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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: mananneetu
i really liked the prologue!!!
one girl is nandini bt nxt girl.i really dont know!! might be aliya or even soha!!
or mukti or navya!!
i really dont know..
plz continue soon nd plz pm me!!

Aww thank u
Just wait for nxt part everything will b clear

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Originally posted by: Pravallika69
Superb looking forward for the story... Update soon

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Luv u too
Will update soon 😊

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Originally posted by: manikmalhotra2
Awesome ...and interesting prologue
And I think the craziest fan of the Manik Malhotra is Nandini. ..

Looking forward to read d the story

Thanks for the pm

Just give me some tym
Will update soon 😉

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Originally posted by: sharon.babu

awesome update...

loved it so much...

can't wait to see what happens next...

keep up the good work and continue soon...

Thank u dear
Just some more tym
Will update soon

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Originally posted by: RomComFan
Cute strt...looking forward to what happens next...

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Updating tonight finally hope u'll lyk 😊

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Chapter 1

DREAM HOME

Dream home is d dream house of two besties who had build it up with so much love nd it took around a month for them to b satisfied as per their dream every corner has witnessed their love for each other caring getting mad at each other fighting laughter but standing with each other no matter what. Like another day today they were on fighting terms both were too stubborn nd adamant.

They had returned from a party thrown by them for their staff who had equal hands in cracking an imp deal which had led them to direct paris fashion saga to be held exactly three months from now. So they had thrown a party to appreciate nd for achieving big success.

Now presently home scene

Girl 1: I can't believe this man..!! This is shit..!! Ur talking about...i mean like seriously r u crazy or what...

Girl 2: Ohh hello...m not asking any such big thing...its just a matter of a month nd u r reacting as if m asking for your whole lyf tym...i mean u can't even do this for ur best friend..huh..!! I don't wanna talk to you come if u wanna come m going nd thats final... She snapped her tapping her foot she walked out of hall area after glaring her

Girl 1: Wth...what do you mean u'll go alone there u think i'll let u she said stopping her from entering her room nd turned her instantly making her face her

Girl 1 she firstly calmed herself only then they could solve it not by arguing shouting it won't solve it so acting mature she softly said listen aaru baby...u r not getting it...its not correct...nd what if they get to know about our identity then we'll be in big trouble try n understand baby nd we had fashion saga on our head we need to prepare for that too rather then going for any random film shoot that to as a crew member its not done at all...we can't afford to go that to for a month not possible dear...don't act lyk a stubborn kid act mature...

Interrupting in between

Aaru: listen firstly its not a random film shoot its d rockstar film THE MANIK MALHOTRA not any random guy so firstly talk with respect nd secondly we had lots of tym for fashion saga we can easily manage first off all we need to prepare designs for that we don't need to go fashion house daily we could easily manage nd in our favour its a beautiful place were shoot is taking place we'll get the feeling in hill station to sketch more beautiful design...plzzz say yes na Nandu plzzz...pretty plzzz she pleaded at last folding her both hands in extra sugary voice

Nandu: Madam we need to design dresses not a scenery that we need to go some hill station...nd now for god sake stop making that baby face

Aaru: Sweety plzz na just few days uh know na how big fan i m i wanna see him performing live it'll be so good na nd what if he look at me we can talk we can be friends or more than that ohhmyygodd Nandu think lyk that na she said nd twirled her around holding her hands

Nandu: Stop stop...she shouted as she twirled her fast

Aaru: plzz na Sweety plzz this is the last tym m asking anything from you she stopped nd then continued yaa its last m asking u atleast for this year i won't ask anything nd nandu's eyes widened listening her then shaking her head in disbelief giving her u won't change ever look

Aaru: so i'll take it as a yes nd she hugged her instantly saying thank u thank u so much uh know ur d bestest friend one could ever get i luv u i luv u so so mch nd breaking d hug she kissed her right cheek continuing ohmg i need to hurry we had a flight tmrw uh don't worry my friend has arranged everything no one will know our identity we'll b one of d crew members no one will recognise us...cmon now be aside uh had already wasted my lot of tym now i need to do my packing too...ohmg can't believe it m gonna see my rockstar from so close ohmg i need to look good...get aside Nandu what r uh doing i need to do so mch preparations she said in a go nd didn't gave a chance to speak

Outside Chandigarh Airport

Nandu: I can't believe i agreed to...hold on i didn't agreed u urself assumed it uh know what m gonna make uh pay for this m telling uh nd kch b gadbad hui m gonna tell i toh didn't even know who is this girl she said all in one with angry glares putting on her shades she stepped ahead of her

Aaru: I will give uh anything dear just name I'll give you a blank promise today sweety thanku for coming nd now plzz for god sake don't make these faces what if ROCKSTAR is here thats why we didn't came in economy class with other members but in business class coz he won't travel in there na but yr i searched him everywhere didn't found him she said while walking behind her nd eyes searching desperately for someone.

Nandu: Listen if u don't come here nd tell where we need go i'll take a return ticket n go back u carry on ur rockstar hunting she said making irritated face.

Aaru: Nandu baby why r uh so irritated yr we'll hire a cab to shimla nd then to place where shooting will b taken place she said with little happy nd little sad expressions happy that finally her dream will b infront of her sad coz her first chance was to meet him at airport only was all in drain

They reached shimla after a hectic drive of 6 hrs nd was tired coz of flight too

Nandini didn't spoke a word while Arunima was just blabbering all her dreams she had seen with him...how she'll dress up...how she'll be speaking every minor details she had planned

As per aaru's plan they have changed their names to Anu (Nandini) Ritu (Arunima) everything was planned by Aaru nd her friend fake identity card nd everything was done nd reached d given place

Aaru all the way was blabbering something or otherthing but for not even once she guided Nandu to be good to them coz she knew she didn't mean what she's saying its just taking out her frustration but she'll never do anything which will break her dream she could go to any extent for her happiness same goes to her.

Everything went as per their plan no one doubted them as not only they were present their but around 30 crew members

They swiftly made their way to their rooms which were nearby to eachother but no matter how mad they were on each other nothing could stop to share same roof same room...so adjusting all luggage in a room they changed nd relaxed as tmrw will b big day real exam new job.

PRECAP : First meet (par kiski first meet) 😉

Hello..!! I know it's very late buy was really busy these days as uh k know na yr its shaadi season 😆
I somehow wrote it as i got time
Nd a big thank you to all who commented d liked it
Plzz leave ur feedback tell me if u r lyking it 😃

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Sry guys for error as m updating with my phone nd that too in a hurry will edit it later

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Awesome ...amazing ... marvelous ... interesting

Aaru is the Fan of Manik Malhotra ... i think Nanidni ... but still its awesome ...Aaru is cute ..not listening anything ...her and Nandini's talk is cute ..sweet ..amazing

Really liking it

Thanks for the pm