KHAMOSHIYAAN-manan ss (precap pg:139 & link of thread 2 pg : 1) 22

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KHAMOSHIYAAN

Prologue

One girl is cooking in kitchen wearing a simple blue kurta with black jeans

"Oh... nandini.. i missed u.. so much.. "somebody hold her stomach from back

First the girl was shocked with sudden act she closes her eyes n tear roll down from her eyes n the man was only standing hugging her

"I m not.. nandini.. "she said after taking deep breath n than remove his hand from her stomach n the man got shocked with her reply

"Manik.. Mahlortra.. i m not nandini.. i m Mukti "she said camly but than he is looking at her shocking

"I can't believe.. that.. "he said in disbelief

"Oh..Manik.. u know.. i missed so much.."one girl came n hugs him form behind

"Hey.. wait.. who.. r u.."he said turing toward her

"Manik.. tum mujhe.. bhul gye.. "she said making sad face..

"I m yr.. chotu.. nandini.. "she said holding his hand

"Haan.. ab kha.. yaad.. hongi.. main tumhai.. ab tum bhut badhe.. singer jo bn gye.. ho.."she said but manik is looking so confused looking at her in disbelief

Manik P.O.V.

No no.. main glt nhi ho skta.. i can still feel her... now also my heart beat for her only
"Di aap manik.. ko andr le jae.. voh.. itni.. dhur se ae.. hai.."the calling herself mukti but i know she is my nandini.. but why she is doing this

"Cholo.. na.. manik.. mujhe.. tumhai.. bhut.. kuch.. bta..hai.. so chle.. "now the other girl.. said i don't know voh nandini hai yeh nhi.. but main sach jan kr rhaoga..

Than that girl take me to room by holding my hand

P.O.V. END

The calling herself nandini take her to room n than the other girl standing in kitchen ran toward her room n close the door n ly down on bed on her stomach n holding the pillow tightly start crying.. badly..

"I m sorry.. manik.. yr.. nandini.. so helpless.. to accept that she is yr.. nandini.. n she loves u.." she said while crying..

"Maine.. iss din ka bhut intzar kiya.. tha.. kabhi.. nhi.. socha.. tha.. that tumhai.. main yad bhi hogi.. but.. u feels me.. u recognize me.. i love... u.. so.. much.. but main.. tumhari.. nhi.. ho skti.."she screams than she get up n wipes her tear fastly.. n set her dress as somebody knocks the door

As soon as she open the door manik holding her mouth pinned her toward the wall n both look into eachother eyes deeply

Kya us gali mein, kabhi tera jaana hua
Jahan se zamane, ko gujre zamana hua
Mera samay toh, wahin pe hai thehra hua
Bataun tumhe kya, mere saath kya kya hua

Hm..
Khamoshiyan, ek raaz hai, seene mein dafan hai kahin
Khamoshiyan, jo paas hai, main tumse kahunga kabhi
Baat loonga main, saath mein tere
Milne toh aao zara

Khamoshiyan, teri meri khamoshiyan
Khamoshiyan, lipti hui khamoshiyan

The idea of story revolving in my since 2 month so i write it today here is chotu.. sa intro of my new ss it will not so long.. if u guyz.. comment than i will continue..

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Nandini_goyal thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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thanks for the pm :)
eager to read the story unfold..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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It looks interesting
Waiting fr s update
Do continue
Mukti Nd Nandini wats gng on
Hehehe
Update soon
Take care
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Posted: 9 years ago
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If this one is also dark then I am out this I won't be in n if it is not dark then I will be in n Awesome update hey may be my comments n like will be declared because I will behaving my exam so won't be able to read daily so excuse me for that n do not considered me as ur silent reader n do pm me as soon I will get time in my preparation leaves I will read the stories sorry
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Looks really interesting and amazing
Why Nandini is hiding her identity ... curious to know ...

Will surely read it ... plz continue

Thanks for the pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Interesting concept
But why nandini is hiding her identity from manik
Plz update the part soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thanks for pm.dear

Sound very interesting and very

Different concept.

I like it a lot.


Please continue.



Thanks.



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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey nice start.
I am sure Mukti has something to do about it, hope Manik find out the reason and Nandini stands for the right.
It reminds of a story I wrote on valentine's day, and I am sure looking forward for something spectacular.
All the best<3

Loads of luv<333
Kashish
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Posted: 9 years ago
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It seems interesting..
Y nandini is hiding her identity!?
Is this story related to alone movie??
Continue soon
Looking forward to read further parts...
Thnxx for the pm..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Interesting storyline...
Update soon. ..eagerly waiting
Bye tc. ...!!

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