#2 Tum Hi Ho - manan ff (imp. Note pg-136)thread 3 pg-1 - Page 7

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Posted: 9 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: Chocolava14

First off all congratualtions fr d new thread...u totally deserve it😊😊

Dis update was so good...finally adi understood everything😳
I lyk manan scene at last...cute one😉😳
Always keep writing😊


Thanx...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#62

Originally posted by: manikmalhotra2

First of all Congratulations for the new thread

and coming to the update ... its amazing ... awesome ... cute .. sweet sa update

Adi he is such a manhoos ... i want to kill him ... mujhay laga wakae mai Adi ko aakal aagae hai ... but when i read that he was faking ... i was like😲... aur phir aisi hogae thi😡

But i love MaNan scene

Thanks for the pm

than
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: manikmalhotra2

First of all Congratulations for the new thread

and coming to the update ... its amazing ... awesome ... cute .. sweet sa update

Adi he is such a manhoos ... i want to kill him ... mujhay laga wakae mai Adi ko aakal aagae hai ... but when i read that he was faking ... i was like😲... aur phir aisi hogae thi😡

But i love MaNan scene

Thanks for the pm

thanx
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Posted: 9 years ago
#64
Congo fo new thread!!
u really deserved it..!!

Umm sucha cute update!!..
amazing!!

M eagerly waitng fo ur update..
plz update soon..n big vala..plzz..;) ;)

God bless uh!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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sweet update plz continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: smily926

sweet update plz continue soon


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Posted: 9 years ago
#67

Tum Hi ho

Part : 76

Next mrng

Nandini is sleeping in manik arm n manik get up n kiss on her chicks n than half he sees her sleeping n than get up n streching her arm n say "gud mrng manik "

Manik " gud mrng "

Nandini holding his hand n say " manik i m sorry for yesterday"

Manik : sh...
U don't need to be sorry i understand

Nandini : no manik..
I m sorry

Manik : nandini listen
U know (holding her hand)
How's our relationship
I don't like distance of even a moment
Every day, I live for you
All my time is for you..
There shouldn't be a moment of mine without you,

Nandini : manik how u r so loving n understanding (having tear in her eyes )

Manik removing her tear say Because You're my life My peace and my pain
My everything


Nandini put her head on his chest n say "manik i love u so much n u know my love is increasing day by day "

Manik hold her n kiss on head n say " i love u too "

After sometime at breakfast table

Manik : i want to ask u sometime

Nandini : haan pucho na

Manik : kya tumhai sach main lgta hai ki a.

Nandini : adi..

Adi comes with bouquet

Nandini look toward manik

Nandini : adi tum yha kya kr rhai ho

Manik : no nandini
Why r u saying like this he is our guest

Nandini : manik...

Manik : ao betho na
(Taking the flower from his hand )

Adi : manik i m sorry
Main realize kr chuka hn ki jo bhi maine kiya voh glt tha

Manik : wao nandini
ushe yeh pta chla gya ki he is done a mistake

Nandini : adi tum jao yaha se

Manik : nandini tum ushai bhej kyo rhi ho
He is yr friend
Tumhara frnd mtlb mera friend

Nandini : manik..

Manik get up n shouts nandini tum smjho he is not a good
He is fooling u

Manik go up n nandini say manik..

NANDINI to adi : tum jao yha se

Adi : i understand

Nandini go after manik n adi goes

Manik standing at window face backward n nandini hold him from back n say "manik... why r u over reacting so much "

N manik put her hand down n say "nandini u r saying i m over reacting " manik hold nandini arm n say " nandini understand adi ek acha ladhka nhi hai "

Nandini : u r thinking wrong
I know him manik he was never like this

Manik : nandini k tumhai lgta hai ki voh shi hai na k
I don't have any problem
Stay away from him

Nandini : okay
Now smile
Mere liye
for our baby

Manik smiles n nandini too
N manik take nandini his arm
N manik start singing song

(Teri saanson ki saans mein
Jo hoon toh main hoon
Tere khwabon ki aanch mein
Jo hoon toh main hoon)

They reaches mall n nandini putting cloth on manik in front of mirror n manik holding her face sing

(Tere hone se hi mera hona hai
Tujhko khona jaise khudko khona
Tu jo hai toh main hoon
Yun jo hai toh main hoon
Tu jo hai toh main hoon
Yun jo hai toh main hoon)

They both reaches to resturant n manik give nandini a fake flower

Nandini : manik yeh toh plastic flower hai

Manik : I will love you until the this flower dies

Nandini smiles n kiss on her hand

N manik hold nandini n make her get n sing

(Bin tere mera kya hai
Jisko sunu jisko kahun
Bin tere mujh mein kya hai
Jisko jiyun jis mein rahun
Tujh mein hi duniya meri hai
Tere ik pal mein sadiyan meri
Bin tere main sehra saa hoon
Bin tere main qatra bhi nahi)

Manik feeding nandini n singing song

(Tere hone se hi mera hona hai
Tujhko khona jaise khudko khona
Tu jo hain toh main hoon
Yun jo hai toh main hoon
Tu jo hain toh main hoon
Yun jo hai toh main hoon)

Manik tie ribbon on nandini eyes n nandini start finding manik n manik singing song

(Tu mere chehre pe hai
raahat saa jo thehra huaa
Main bhi tere haathon mein
kismat sa hoon, bikhra hua
Tu meri rooh saa hai
Tujhko chhu ke main zinda lagun
Jab bhi main mujhko dekhun
Mujh mein bhi main tujh sa lagun)

N nandini finds manik n remove the ribbon n start jumping n manik controling her n singing

(Tere hone se hi mera hona hai
Tujhko khona jaise khudko khona
Tu jo hai toh main hoon
Yun jo hai toh main hoon
Tu jo hai toh main hoon
Yun jo hai tohbmain hoon)

5 6 days passes in mornging they are lying on bed in eachother arm n both looking into each other eyes n nandini smiling

Manik : Can I say something?

Nandini : Sure

Manik: You have the prettiest smile I've ever seen

Nandini : now Can I something as well?

Manik: Yeah...

Nandini : This smile only exists because Of u

Manik kiss on nandini forehead n nandini hold manik tightly n they ly like this for sometime




Part : 77

At breakfast table

Nandini is while eating food lost in thought n smiling continously n manik notice her n ask her "wao nandini today u r looking so happy wht's on yr mind hmm..."

Nandini : You're on my mind now and always n manik..
Every time I think about you, I smile

Manik smiles n say "nandini do u know that maine ab tk ka sabse right decision kya liya hai"

Nandini : hmmm... say na

Manik (holds her hand ) : The best decision I made is to choosing you (kiss on her hand)

Nandini : same for my side also i love u (hugging him)

Manik holding her n say i love so much my doll
U r mine n i m yrs forever

Manik break the hug n kiss on nandini chicks

Nandini : I love you more and more with each and every passing day

Manik smiling n about say something but nandini phone rangs

Nandini pick the phn

Nandini : hello mukti

Mukti : hello
Wht's up kya chl rha hai

Nandini : just doing breakfast

Mukti : acha nandini i m saying ki hum itne dino se masti nhi ki
Nandini : masti..

Mukti : haan masti u n manik come at my house na

Nandini : yeah sure

Mukti : okay than bye i have to call everybody

Nandini : bye...


Manik : wht's mukti saying

Nandini : she called us at her house

Manik says "when "Nandini says "now"

Manik : nandini
Today i m having very imp. Meeting so u go
I will join them later

Nandini : okay

After sometime nandini reaches to mukti house
N nandini ask servant about mukti n he says to her that she will be just coming

Nandini rested on couch n everbody reaches n they meet eachother but mukti didn't come yet

Cabir : are mukti ne humhai yha bulaya aur vohe gayab hai

Nandini : koe km hoga ajaegi

Cabir : by the way where is manik

Nandini : manik koe imp. Meeting thi
He will come after sometime
Than they listen some voice coming from the main door and everybody reaches there and see that mukti is looking unconsious n nandini see that adi is standing beside her

Alai : wht happen to u

N mukti sit on couch

Nandini : adi !

Alai bring the water for mukti n mukti taking it say " u know him nandini "

Nandini : he is my frnd
Lekin tumhai kya hua n adi yha kya kr rhai hai

Mukti : i was standing at cosmetic shop n someone snatch my voilet from my hand n push me n he bring the bag also n me to here

Nandini hug him n say thanx adi n manik reaches n see nandini hugging adi n manik got angry

Cabir : dekho manik agya

Nandini turns n see him n she notice that manik got angry from adi precense

N manik went outside

Mukti : yeh manik ko kya hogya
But cabir knows that manik kyo gya hai

Nandini : ruko main dekh kr ati hn

Nandini come outside n see manik going toward his car n nandini holding his hand stops him "manik.. kya hua "

Manik : u r asking me wht happen
Yeh adi yha kya kr rhai , i told u na to stay away from him
Bolo nandini

Nandini : manik... calm down
Adi ko maine yha nhi bulaya adi mukti ko lekr aya
Somebody stolen her purse n Push her n than adi help her

Manik : i don't believe
Iske piche bhi uski koe chl hogi

Nandini : agr tum sach smjna hi nhi so it's k
Adhr toh chlo everybody is waiting for u

Manik : nandini tum kyo nhi smj rhi ho voh glt hai

Nandini : k main mn gye ki voh glt hai
Ab adr toh chlo

Manik unwillingly come inside n manik looks toward adi in angry way

Mukti : manik... tu bhr kyo chla gya tha

Manik : voh mukti ek imp. Call aa gya tha aur yha network nhi thai

Mukti : sit na

Manik sit on couch

Mukti : adi tum bhi bhetho na

Adi : nhi i have to go

Mukti : are thodhi dr

Manik : agr ushai jana hai jane do na mukti
Aur ladhiyan ki help bhi krni hogi isse
(Nandini looks toward manik giving expression to plz stop )

Cabir : haan mukti ushai jana hai toh jaane de

Mukti : okay
Bye n thank u again

Adi : bye..

Adi goes outside

Nandini phone rings n nandini also go outside to attend the call

Mukti : he is nice guy nandini
He help me a lot

Manik : i know voh kitna acha hai

Mukti : manik...
Tujhe ho kya gya hai

Cabir : tu chodh na mukti hum yha yeh boring bate thodhi na karne ae hai

N adi went outside n think yeh manik toh impress hi nhi hua
Meri sara pln khrb hogya
Socha tha manik impress hoga tabhi nandini se mil paunga
Kuch soch adi

N nandini sees him n adi also looks towards her

Adi : tum jo soch rhi ho voh glt
Hai

N nandini comes toward him n slaps him

Nandini : maine kabhi nhi socha tum itne gir jaoge
Manik was right that tum kabhi nhi sudhr skte

Adi : nandini suno toh shi

Nandini : i don't want to listen
Bs tum yha se chle jao

Adi goes becoz he don't have anything to convince him

N nandini come inside n all r talking

Nandini : manik..
I have to go home

Navya : nandini kya hua
Abhi tk toh sb thik tha

Mukti : haan

Manik goes to her n ask " wht happen nandini "

Nandini : plz manik mujhe ghr jana hai

Manik : okay hum abhi ghr chlte hai
Sorry fir kabhi milte hai

Manik n nandini reaches home

Manik : nandini hua kya hai

Nandini hug him n start crying n say "i m sorry manik "

Manik break the hug n hold her face n ask " nandini hua kya hai "

Nandini : manik U were right adi ka hi pln tha yeh sb
Voh tumhai impress karna chta hai

Manik : stop crying
Yeh toh kushi ki bt hai ki adi ki sach tumhai pta chl gya

Nandini : but manik maine tumhari bt nhi suni

Manik : nandini plz
It's okay

Manik take nandini in his arm
N nandini also hold him

N than manik leave nandini n holding her arm n say " now smile "

Nandini smile a lit bit

Manik : u know nandini
No matter how bad my day went, when you smile you make everything all right

Now nandini smiles properly n manik too

So the truth of adi is revealed infront of nandini... hope u guyz. Like the update..
Keep smiling
LOVE MEHAK


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Edited by Mehaklovely - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#68
Hi dear the update is nice finally nandu understans that adi is not good thank god u reveled and now no prblms between manan and thanks for the pm dear stay blesed
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Posted: 9 years ago
#69
Nice update...
Fiat nandu ko sach pata chal gya...
manik is soo caring...
luved it...
thnx for pm...
update soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#70
Aawiiee...at tyms manan r so cuttee😳😳
I lykd d scen when nandu slapped adi...wowhooo😊👏
Finally adi's truth is revealed...yayiie😉
Always keep writing😊

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