#2 MaNan SS: ZAHENASEEB [On Hold] reason on pg 123 - Page 29

no yar..


me to interest loose Nhi kr rahi bilkul bhi.

I really love it very much..


plshh don't end it..


n promo to interesting h..

love it .

waiting for next update eagerly. .


update soon



Love Geet

No m very much excited to read new party
Update it soon

Nice promo

Interesting promo
Plz continue soon

di
koi interest loose nhi ho rha

pls don't end
i love ur ff
and the promo is amazing
upate soon

hey fatima...

Originally posted by: krazzy_parthian

hey fatima...

am really very sorry...

i used to bug u so much..bt ab commenting karne ke time am so late...so soory..

bt update was super duper amazing...i loved it...

haaye...morning was so beautiful...oh so...nandu mein manik ki aatma ghuss gayi...lovely...i loved their morning romance...aur acha ho gi bhi kyun ni..after all pro in ahmm ahmm..ne likhi hai...hehe...

hawww...yeh kya hua...achanak se...

manik got so tensed...so got nandini...lovely...

hawww...manik shouted on nandu...bt its a reflex action...one will behave like this only...bt i didnt liked it...naa...

oh finally..hosh a gayi...liked nyo and manik's bond...

and so as...viren and manik's...u have showed and written it beautifully...

aww...loved their family time...and acha hai...u didnt dragged hospital time...

so manik do realised his mistake...aww...lovey dovey...ahan...

the lil teasing session...and mother at rescue...hehe...

all in all...awesome update...i loved the way manik respects and love his parents...awesome..

aur promo...

ahmm...ahmm...on the way...waiting to read more...and the reason for his heart attack...

continue soon

LOVE

SANJANA

hey no need of ending it abruptly...

if u r saying ppl r loosing d interest den d reason could be not getting d updates on tym... but for me I'm not losing d interset...
keep writing...

waiting 4 update...

Originally posted by: Snehasn

Crispiiiee doll ye kya baat huye...
Abi toh i started reading this and you're giving dhamkee of ending this 😭
Too bad..if you do so I'll send you on a date with your electrician 😡 😡
Phir karo aap dono lights on and off games 😆 😆