MaNan Two Shot:Heat Lightening..! Final ChapA,B/PG42/21st-11 - Page 38

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Posted: 9 years ago
Mawara this story is so beautiful...I really really really loved it so much
Ya I know I m late again...but please yar bas December tak maafi de do...uske baad mere exams over and I will get some time to live happily...sorry han 😭

Now about the story...yar first of all I m sorry but I couldn't control myself from laughing like hell...I mean seriously... A.C.P Manik Malhotra ????? Haha..awesome and then nurse Aliya and Officer Cabir...hehe...ha but Harshad I mean Jerkshad got his perfect role han...but yes our MaNan were best as usual.

The story is about a very sensitive topic and Mawara u r the best writer who did it in a best way...hats off dear 👏 👏 👏 ...it's not easy to describe a situation which u r not aware off..but may be that's why u r my most favorite writer..because u did ur job so beautifully.

It was actually an emotional piece...a very sensitive story..but MaNan was best in it...the slow progress of their love...their family...it was very beautiful.I loved the thing that u didn't left it in a half way and u completed their whole journey and made it a complete story.
Thanks for pm Mawara
Please come with another amazing hatke type story
Love u lotzzz 😉
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Posted: 9 years ago

awesome update...

loved it so much...

loved the ending...manan are the best...

mehaan was so adorable...happy that they got married...

glad that nandu decided to be honest with manik about her relationship with harshad...which was forced...

keep up the good work...

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Posted: 9 years ago
It's awesome ...among ...superb ...nice ...sweet ...and beautiful story
Nandini was so scared of loosing him ...and Manik got shot ...shukar hai zayada chot nahi Lagi ... and Nandini took such a good care of him ...and their everlasting care...romance ...Their teasing ...and nd Commissioner teasing MaNan was awesome ...

MEHAAN is such a cutie pie

All the things r penned down beautifully

Love it

Thanks a lot for the pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
I'm sorry I suck at long comments and moreover my words won't ever be eloquent enough to appreciate this amazing TS.
Loved it throughout. Suberp work. Way too goo! :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
Loved it
It was something else!!!
So pure!
Manan and Mehaan were so cute
Amazingly written
You convey emotions so well yaar
Brilliant
Thanks for pm!! <3
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome
Nice
Loved it
Continue soon with other story
Thanks for pm
Take care
:)
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Posted: 9 years ago
first of toh yaa we r fynn...
now update...
kya bolun??
kuchh chhoda h bolne ko??
mtlb itnaa achha likhogi to kese chlega?? 😉
seriouslyyy diss was soo amazing...
mazaa aa agya...
their love fr each other...haayeee
Mehaan...awww he iss soo cute...
n commissioner ne pol khol di...hehe...
uh r jst fab...

thnx fr sharing such wonderful story..
stay blessed
take care
thnx fr pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
Fantastic chapter dear... I really don't have words to express how i was feeling while reading it...so much of love...n that too so pure...how can someone love anyone this much in just first sight... Nandu's pain...u really described every bit of it so beautifully... N Mehaan he is so cute... Really ...my respect towards ur writing is just increasing every passing update u give... Byee...tc...
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Posted: 9 years ago
wow itna jaldi u gave final part
thanku for giving jaldi😃
wow this story is like a fantasy with perfect and strong story line
love happens even without knowing eachother...after 3days nandu realised that she love him
the way she cared for him when he got hurt it says all how much she love and respect him
and nandu's cute complaints of leaving her..aww😃
i loved it when ,manik asked to just stay by him...and she slept in his arms she trusted him completly
song sequence is nice
she gave herself to him...though it's very difficult after passing through that horrible phase
finally he asked her for marriage and she accepted..yeye👏👏
aww they had baby boy mehaan...door opening such a cute scene
and the end...they happily lived after...ahh!! it's a wonderful ff...please make a FF on this storyline
everything is magical..the way manik fell for her o the very first sight...and the efforts he took for protecting her and rescuing her...the way she felt for him when he left..the way she got used for his touch..wow and many more...thanku mawara for this short story
will be more than happy if u start a FF based on this
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Posted: 9 years ago
amazing chapter! finally manik is back. wow! nandini realized her love for manik. 😊😊

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