MaNan Two Shot:Heat Lightening..! Final ChapA,B/PG42/21st-11 - Page 41

Such a blissful journey of manan dii..loved it to core..mehan awesome name...the way u described each other's love...I'm in lov vth ur writing... kya lines dii.. so cute name honey sugar pot... loved it... 👏

its superb

Another masterpiece from you .. Loved the updates.. Nandini's fear of losing him, Nandini healing him after seeing him in pain, MaNan conversation .. So beautifully penned down .. Finally MaNan got married .. Loved the dinner part too and best part was MaNan's cutie pie son Mehaan.. Mindblowing update ..

amazing update

Awww beautiful update dear... U penned it so beautifully... Thr confession the way he saved her n the way she surrendered herself to him.. N the way he trusted her n the future thr marriage evrything was so blissful... Always love UR writing keep writing such sweet stories...

Thanks for PM
Love you
Pravallika aka PraNi

Awsme ending. Manik ko nandini se pehli nazar mai hi pyar ho gy. He is so swt nandini ne usne itna bhi rudely behave kiya par wo hamesha usse itna softly baat karta th. Uss jerkshad ki wajah se nandini ko itna suffer karna pada.
I love mehan naam he is gud . Manik ka beta bilkul ussi tarah. The best part jab mehan ne sara surprise bol diya th. Wo bilkul nandini ki tarah ha innocent and pure.
Love this TS.
Simran

I seriously never wanted to read the ending of this stoey 😔
Sacchi mein😔
Cuz I really loved the story
It touched the inner core of my heart
With the utmost effort u have put on truth to say I have no such words for the appreciation
Hatss of for the concept
U know what u have become a social worker 😉
cuz u have raised the topic on worldwide prevailing problem in the world
N for this I bow down


Sachi mein kaise karleti ho yrr tum
Mein toh ek dhang se essay vi likh nahi sakti aur tumne kitne stories likha gaii

Hehe Isse wajah se Mein duffer kehlati hoon aur tom writer 😛
Kassam se
Haaye !!!!! Mardala
Loved the concept
Keep writing the stuffs
Stay blessed
love u
N yeah continue soon


Ek aur baat
Shayad tum mujhe vool jao mein woh ghym sehlunga
Par
parr
Parr
Dheere dheere ko mat vulna
Warna !!!!!
Matarani tumhe maaf nahi karenge
Hehe mera matlab hain ki
Plzz dheere dheere vi update kardona
Wo vi 8 parts wala
Hehe 😳 😛

Hieee dear... just read this story it was awsm... u penned it so well... i read this story for two times till now so u can guess how much i love it... i must say it was ur best story ever👏... the way manik save her... the he take care of her... this show how much he love her... this called true love... after such a dark past he accept her like seriouslly hats off... love every bit of this story be it dasrk side or their first fight that slap or first kiss everything just mind blowing... their baby aawww he was too cute... sweet chotusa family wowww... it was very short but story in size but i think it was a great n biggest example of wat true love actually is... do write such stories in future... i would love to read them... uff still m not enough of this story... 👏... waiting for other stories too... keep writing... keep smilling... keep shining... ok... thanks for this beautifull story... bye...

jst read it ...awesum story...luv ur writing as usual...n ya luv manik n nandu as usual