os zindagi gulzar hai {chapter 1 -page 5} - Page 5

awesome update...

loved it so much...

nandu is so independant...

loving the characters so far...

can't wait to see what happens next...

keep up the good work and continue soon...

Interesting...

I AM AWSTRUCK... AND CONFUSED ALSO!!! THIS IS AN OS BUT THERE IS MANY CHAPTERS... HOW MANY CHAPTERS WILL BE THERE???? THANKS FOR THE UPDATE AND PM... LOVE YOU...

Nyc chapter

V nyc

Nandini ka intro acha lgaaa

Bt manik d hero ki entry kab hogi ?? :p

Continue soon... :)

interesting!!
i would love to read other parts too
update soon
can u plz pm me even if i dont send a buddy request/...actually na there is problem in my account/..cant.buddy people!!!
and plz continue ur other stories soon!!

Intresting storyline...

strong and independent Nandini...
interesting...
egarly waiting for the update...

Originally posted by: arshuaar

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">strong and independent Nandini...
interesting...
egarly waiting for the update...</font>

thanku.. :) just thinking abt next chap only

Originally posted by: riya_10101

Intresting storyline...

nice update...

cont soon😛...

thanku :)

Originally posted by: mananneetu

interesting!!
i would love to read other parts too
update soon
can u plz pm me even if i dont send a buddy request/...actually na there is problem in my account/..cant.buddy people!!!
and plz continue ur other stories soon!!

yup sure.. actually. just trying my hand nd luck on this os to lil brush my writing memory :P