Oh my god Mawara i just read the whole thing in a go and absolutely loved it! You made me cry you made me laugh you made me go all awww...this story was so touching! I was wishing ki na khatam ho but you are right...some things have to end! After all...all good things come to an end! But thanks for this lovely story!
I read the glimpse on the first page and i was like whoa this seems like a different story which im sure ill love! And then when the officee said tumhy ishq hai usse i think i got goosebumps! Seriously! And then when i read nandini ka intro...she saying that the last thing she remembered was being beaten and fainting...i was like okay let me keep my tissues ready im gonna cry :P and i sure used them! When i read the 'ting of hatred' part i got a little scared ki shuru mein its gonna be all fighting but thank god that didnt happen! And hota bhi kaise...Manik was just so sweet so calm so kind so gentle! I loved his approach towards her! But why didnt he talk? I didnt get it... He cant reveal his identity understood but why couldnt he talk otherwise? Her reaction was kinda understood...ya she shouldnt have insulted him i completely agree...in ten days she shouldv understood that he didnt want her for her body and was an honest man! But i guess all the poor girl has seen in past six months is men who abuse women so she was in that state of mind! His anger was completely justified but he also shouldnt have slapped her...she had already suffered so much! Readin that 'my story' in her diary i was almost to tears...and having read it himself he shouldv have understood her! But anyways...good all that happened otherwise how would they have come closer?
When he came back home with his shirt drenched in blood...i actually got scared! But thank god it wasnt a major injury and the bullet had just grazed the skin! But the poor girl had been in so much pain those five days!! I was so happy for her that he was back! Her tears on seeing him in pain showed her love even before she admitted it to herself! And he was smiling seeing her tears for him...having forgotten all his pain! I was like awww! But then the way she cried hugging him...the way she was complaining ki gaye kyun...i was like manik ab toh maan jaa! And woh maan gaya :P uske baad ki story toh had me smiling throughout! Except the part when she was discussing about harshad...i was like harshad kamina he hota hai chahe jahan bhi ho! But manik's care towards her...his loving approach healed her emotional scars and her loving care healed his physical ones! The way he was so stubborn ki shirt nahi laani...i was like could he be any cuter! But then he proved me wrong by calling her sugar pot :P that was so cheesy but sooo cute! And i was glad she found the right man who was gentle with her and loved her with all his heart! And i was also glad ki he found the girl with whom he fell in love at first sight...ACP Manik deserved it :P mehaan was the cutest! How he spilled the beans of Manik's surprise bday celebration... And how cutely he was trying to open the door! And the ending i was like awww...the way they were sleeping!!
In all n all i completely loved it!! It was so touching...i was completely involved emotionally in the story! I was so glad ki Nandini moved on from her dark past and found true love and that ACP Manik found his dream girl! The only thing that really hurt me was that nandu's family refused to accept her...that was really cruel! But all's well when end is well!
Thanks for this lovely story dear! It really touched my heart! And one request...please update your index! Add all your one shots n two shots...so that if one wishes to read then again theyre available in one place :P
I know i said i wouldnt be able to comment but my health has worsened again and im back on almost bed rest state...unable to study! So im here to comment...glad i could read this story! Thanks fir the PM!
Lots of love,
Arunima
Edited by abhutani0311 - 9 years ago
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