as my mom dad lived in london they time to time to come here to meet all of us

"Manik.. u ready.. na.. as alai.. tujhse bhut naraj hai.. "cabir said than i remembered wht big mistake i have done as yesterday was her birthday n for the 1st time i was not there wid her as i remain busy in my vedio song shooting . I send yesterday dozen of gifts for her but cabir said she didn't accept any one of it she throws all of them

P.O.V. ENDS

Manik n cabir as soon as they entered in the house they both were shocked by alai's sudden act

"Bhai.. i missed yr.. 1st live performance.. i m sorry.. "alai said hugging manik

"Oh.. my baby.. u don't need to be.. i know.. why u misses it becoz u r angry with me.."manik said holding her face after breaking the hug

"No.. voh. Actually.. i..i.."she about said something but she hesitated n both start laughing on their cute little sis

"Bhai.. aap.. bhi.."she said to manik angrily

"I m sorry.. say na.. wht actually.."manik said she blushes n ran inside

Than manik n cabir both laugh looking at eachother as they know where she was actually busy that with Druv manik's n cabir's friend . They were dating eachother from 2 month.

Next day

Murty Mansion , Delhi

Nandini P.O.V.

"Nandini.. tumhai.. aaj.. itna.. kush hum phli br dekh rhai.. aisa kya.. hai..mumbai.."navya Asked suddenly as i was packing my bag yes.. yes.. in 2 days i leaving for mumbai.. all think dat i m going only for our new project.. wid Mahlortra company but truth is dat the main reason of my going there is to meet him.. as now i confirmed he waiting for me yeah.. navya.. is true i feeling so much happy after so many years or should i day after ages

"Nandini.. ho kya.. gya.. tujhe.. constantly smiling n all.. lgta.. tum main voh ho gya. Jo sbko.. hota.. hai.. "navya said n i looked look down as my chori pakdhi gye..

"Navya.. aisa.. kuch.. mujhe.. kise pyaar Nhi.. hua.."i said but i realized by saying i do a big mistake

"Humhne.. pyaar.. ki kb bt ki.. omg.. iska.. mtlb.. nandini.. u really in love o.. can't believe..it.. i m fainting..."she said resting her head on my shoulder pretending she faints oh god nandini yeh tune... kya.. bol diya.. ab kuch bol is phle.. yeh.. uska.. bio data.. na...puche..

"Naan..krta.. kya.. hai.. voh.. jishe.. tumhne.. pasand kiya.. i mean kuch toh bt hogi..."she asked oh jo socha.. vohe.. hua..

"Navya.. bsh.. sun.. toh.. lo ek bari.. aisa... kuch nhi.. hai.. it' just like dat.. i m going mumbai after so many years.. so bsh.. i m happy.."i said confidently but navya is navya.. she can't leave me so easily now

"Wao.. tum.. juth.. kitni.. safaee.. se bol leti.. ho na.. but mere.. samne nhi.. ab bati ho. Yeah.. hum aunty.. ko bulae.."navya warn me.. as she know.. mom ke bt pta.. chli.. toh.. mom.. toh aaj hi mumbai jakr mere rishta.. pka.. kr degi..

"Sh... i m telling.. "i shushed her but maine.. kabhi.. nhi.. socha.. yeh.. bt main navya.. se aise share karungi..

"Voh.. actually.. navya.. abhi.. we can't call it as love.. kyoki.. main nhi.. janti.. ki... voh kya.. chta.. hai.. first.. i want to meet him..."i said n navya.. freeked out "wht.. tu ushai.. ab tk mili.. bhi.. nhi.. "

"Navya.. relax.. meri puri.. bt toh sunlo.. he is my childhood friend.. n main.. ushai.. 10 sal se nhi.. mili.. lekin.. in 10 sala.. main.. 1min. Bhi.. usko..miss kare.. bina.. nhi.. gujra.. "i said n she looked at me.. shockingly

"Nandini.. i can't believe ki main.. yeh.. bate.. tumhare.. muh.. se sun rhi.. ho.. oh.. ab smjhe.. why u never notice any guy.. but.. ek bt btau.. abtk bethi.. kyo.. thi.. mili kyo.. nhi.. ushai.. kya.. voh.. bhi.. yhi.. chta.. tumhri.. bt hue.. ushai.."she asked oh again her non stop question started

"Navya... main.. tum main.. yeh.. tk ki sari.. duniyan.. ushai.. janti.. hai.. but.. he don't know.. me.. aur.. main.. drti.. thi.. ki khi.. voh mujhe.. pechane.. se inkar na.. kr de.. but today.. everything was cleared he also wants to meet me for once.. kash.. yeh.. bt voh.. phle.. bolta.. "i about to siad more she interrupted

"Ek.. min.. hum bhi.. jante.. hai.. aur.. puri.. duniyan.. janti.. hai.. koe.. famous personality yeah.. pm hai.. kya.. "she said in a funny way but she didn't this is true

"Haan.. he is.. " i said.. she cutted me.. "kon.. " she shouts with excitment now the time to tell the name.. to his one of his biggest fan pta.. nhi.. how will she react lekin btana.. toh padhega..

"Manik.. " i take his name.. n navya.. become numb.. for some movemet but i know.. abhi.. yeh.. tufan ane.. ke kamoshyie hai.. as mere umar.. navya.. ke question ka tufan.. ane.. wala.. hai.. again..

"Wht.. yeh.. nhi.. ho skta.. like seriously.. Manik.. Mahlortra.. oh.. god.. nandini.. kitne. Shock dogi.. humhai.. iska... mtlb.. the girl who he talk about tomorrow that is u.. only.. he sing song for u.. i m so.. happy.. for.. u.. nandini.. "she said jumping on me hug me tighlty

"Nandini.. i want from my heart that u get all yr. Happiness.. back.."she said now.. in a.. serious mode...

Than... till evening she kept on asking me.. about him.. i share.. many.. incidence of him not him our incident wid her.. we laugh aloud.. really.. lekin.. main...janti.. hn.. i given a biggest shock to her..

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"Nandini... "mukti.. said as she just come in my room i was arranging my bed

"Haan.. bolo.. na.. mukti.. "i said as for the first time he comes in my room

"Dekh.. u love.. me.. na.. "she asked me. But why she asking me.. today.. like dat before.. she never think me as her sister..

"Haan.. offcourse.. i love.. u.. "i said.. holding.. her hand.. may..i was dreaming.. kyoko.. kabhi.. mukti.. ne.. mujhe.. sidhe.. muh.. bt nhi.. ki..

"So.. prove it.. "she said coming in her angry attitude.. why.. she don't understand that i really love her..

"Wht.. "i asked her n wht she said it make me completely shocked..

"Give. Yr.. manik.. to me.. n prove that u loved me.."she said so normally as she is asking a chocolate from me..
But why.. she need him.. n how he come to know.. about me n manik

"Mukti.. yeh.. tum.. kya.. bol rhi.. ho.."i said in a disbelief

"Oh.. nandini.. stop acting i know.. everything.. so just said yes ya. No.."she shouts but not today.. maine.. aaj tk iski.. hr glti.. pr mom dad ke samne parda dala.. aur iki hr bt pr agree kiya.. chahai ishne.. bach se lekr aaj mujhe sunane ka ek bhi muka na chodha ho

"Never.. main.. janti.. main.. main.. tumhse kitna.. pyaar krti.. ab tumhai.. believe krna.. hai.. toh.. karo.. but.. now i will not listen.. u.." i said i know now wht is coming so i make myself stronger as now was habit of listening her

"Oh.. so nandini.. murthy.. ne aaj apna.. asli. Chyra.. dikha hi diya.. oops sorry.. nandini.. singhania.. ne.. aaj.. tk tumhne.. kara.. hi kya.. sirf Mujhe.. mere.. sb kuch.. china.. hai.. phle.. mom..dad.. tumhare.. ane.. se.. phle.. mom.. dad.. never scolded me.. but u came.. they start scolding me.. they gave u all love.. kya.. lgti.. ho tum unki.. only a friend's daughter but nhi.. mom dad ko tum unki.. islali.. beti.. se badh kr payari.. ho.. u snatch my everything my mom dad my friends n now my love.. " she shouts yes this truth i m not real sister of her but mom dad me mujhe.. kabhi.. yej sb mahsus nhi hone.. diya.. pr mukti.. always make me remind dat i was a burden on this family.. but he love manik.. but he is singer aisa.. love.. toh ushai.. lakho.. ladhki.. krti.. hai.. main.. ush love..ke liye.. apne.. childhood friend ko kho du never

"Mukti.. u can leave.. as i m not in a mood to listen u.. today.. " i said opening the door as i m controlling my cry

"Nhi.. tumhai.. suna..padhega.. u know.. tum kisi ki nhi ho skti.. thi.. tum kabhi.. kisi ko koshi.. nhi.. de akti.. as u killed yr.. parent.. " she said n now i can't control my emotion tear start rolling down from my eyes why.. people said that i killed my parent no.. i didn't do this

"Plz... just stop it.. plz.."i begged her she love to see me like this..

She goes n after dat i fell on ground n screams "i didn't killed my parents..."

P.O.V. ends

Mukti leaves the after yelling on her in anger n raj sanjeeta see her going out as they just entering in the house

"Nandini.."they both said in union worriedly as they know mukti.. always goes our like this from house after shouting on her n they hurriedly ran toward her room

"Nandini.. bacha.. stop crying.. "sanjeeta.. take her in her protective arm

"I didn't killed my parent.. na.. muma.."she said like a crying baby.. in b/w her crys

"No.. bacha.. tu Janti.. hai.. voh kuch bhi bolti.. hai.. "sanjeeta said to make her calm down n raj is standing beside them with sad face

Than for somtime nandini crys in sanjeeta arm n drifted in sleep like this n sanjeeta n raj look eachother worriedly as they can't see her like this.. they never think dat nandini. Ko iss ghr main lane ka bdh mukti will behave like this


So here is next part.. last introductory part.. n next will be manan meet hope from this part u will get answer why mukti hates nandini.. now guyz.. don't forgot to do comment voh bhi big wale.. n this is not a dark ss
Stay blessed
Love Mehak






Edited by Mehaklovely - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
u penned it out of world . u r really gd... nyc update
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Posted: 9 years ago
I'll seriously kill tht mukti...
Hw can she be soo heartless...
Nandu is soo much hurt...
Manik loves her soo much...
And ha prologue kab tak aayega..,
Luved it..
Thnx for pm...
Update soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Pari_mananholic

I'll seriously kill tht mukti...

Hw can she be soo heartless...
Nandu is soo much hurt...
Manik loves her soo much...
And ha prologue kab tak aayega..,
Luved it..
Thnx for pm...
Update soon...


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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update. Such an emotional one.conflict B/w nandini and mukthi was heart breaking. Navni's convo was fab.finally nandini shared her feeling with navya.👏thanks for pm.
Edited by archu_asok - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: archu_asok

Awesome update. Such an emotional one.conflict B/w nandini and mukthi was heart breaking. Navni's convo was fab.finally nandini shared her feeling with navya.👏thanks for pm.

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